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 Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:14 am
Sign me up to the subscribers' list.
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 5:00 am
Dammit I went to bed five minutes to early last night sweatdrop
Great Chapter seaphron I like the slightly depressing atmosphere and I find that even though a little slow this started out very well done, Great job I hope to see more of this story soon...or later, hell either way the Cult has a new story from Seaphron
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:12 am
I liked the start so far but it was a little slow. I am looking forward to how this story will progress. I am sure it will be as good as the last one or even better. xd
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:16 am
Hmm.
I just started readin, and I now regret having not read the first one.
Very moving.
P.S. Sign me up for the subscriber's list.
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:20 am
Hmm...so this is the sequel to your first one is it?
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:51 pm
@Maul - Oh yeah I kmnow what you are talking about (i think), isnt there a serpents road or something that leads across there?
@Draken - Thanks.
@Zen - Nice XD Glad you liked it.
@Tatsu - Added
@Sauvie - I noticed you logged out right after posting and thought "s**t..." Glad you liked the new chapter ~proud of self~
@Godstone - Thanks, I personally though don't think it will be as good.
@Demonix - Glad you liked the first bit, if you do intend to read the first story though that chapter kinda ruins it for you though XD Added to the list.
@Raui - Yes sir.
Chapter Two will be added shortly.
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:28 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:30 pm
I forgot to tell you to put me on the list dude.
Edit-Nice update too.
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:59 am
Good addition, but I wanted mooore. xD
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:29 am
Great chapter Seaphron so I am a leader... of a HQ wow I didnt see that one coming but I am a little curious on who took over Trenn's place this looks to be a great story so far and with a different concept so far as well you are good at this
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 9:29 am
Not bad. But wasn't Fish curious how he had the letter before that?
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:52 am
Meta Fish Not bad. But wasn't Fish curious how he had the letter before that? Good point. "Fish, we have a letter from your dead friends, they want to talk to you." "Hmm, I see nothing suspicious here."
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:26 pm
@Zen- Added and thanks wink
@Betman- The will eventually get longer, if you noticed CTG or any other writings I have done, they always begin small and grow larger.
@Sauvie- You really didn't see that coming? XD Wow I thought that was an obvious choice, oh well. You'll see who took over Trenn's place soon.
@Fish- Of course didn't portray that to well sweatdrop Think about the state you are in though at this point you aren't exactly thinking straight.
@Demonix- XD
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:39 pm
I wasn't trying to bag on you, it was just something I noticed.
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:56 pm
I liked the other world mirror, It gives you a chance to use people who are dead and give you more scope to work on. Well I loved this chapter and fish was in too much shock at first to wonder where it came from. biggrin
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