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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:24 pm
your raps r useless, y try to chew beef when u gonna be toothless Im tired of rappin ******** b***h, ******** this shyt ima get ruthless
im air spittN hot shyt on the real, dont catch a heat stroke i spit from the steel 2, i fkin represent the east coast
You aint gonna beat me or ese_G, ull c when ur beat by 3 votes better start packin, believe me I wont even need to leave a post
oh just for the empty threat, I ******** kozu llike the slut i am and didnt tip he was beggin for the remedy, "one suck" aka kozu licked my p***y lips
Wanted to give me deep throat, only let him eat my a** hole ur right im a slut now kozu has every mans d**k on his tonsils
ask me why im so hostile, gato im tired of hearin punthas b***h please im ******** evo, beat ur slave a** fkin lookin like kunta
ull slit me? yeah ******** right kozus a b***h kozus a b***h kozus a b***h yeah ight i aint seen you ******** do shyt
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:01 am
i thought you didnt like to mention names of a b***h you call my son a b***h, then why'd you mention him?
see i wouldnt go that far as to disrespect your family i'll just bag on you, i have enough info see?
you're always here with "i'm the air" so you think people breathe you? no wonder all those mexicans came down with swine flu
you gonna leave me toothless? where have i heard that? you need to listen to me b***h when i tell you step back
i'm done with this one so i'll pass her to the next set and i'll let THEM ******** her brains out, if she has any left
and you'd think i'd be done with five but i wont stop until the last breath escapes me and to the ground i drop until then, i think i'll just keep going and going with my lyrics and my flowing crowd around coz now i'm showing that i'm blowing up, ******** being kind, how, would you expect me to be kind? you just woke the monster now and I broke Errianna down into a pool of blood and tears, live your life of dreams, and say hello to your nightmare look in my eyes coz i'm right here, ******** fear, thats how i do, 5 and a paragraph, and i'll give the floor back to you...
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 6:28 pm
oooo u so hard, yeah fkin right id beat ur a** soo bad they feature u on scarred yes im air, ur fkin breathin me to death like im ******** contaminated with SARS im off the charts you should know, the differences in our flows make me look above par You right im dont like mentioning bitches but i do what i have to gimme a sec want more evidence, well im still here battling wack rappers vept Bring your ******** flow i eat bigger shyt then u for breakfast consider this a break fest my flows disintegrate you like a fake old navy grey army vest I dont want your kindness this is battle rap now ******** nice rhyming think you in the wrong place ******** bad timing truck ur raps like a ******** linemen
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 3:40 am
feature me on scarred? like i need the publicity i'm lyrically superior to you -shrugs- guess they'd feature me on Mtv i'm done with setting mine right, i'll just do long a** paragraphs if nobody minds, aiight? by the way that was rhetorical, dont need no answer, i got this one right here, ladies n gents the tiny dancer, air prancer little ******** of a girl, thiniks shes swifter than the wind, tryna take the whole world, hope this aint getting to hard for you, aint getting too rough? even if yes is the answer you know i dont give a what? see i'm the type of guy that's not to be ******** messed with, but i guess it's me that Ese G and you ******** obsess with, why is it that when i rap, i have only you to contest with, i came here expecting to be messing with the best, s**t. I guess that I was wrong, a mission failure, guess i gotta go back to the drawing board in my trailer, but oh well i guess i can find somewhere else, dont be sad though this aint the last you heard from DIRTY SOUTH
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 10:26 am
stare man im tired of replying cuz u suck im higher thats y erri1 eying me, so wuts up? ur lifes a lie, the only jail you went to was in rp on gaiaonline i just wasted 4 lines, u weren't even worth the free net time yeah you dont need the publicity, what u need is lose ur virginity thats where i come in with the condom and rap rape explicity your skills come from the dirty south? well i have all ethnicities everyone knows that southern rap died a long time ago when u came here that was ur prime(that had to kill ur eago)
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 8:18 pm
hahaha killed my ego? you think you left me shattered? fine i guess i'll take to you with my axe, have your brains splattered or what little you have left in that air head of yours battling with you has become quite a bore
not a chore as such, it still brings me great joy see? i'm the big dog here, you're just a chew toy so you're tired of replying? you think JAX sux? then step down from the mic b***h coz i dont give a ********
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:30 pm
Wow I can feel the hate between you Vety you're just mad because she won't screw you Now you shouldn't talk to a lady that way But hell like you'll listen to what I say
You're a ******** idiot, you little piece of oprhan s**t Your parents left after 3 days, probably while taking a hit (Of weed idiot) Now come on with your little p***y threats I'm not scared of you no one is You need to stop posting your biz
People find out s**t about you Because you're a ******** idiot Vety, you just need to stop Stop before drop the bars and think You're the Titanic and you're about to sink.
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:30 pm
cracka... u aint in no ******** air force ***** I kill anybody anywhere no remorse
U can mess wit da nine but da grenades dont play I see yo mom all da time she drink my lemonade all day
I pop her p***y wit every rhyme so she invade my space I stand out like an a mutha ******** alien tryna invade space
I startin spittin n she almost fell down n died wit my records I I sell out n dont even try no competion here... Ima legend... I dont even die
*****... Ima mutha ******** OG ***** step back mutha ******** u dont no me Dont even try n reply... unless u havent told me
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:14 pm
VA Trey NGH 757? this place is for adults so your a** betta get to steppin whats this? your first rap? with peoples moms all day? well mines got standards and i know she doesnt play with little ******** like you, fact, driving trucks through you, gotta say it again "i dont give a ********" do you?
And Red n Silver Death, ********, i've said it before, b***h on MY birth parents again, i'll slash with no remorse you little manwhore WOAH did he just say what i think he said before? YES i did, YES you got it right but NO i wont go into a ******** fight of WORDS with you p***y, mine aint threats, they're all promises, say anything you want, i'm the man, that's what yo momma says
in all honesty, this place, makes me feel at home at least i know here, i'm not alone, there's lots of guys and gals repping da LOS and i bet even some tell truth and wear a bullet proof vest, my rhymes aint no joke, do you think i jest? i dont lie i tell the truth when i say i'm the best
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:30 pm
vetyp619, you are hereby banned from participating in the Diss the Rapper Above You sticky until we see some improvement or you agree to only post when you have more quality disses. No offense. However, you can still participate in the Rapper's Haven Freeflow sticky.
If you can win a battle against someone of who can atleast do these things, agree to only post when you have more quality disses or atleast show me that you've improved consistantly in insulting people, then I'll lift the ban and let you post in this sticky again.
I can see some improvements with your disses but afterward you reverted to your old style. Either post a diss with more effort or don't post at all.
Suggestions, talk less about yourself and focus more on dissing on your opponent. Get a variety of disses, spread them apart, like a new subject every verse, so the effect of your insults spread more deeply. Stay consistant in flow, lenghth and disses, try not to have verses all over the place, make it more neater.
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:21 am
Femmunition vetyp619, you are hereby banned from participating in the Diss the Rapper Above You sticky until we see some improvement or you agree to only post when you have more quality disses. No offense. However, you can still participate in the Rapper's Haven Freeflow sticky. If you can win a battle against someone of who can atleast do these things, agree to only post when you have more quality disses or atleast show me that you've improved consistantly in insulting people, then I'll lift the ban and let you post in this sticky again. I can see some improvements with your disses but afterward you reverted to your old style. Either post a diss with more effort or don't post at all. Suggestions, talk less about yourself and focus more on dissing on your opponent. Get a variety of disses, spread them apart, like a new subject every verse, so the effect of your insults spread more deeply. Stay consistant in flow, lenghth and disses, try not to have verses all over the place, make it more neater. rofl
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:14 am
It's nothing personal, we just need the Diss the Rapper Above You sticky functioning enough to crown a King or Queen, we can't do that when you constantly reply with verses that aren't even disses, if you agree only to post disses that pertain to the opponent and try to improve, I wouldn't feel the need to ban you from the sticky.
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:42 am
I'm not a fan of kickin a man when he's down but here it comes BAM you technically knocked out i didnt even have to diss you again to win this battle i didnt even have to b***h they know i round this cattle
vept if your ego wasnt shatered before here it goes it should be battered in gore I've been giving suggestions and help apparently ur nothing worth bein dealt
your flows are a mess like hurricane they should name you floyd not only because of ur flow but when u hitting you touching boys ***** ******** on out of her go find your wack bum a** some poise in the mean time ill here doing what we both do raping boys the differences you like to get physical physical you like to get physical (XD the song) I was gonna make another line to go with it but ******** it you cant make a comeback to win even if you could it wouldnt be a come back. XD
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:18 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:56 pm
vetyp619
What the ******** r u... a fox? u not good at spittin might as well go back 2 suckin cocks ... u aint gon ******** no girls... so go back to ******** socks *****... I ******** rock
I make you feel so bad... I end ur career in rap... I am the pioneer Asap... cheer up... no sighin here
you being a rapper... is like me finding a 4 leaf clover ... u aint nutin.... go back to ur moreover I walk around gun in my wasit hole in my shoulder Till I bust a clip in yo face p***y dis battle aint over
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