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I'll admit, I rounded it way up. According to the calculator I found, 50 meters is 164 feet, and half an inch. Still pretty massive.

Your Rank:
Academy
Name of Jutsu:
Satetsu: Koumajutsu Hanshinzou Ichi ( Iron Sand: Demon Invocation Half-length Statue One )
Rank of Jutsu:
D
Range of Jutsu:
N/a
Jutsu's Element:
Satetsu
Description:
The user gathers up a large portion of their iron sand and mold it into a perfect metalic humanoid form. It is complete with eyes with holes for pupils, functioning jaw, and regular statue imperviousness. The Statue is of an Oni. It ranges in sizedepending on the amount of sand available from a toddler's size, to that of a regular human. It's back is always hunched as if it were crouching, it's legs always bent much the same way. It suffers a reduced rank in speed due to it's metalic weight, and can not be used on water or on loose ground ( such as a marsh, ice, gravel, or sand dunes ). It has a Kanabo, as well as horns. It's curved muscular build allows it to divert projectiles that aren't ninjutsu based, and withstand unsolid or unheated ones.

The Oni is capable of simple attacks such as attempting to bludgeon someone with it's Kanabo, or even punches and kicks. The user can also manipulate it to charge in a straight line and attempt to run someone on it's inch long horns, or even bite through a person ( Although to get caught in it's teeth you'd have to let it grab you, and it would drop it's Kanabo, which can do hefty damage to the Oni, and make it let go and try to get it's weapon back by running after the thief and seeming to wail. ) The Oni's main weakness is High piercing projectiles, bludgeoning weapons made of stronger material than Iron ( Steel, titanuim... ), Fire, and Wind. ( it's a bit top heavy. )

It takes up 3 chakra for every turn it is kept functional after two posts. If the Oni is hit by a strong wind that is unnatural, it is toppled over, and will take one post to get back up, causing it to lose it's action. It will melt when hit with a C rank's worth of fire ( Basically one D rank and one E rank, or two D ranks to make it unusable as iron dust until the user can slavage it, or three E rank jutsu. WITHIN REASON, No poking it with Ichi three times and calling it good. )


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Your Rank:
Academy
Name of Jutsu:
Satetsu: Tetsubou Tsukinukeru ( Iron Sand: Iron rod to pierce/break through )
Rank of Jutsu:
B
Range of Jutsu:
N/a
Jutsu's Element:
Satetsu
Description:
The user uses their ability to control Iron ore to quickly force a small amount of their iron sand underground and have it appear out of the ground in the form of a pointed iron rod that is meant to pierce the opponent in a way that keeps them stationary with as little fatal injury as possible. the jutsu goes off one post after the user uses it, so the user has more time to pinpoint the target, or has enough time to get the target to stand still for an easy hit.

Extra rods can be created by giving up more Iron sand and paying four chakra each to use the jutsu. The rods can hold an opponent off of the ground, keeping them from moving this way, or they could go through a foot, and make the target have to either burn it off and slide their foot off, causing immense pain, jump and slide it off, still causing immense pain, or rip their foot clear of the rod, causing extreme pain.

The rods come out of the ground at fast speeds. They are about three centimeters in diameter and as tall as the user. The point is sharp enough that just touching it will p***k your finger enough to draw blood. That is the only lethal part of the rod as it is firmly attached to the ground. ( although a taijutsu user with SS rank strength can pull it from the ground where there is only 5 inches of bar, but it widens to 6 cm in diameter. )

Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Reverse Art of Pressing Pulp
Rank of Jutsu: D
Guild-Wide Jutsu: yes
Range of Jutsu: N/a
Jutsu's Element: Paper [ Water/Earth ]
Description: The user places chakra on to the paper they already wield and turn it back to it's original state, in other words, wood. This allows the paper user to give himself more diverse use for the paper, although it cannot be used for offensive reasons. [Ex. Molding the paper into a hammer and then using the technique to turn it into a giant wooden hammer, that's a big no no. ] Despite the similarities between Mokuton and Paper Manipulation this technique would grant the user, the fact that it cannot be used for attack, and any form of combat simply because it takes two posts to transform the paper into wood.
Basically anything can be done with this technique. Wodden Shuriken,Kunai, swords for training perpouses. Homes while the person is in missions, puppets/puppet parts [ No, this technique cannot be used to fix a puppet while in battle, unless you can get two posts without your enemy hitting you. ]

I hope it's enough Hirako... I'm not really feeling Rp-sampleish... If you want to though I'll make one, since I really want this technique for when I make my Origami no Dara App.

reverse art of pressing pulp: This definitely looks to me like it is just trying to give you access to Mokuton as well. Even if it is just mokuton. You'd probably think something similar if someone tried to make mokuton jutsu that could make paper that just happens to be useful for more than writing stuff. I personally don't see this jutsu being approved, but feel free to ask Duckmasta or Hinote for a second opinion.

Tetsubou Tsukinukeru: For some reason I was thinking C-rank. I still think that it would make more sense to simply add to the ammount the jutsu can create at once rather than decrease the cost for more, but if you want to keep it that way I suppose you can. I do however want a maximum ammount you can have.

@Cain: looking at the origami bloodline, it doesn't look like any of the other jutsu really care how much paper you have, so unless someone creates a new system that does so or I am misreading the BL, there is no reason for you jutsu to do so.

Timothy: I'm going to ask someone else to look at your jutsu. I'm not quite sure what to do with them.

EVERYONE: please edit this into your applications as additional fields.

Please respond in Pm, I want to keep these as true to my original plan as possible, but I also don't want to clutter this forum.

Hinote, The oni is top heavy, a chunin could punch it and knock it on it's back. it is just a pain to destroy. it can't get up once it gets knocked over. so basically unless the paerson comes within reach after knocking it over, it is useless. also as to the summon thing, I could make a summon, but since it is humanoid, it would be denied. also, don't several ninjas make little mosnter things from nothing in the actual show? ( I've never seen nor read most of the manga/ anime, so I'm in the dark here. )

And also, It isn't meant to do that, it isn't a percision hit technique, you just hit a general area. Such as you aim for a person's stomach, the easiest target. if they shift any once it goes out of the ground, you are probably going to miss. Really a chunnin could dodge it and obtain only a gash, a genin could dodge it and still be pierced, but only in the side, not the full stomach. Plus since it has a delay if you set the target and the person moves any from that position, then it misses. it has a delay before it appears, not before you put the sand in the area of where it will pierce. it is really a defencive technique. it is meant to stop Taijutsu users from using that stupid speed boost thing and heading straight for my character. Also, It cones out, ending in something twice the size of the original bar... So if you can pull something out of the ground that hasn't been worked, and weighs about fifty pounds, plus about one hundred more for the bar itself, add in resistance from the solid earth that basically just has a small hole in it, that's around three hundred pounds of pulling pressure. add in the fact that you are impaled on it, and in a considerable amount of pain, and if you pull up you use close to every muscle in your body causing yourself to have to move the injured area, I'd say only a person with SS taijutsu strength could fight through the pain, and still apply three hundred pounds of pulling force.

If you want, I'll ad the fact that the Oni can be pushed over by a chunnin's taijutsu attack srength, or by two consecutive genin taijutsu strikes, one to knock it off balance, and one to knock it over. you forget, it is constantly hunched over like it is crouching, and it is from a toddler size to the user's size. ( Which would be five feet since it is a personal. )

edited. And when these are accepted, I would like them to be placed in the Origami bloodline thread