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BbOi_YoShI

PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 4:29 pm


Hey I haven't actually made a character yet, but May I give my rp example already?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 4:42 pm


@Yoshi: Of course :3

@Satasi: It's understandable and frankly quite a lot better! There's still a lot of grammar errors and it would be good if you could correct them but pass ;D

kouri-chan_xx
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satasi

PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 7:03 pm


sweet.....i passed.....=).....thanx..and i'll work on those errors
PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:30 pm


RP EXAMPLE
Sato sat at the ramen shop and order a bowl of pork ramen.Pork ramen is his favorite food to eat.The man walked infront of Sato and handed him the pork ramen.When he saw the bowl of ramen his eyes light up like to light bulbs.He grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started sucking down the ramen.

Sato_Uchiha


door2dalight

PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:51 am


My character's name is Mittsukawa no Kurogetsu from...hopefully Iwa.

RP Example:
His long hair blowing in the breeze, Kurogetsu leaned against the side of the academy, bored out of his mind. His friend had told him two days prior to meet him here at this time, and now he was late. Kurogetsu hated waiting possibly more than anything else. He removed a kunai knife from the holster on his leg and began to flip it around with his finger while he waited.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:53 pm


Alright, soo.. I'll be roleplaying a 12 year old academy student girl named... uhhh... o_o Hina [Just for now, haha >_>;;] and sorry if my roleplaying's a bit rusty. I haven't did any roleplaying in a long time [Like, 5 years >_<]... I'm sorry once again! <3 Oh, and I hope you don't mind, but there's a bit of god modding in here. Well, here it goes!

Hina skipped along the road of the village, singing in a sing songy tune. Today would be the day she would be graduating from the stupid academy school! She'll be free like the birds she saw soaring across the morning sky. She still couldn't believe it herself. She'll finally graduate! "I'm gonna graduate!!" She chirped loudly to the whole village, causing her emotions to explode out of her. Sure, Hina was thought of a mischevious little girl in the village but she just couldn't help it. Being happy was just her signature personality in the large village. And you know what? She liked herself just the way she was. When the girl finally reached the academy building, she stared at it intensly and grinned at it. She'll be getting out of here! No more boring lessons! No more tests! Just training training training to be a great ninja one day! Hina giggled to herself and burst open the door to let herself inside. "Hi everybody!!" She greeted happily to the rest of the graduating students in the room. Hina gave each and everyone of them a smile and got seated next to the window. "I'm going to free like you today!" She whispered to the birds that were chirping on a branch. The happy girl smiled at them and faced the teacher.

She glanced at them one more time, to see them fly off the branch and into the bright sky.

Today...

Hina would be free... just like the birds. She watched as a baby bird left the nest and flew off by itself, moving on... Perhaps that was what Hina was feeling inside of her.. But instead, her award would be becoming a ninja instead of the gift of flying.



The End. Hope you liked. =D Oh, and may I know which villages are the most active? >.> Thank you =O

delicate_moon


.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).

PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:57 pm


Sato_Uchiha
RP EXAMPLE
Sato sat at the ramen shop and order a bowl of pork ramen.Pork ramen is his favorite food to eat.The man walked infront of Sato and handed him the pork ramen.When he saw the bowl of ramen his eyes light up like to light bulbs.He grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started sucking down the ramen.

There's one mistake with spelling, and TECHNICALLY roleplaying ought to be in past tense...but the only complaint I really have is that it's rather short. Can you please add a few more sentences?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:59 pm


door2dalight
My character's name is Mittsukawa no Kurogetsu from...hopefully Iwa.

RP Example:
His long hair blowing in the breeze, Kurogetsu leaned against the side of the academy, bored out of his mind. His friend had told him two days prior to meet him here at this time, and now he was late. Kurogetsu hated waiting possibly more than anything else. He removed a kunai knife from the holster on his leg and began to flip it around with his finger while he waited.

This is very, very good. Pass. X3

.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).


.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).

PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 7:19 pm


delicate_moon
Alright, soo.. I'll be roleplaying a 12 year old academy student girl named... uhhh... o_o Hina [Just for now, haha >_>;;] and sorry if my roleplaying's a bit rusty. I haven't did any roleplaying in a long time [Like, 5 years >_<]... I'm sorry once again! <3 Oh, and I hope you don't mind, but there's a bit of god modding in here. Well, here it goes!

Hina skipped along the road of the village, singing in a sing songy tune. Today would be the day she would be graduating from the stupid academy school! She'll be free like the birds she saw soaring across the morning sky. She still couldn't believe it herself. She'll finally graduate! "I'm gonna graduate!!" She chirped loudly to the whole village, causing her emotions to explode out of her. Sure, Hina was thought of a mischevious little girl in the village but she just couldn't help it. Being happy was just her signature personality in the large village. And you know what? She liked herself just the way she was. When the girl finally reached the academy building, she stared at it intensly and grinned at it. She'll be getting out of here! No more boring lessons! No more tests! Just training training training to be a great ninja one day! Hina giggled to herself and burst open the door to let herself inside. "Hi everybody!!" She greeted happily to the rest of the graduating students in the room. Hina gave each and everyone of them a smile and got seated next to the window. "I'm going to free like you today!" She whispered to the birds that were chirping on a branch. The happy girl smiled at them and faced the teacher.

She glanced at them one more time, to see them fly off the branch and into the bright sky.

Today...

Hina would be free... just like the birds. She watched as a baby bird left the nest and flew off by itself, moving on... Perhaps that was what Hina was feeling inside of her.. But instead, her award would be becoming a ninja instead of the gift of flying.



The End. Hope you liked. =D Oh, and may I know which villages are the most active? >.> Thank you =O

I would like the first paragraph to be broken up a bit, but it's fine as-is. I believe I noticed some areas where you switched tenses, but it's not really anything to worry about unless you do it rather often. Pass.

The village status' can be found on the main page. One of the sticky threads.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:17 pm


.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).
Sato_Uchiha
RP EXAMPLE
Sato sat at the ramen shop and ordered a bowl of pork ramen.Pork ramen is his favorite food to eat.The man walked infront of Sato and handed him the pork ramen.When he saw the bowl of ramen his eyes light up like to light bulbs.He grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started sucking down the ramen.The first bit of ramen burnt his tongue but he continued to eat.His belly was hot when he was all finished.He paided the man for the ramen and walked off.He walked off very filled.

There's one mistake with spelling, and TECHNICALLY roleplaying ought to be in past tense...but the only complaint I really have is that it's rather short. Can you please add a few more sentences?

ok srry can you check it now

Sato_Uchiha


.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).

PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 3:15 pm


Sato_Uchiha
.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).
Sato_Uchiha
RP EXAMPLE
Sato sat at the ramen shop and ordered a bowl of pork ramen.Pork ramen is his favorite food to eat.The man walked infront of Sato and handed him the pork ramen.When he saw the bowl of ramen his eyes light up like to light bulbs.He grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started sucking down the ramen.The first bit of ramen burnt his tongue but he continued to eat.His belly was hot when he was all finished.He paided the man for the ramen and walked off.He walked off very filled.

There's one mistake with spelling, and TECHNICALLY roleplaying ought to be in past tense...but the only complaint I really have is that it's rather short. Can you please add a few more sentences?

ok srry can you check it now

No problem. Just remember to put enough detail for others to go off of, or roleplaying will be very slow. Pass.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 9:27 pm


.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).
Sato_Uchiha
.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).
Sato_Uchiha
RP EXAMPLE
Sato sat at the ramen shop and ordered a bowl of pork ramen.Pork ramen is his favorite food to eat.The man walked infront of Sato and handed him the pork ramen.When he saw the bowl of ramen his eyes light up like to light bulbs.He grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started sucking down the ramen.The first bit of ramen burnt his tongue but he continued to eat.His belly was hot when he was all finished.He paided the man for the ramen and walked off.He walked off very filled.

There's one mistake with spelling, and TECHNICALLY roleplaying ought to be in past tense...but the only complaint I really have is that it's rather short. Can you please add a few more sentences?

ok srry can you check it now

No problem. Just remember to put enough detail for others to go off of, or roleplaying will be very slow. Pass.

thank you

Sato_Uchiha


Zikaru94

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:56 pm


My Turn.

Zikaru walked through the streets with his hands in his pockets *I think I'm going to train at the training grounds* He then walked quietly to the training grounds.

Zikaru arrived at the training grounds and sees some dummys. Zikaru does the hand signs, Snake... Sheep... Monkey... Boar... Horse... Tiger. Stopping at Tiger, Zikaru sucked in chakra to his chest "Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" Zikaru released the fire from his mouth releasing all the chakra in his chest. The fire then burns down some dummys.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:31 pm


She licked her lips wetting them so that the light shimmered off them just right and then she teased the man across from her by running a strabery in the same path her tounge just went before slipping the strawberry into her mouth and sucking on it as she pulled it back out. She knew she had the mans attention now and he was as good as hers. Slowly she leaned forward and began to slide up him before sitting on his lap and droping a little somthing into his drink.
(probably one of the worst examples I have ever done but hey. redface )

XxXSmexyXxXNinjaXxX


.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.).

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:57 pm


Zikaru94
My Turn.

Zikaru walked through the streets with his hands in his pockets *I think I'm going to train at the training grounds* He then walked quietly to the training grounds.

Zikaru arrived at the training grounds and sees some dummys. Zikaru does the hand signs, Snake... Sheep... Monkey... Boar... Horse... Tiger. Stopping at Tiger, Zikaru sucked in chakra to his chest "Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" Zikaru released the fire from his mouth releasing all the chakra in his chest. The fire then burns down some dummys.

The only thing with your roleplay is that you go from past, to present, to past, to present tense. Can you please make it so that the entire thing is either past OR present?
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