|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:26 am
RevanStar .~[y.e.l.l.o.w]~. Meh, alot happened when i was away. O_o eh....just this and that O.o I wrote a poem aint that scary Oh, well, it looks like alot since there are loads of new places. And i'd be pleased to hear the poem. ^^
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:27 am
You throw me out like trash
My heart lay shaddered like glass
Restless days and sleepless nights
Tattered soul and eyes filled with fright.
You beat me with out mercy, heart black as cole
You took away what I held dear to me, like a kinfe it peirced my soul
So when you walk away, and I lay shaddered like my heart
And when you think you've won,
Just rememeber as your ******** a new b***h
With a single click boom, you'll be the one laying cold and shaddered on the floor
stare dont ask
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:29 am
RevanStar You throw me out like trash My heart lay shaddered like glass Restless days and sleepless nights Tattered soul and eyes filled with fright. You beat me with out mercy, heart black as cole You took away what I held dear to me, like a kinfe it peirced my soul So when you walk away, and I lay shaddered like my heart And when you think you've won, Just rememeber as your ******** a new b***h With a single click boom, you'll be the one laying cold and shaddered on the floor stare dont ask O_o I wont.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:29 am
Thats such a good poem! Its so....*tear tear* touching. gonk
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:30 am
RevanStar You throw me out like trash My heart lay shaddered like glass Restless days and sleepless nights Tattered soul and eyes filled with fright. You beat me with out mercy, heart black as cole You took away what I held dear to me, like a kinfe it peirced my soul So when you walk away, and I lay shaddered like my heart And when you think you've won, Just rememeber as your ******** a new b***h With a single click boom, you'll be the one laying cold and shaddered on the floor stare dont ask that so deep xd and hella coolie
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:31 am
Knave_Dark RevanStar You throw me out like trash My heart lay shaddered like glass Restless days and sleepless nights Tattered soul and eyes filled with fright. You beat me with out mercy, heart black as cole You took away what I held dear to me, like a kinfe it peirced my soul So when you walk away, and I lay shaddered like my heart And when you think you've won, Just rememeber as your ******** a new b***h With a single click boom, you'll be the one laying cold and shaddered on the floor stare dont ask that so deep xd and hella coolie Very deep indeed 3nodding
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:31 am
.~[y.e.l.l.o.w]~. RevanStar You throw me out like trash My heart lay shaddered like glass Restless days and sleepless nights Tattered soul and eyes filled with fright. You beat me with out mercy, heart black as cole You took away what I held dear to me, like a kinfe it peirced my soul So when you walk away, and I lay shaddered like my heart And when you think you've won, Just rememeber as your ******** a new b***h With a single click; boom of my gun, you'll be the one laying cold and shaddered on the floor stare dont ask O_o I wont. I just made it up and posted in at Tire's poetry corner like only a little bit ago...like 5 mins (Edits it a little)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:34 am
RevanStar I just made it up and posted in at Tire's poetry corner like only a little bit ago...like 5 mins (Edits it a little) Cool. ^^ I don't really write too much poetry now, i used to. O_o
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:36 am
xxv00d00b3arxx Knave_Dark RevanStar You throw me out like trash My heart lay shaddered like glass Restless days and sleepless nights Tattered soul and eyes filled with fright. You beat me with out mercy, heart black as cole You took away what I held dear to me, like a kinfe it peirced my soul So when you walk away, and I lay shaddered like my heart And when you think you've won, Just rememeber as your ******** a new b***h With a single click boom, you'll be the one laying cold and shaddered on the floor stare dont ask that so deep xd and hella coolie Very deep indeed 3nodding Not really....>.>; I'm not that good at writing...expestaily poeity....o.o I just wanted to write something more....... eek stare i donno
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:40 am
.~[y.e.l.l.o.w]~. RevanStar I just made it up and posted in at Tire's poetry corner like only a little bit ago...like 5 mins (Edits it a little) Cool. ^^ I don't really write too much poetry now, i used to. O_o ne...if you think that one is creepy...read this Crisom liquid on the ground Vacent eyes that look around Eyes wide open, but can not see Mouthes that hang in a silent screem Blades of death, bullets of hate Hands of vegence that loves to take Lands of beauty scared by war Needs of the many, deaths of more eek stare Its amazing what you can write after someone you know gets hurt
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:42 am
RevanStar ne...if you think that one is creepy...read this Crisom liquid on the ground Vacent eyes that look around Eyes wide open, but can not see Mouthes that hang in a silent screem Blades of death, bullets of hate Hands of vegence that loves to take Lands of beauty scared by war Needs of the many, deaths of more eek stare Its amazing what you can write after someone you know gets hurt Heh, i like that one. sweatdrop
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:44 am
.~[y.e.l.l.o.w]~. RevanStar ne...if you think that one is creepy...read this Crisom liquid on the ground Vacent eyes that look around Eyes wide open, but can not see Mouthes that hang in a silent screem Blades of death, bullets of hate Hands of vegence that loves to take Lands of beauty scared by war Needs of the many, deaths of more eek stare Its amazing what you can write after someone you know gets hurt Heh, i like that one. sweatdrop you like that poem??
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:44 am
RevanStar .~[y.e.l.l.o.w]~. RevanStar I just made it up and posted in at Tire's poetry corner like only a little bit ago...like 5 mins (Edits it a little) Cool. ^^ I don't really write too much poetry now, i used to. O_o ne...if you think that one is creepy...read this Crisom liquid on the ground Vacent eyes that look around Eyes wide open, but can not see Mouthes that hang in a silent screem Blades of death, bullets of hate Hands of vegence that loves to take Lands of beauty scared by war Needs of the many, deaths of more eek stare Its amazing what you can write after someone you know gets hurt Wow thats awesome eek
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:47 am
Eh.....its amazing what one can do with there hate for war and what not as their grandpa is rushed to the hospital with a open wound in his arm(Dont ask what happened. its gross.) stare
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:49 am
RevanStar Eh.....its amazing what one can do with there hate for war and what not as their grandpa is rushed to the hospital with a open wound in his arm(Dont ask what happened. its gross.) stare Eek wow that mustve been paiiiiiiiiiinful.. eek .......and yes i have hate for the war too..-_- *nods*
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
