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 Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:28 pm
Gregar828 iAku-kun Hinote Tosatsu Combination jutsu are jutsu that require two different elements to use. Not a jutsu created by clashing two existing jutsu together. Not necessarily... Yes, the main stream way to do it is this, but, you can combine jutsu of the same element to give it a boost. No, that is not how it works. Combination Jutsus require two different-element jutsus to be considered a combination jutsu. Oh so if you user the water manipulation jutsu, along with the water dragon jutsu to make several whips come out of the dragon's body it isn't a combination jutsu?
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:31 pm
No Akura, that is what we generally call "Impossible".
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:41 pm
iAku-kun Gregar828 iAku-kun Hinote Tosatsu Combination jutsu are jutsu that require two different elements to use. Not a jutsu created by clashing two existing jutsu together. Not necessarily... Yes, the main stream way to do it is this, but, you can combine jutsu of the same element to give it a boost. No, that is not how it works. Combination Jutsus require two different-element jutsus to be considered a combination jutsu. Oh so if you user the water manipulation jutsu, along with the water dragon jutsu to make several whips come out of the dragon's body it isn't a combination jutsu? No, mainly because A) You cant do that with water manipulation in the first place, B) The jutsus are too far apart in rank to be assigned a rank as a combination Jutsu, and C) A combination jutsu is a jutsu that uses two jutsu of separate elements for a new effect.
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Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:44 pm
Alright then, if you guys say so...
@ Hinote: I don't see why that would be impossible. That would actually be a something very helpful in a jam.
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Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:00 am
Name of Jutsu: Basic Chakra Drain
Rank of Jutsu: E
element: Bug
Description: The bug user sends bugs to attach themselves to a target and drain their chakra. This is a straightforward attack, and is rather easy to see coming.
Rp Sample Nagisa decided to keep things simple for this battle. She was needed to take care of this ninja quickly, but he couldn't be more than a genin. If she could simply place some bugs on him, she could put enough of a drain to take care of what was left of his chakra. Of course, she could just wait for him to waste the rest of his chakra with his useless jutsus, but it wasn't worth the risk. Throwing her hands towards the target, a group of bugs flew from each sleeve, and latched onto the poor ninja.
Name of Jutsu: Kikaichuu Soldier
Rank of Jutsu: S
element: Bug
Description: The user creates an 8 foot tall humanoid using all of his/her bugs. This creature has taijutsu skills two ranks slower than the user's, but his attacks as hard as an average ninja of the use's rank. It cannot use any nin/genjutsu including Aburame jutsu. The user cannot use other Aburame jutsu while the soldier is formed. The soldier grabs it's target(s) and wraps around them draining their chakra and squeeze them at the same time. Takes One S-ranked jutsu, 3 A-ranked jutsu, 4 B-ranked jutsu or 6 C-ranked jutsu to force the soldier to break up. Lasts up to 3 posts when not "feeding". (otherwise normal Aburame drainign rules apply)
Rp Sample Mushi Aburame stared down at the Jounin who had disturbed the peace of his village. Attempting to kill any of Mushi's comrades was unforgiveable, and the payment would be taken quickly. His Kikaichuu beetles were already waiting, ducking and weaving around Mushi in a slow flowing wave. Mushi closed his eyes and focused, instructing the many many bugs to form together. This move was the forbidden jutsu of the Aburame clan for good reason. As the bugs clustered together, eventually they began to take form, into a giant abomination. Standing in front of the Aburame Sannin stood an 8 foot mass of bugs, it's skin literally crawled as the bugs moved constantly to keep the monster together. It took several steps towards the Jounin and snatched him as he attempted to attack it. "It was foolish of you to anger an Aburame master, even more foolish to do it without knowing what I am capable of" Mushi snarled, the mass of bugs held the man, as they surrounded him, crushing him as they feasted upon his chakra. The jounin would surely survive, but if he could not break the jutsu he wouldn't have enough chakra to pose much of a threat.
Name of Jutsu: Chakra Destruction
Rank of Jutsu: D
element: Bug
Description: By sending their bugs onto a chakra item such as chakra strings or chakra blade, the bugs can drain the chakra out of the weapon rendering it useless. Can destroy E-ranked items in 1 post +1 post for every additional rank. Does not affect B-rank+ jutsus at all. Every post the bugs eat, the chakra item becomes one rank weaker. Obviously cannot work against projectiles like a fireball.
Rp Sample Nagisa hid in her tree, as she began to plan. There was a way she knew to disable those puppets, at least for a moment or two. It would be difficult to do it properly. After several moments spent thinking, Nagisa had it. Not a moment too soon either, as she could hear the puppets getting closer as they searched the area. Nagisa stepped out onto the branch and shouted, "Alright it's time we finish this!" and of course the puppets came flying. The first puppet slashed at her with that damned poison blade, narrowly missing her shoulder by centimeters, as the second tried to capture her in it's shell again. The only trouble was, she was expecting it this time. When the second came close, nagisa grabbed the arms, and used it's own momentum to send it flying into the first. Just before she let go, she managed to get a nice build up of bugs on the puppet. The bugs moved quickly, some of them spreading to the second puppet while they went flying through the trees, and then they started chewing at the chakra strings that let the puppeteer use them. Not only were they quickly making his tools useless (for now), but as they spread out on the chakra strings, they made a nice little pointer towards the puppetmaster.
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Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 1:19 pm
Alright, fine guys, I'll do the customs.
@Aku: You DO Realize that a plus ranked jutsu does not cost additional chakra, right? Plus ranked jutsu denote that you cannot learn the jutsu before you reach that rank.
Lightning Core: This simply powers up any lightning attack by a full rank? No, I can forsee major problems in trying to combine that with any bloodline/ninja type/profession bonuses.
Black Panther: 50 meters is not far from the user?
Retribution: Again, 50 meters is waaaay too much. If the range were decreased a lot and the ability to break a Flame barrier taken out, this could be a good jutsu.
Scattered blade: This is turning a Taijutsu Style into a Weapon style. The whole point of Shunko (From what I gather) is to move as fast as you can, and a blade would just weigh you down.
Puppets: This allows you to use Shunko AND a puppet? Aren't puppet users supposed to be, y'know, standing still in order to maintain control of the puppet?
@Hikaro: I need a counter for the Chakra Drain. Just saying it drains chakra is far, far too vauge.
Soldier: Two ranks lower, but hits twice as hard? A Saanin using this would have a soldier that hits like an S++ (DISCLAIMER: This rank does not exist formally). Other than that, this is good so far.
Chakra Destruction: This is great, but it should be reworded to say that the bugs cannot eat something like a projectile. A fire sword, yes, a fireball, no.
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Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:09 pm
-you weren't aware of the whole Aburame system re-working? (though i'm not 100% pleased with it, it does have a system now) all of the chakra drain info is in the clan info.
Soldier: how about as hard as an average ninja of the use's rank then? or perhaps as hard as an S or A rank ninja?
destruction: nice call, I can see some moron trying to use it that way...
Edited: edits in red
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 4:07 am
Lightning Core: Then just say bonuses with this technique cannot be staked, it's not all that hard... All I want is some badass black lightning for my Oto ninja, is that too much to ask?
Black Panther: It's not really that much. Concidering it's a panther and that it can clear it in what? A jump or three?
Retribution: Is 25 meters okay then?
Scatter Blade: Not really. I'm just trying to have something that suits my Rpc more while in shunko. Since shunko is used to go fast and hit really really hard.
Puppets: No, not really...
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 1:25 pm
@Hikaro:  @Akura: Lightning Core: You COULD just have a black chakra color, if you want black lightning that bad. And as I was typing this, I realized that no one else other than me HAS a chakra color section. I'll be changing that on the profile guide momentarily after submitting this. Panther: Akura, lets go over this: FIFTY METERS. Unless you're Godzilla, I cannot see how fifty meters would be considered "close." And since it says in your description that the panther MUST stay close to the user, fifty meters is far too long. Retribution: If you intend to use this lightning like a Sith Lord, I would say the maximum would be 10 meters, about 5 car lengths. Scattered Blade: It simply seems like you're trying to adapt Shunko to all situations, which is not what we have customs for. I'll speak to Jade as to whether a blade would be allowed or not. Puppets: Given the intense speed of Shunko, and the precision needed to use puppets, I cannot allow this. Repost when you're done with revisions.
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:02 pm
Gregar828 Panther: Akura, lets go over this: FIFTY METERS. Unless you're Godzilla, I cannot see how fifty meters would be considered "close." And since it says in your description that the panther MUST stay close to the user, fifty meters is far too long. Retribution: If you intend to use this lightning like a Sith Lord, I would say the maximum would be 10 meters, about 5 car lengths.Scattered Blade: It simply seems like you're trying to adapt Shunko to all situations, which is not what we have customs for. I'll speak to Jade as to whether a blade would be allowed or not. I just read this and laughed until I cried. I don't know if anyone else thinks it was funny, but that just made my night. Thank you, Gregar828 for your unattainable level of dry hilarity.
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Wealthy Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:06 pm
iShay-chan Gregar828 Panther: Akura, lets go over this: FIFTY METERS. Unless you're Godzilla, I cannot see how fifty meters would be considered "close." And since it says in your description that the panther MUST stay close to the user, fifty meters is far too long. Retribution: If you intend to use this lightning like a Sith Lord, I would say the maximum would be 10 meters, about 5 car lengths.Scattered Blade: It simply seems like you're trying to adapt Shunko to all situations, which is not what we have customs for. I'll speak to Jade as to whether a blade would be allowed or not. I just read this and laughed until I cried. I don't know if anyone else thinks it was funny, but that just made my night. Thank you, Gregar828 for your unattainable level of dry hilarity. ..........May I ask why its funny?
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 7:16 pm
Gregar828 iShay-chan Gregar828 Panther: Akura, lets go over this: FIFTY METERS. Unless you're Godzilla, I cannot see how fifty meters would be considered "close." And since it says in your description that the panther MUST stay close to the user, fifty meters is far too long. Retribution: If you intend to use this lightning like a Sith Lord, I would say the maximum would be 10 meters, about 5 car lengths.Scattered Blade: It simply seems like you're trying to adapt Shunko to all situations, which is not what we have customs for. I'll speak to Jade as to whether a blade would be allowed or not. I just read this and laughed until I cried. I don't know if anyone else thinks it was funny, but that just made my night. Thank you, Gregar828 for your unattainable level of dry hilarity. ..........May I ask why its funny? I really have no idea. It might have something to do with the fact that I am a Star Wars nerd and that I love you for making a reference. It might have something to do with the fact that I'm overly exhausted. Or it might have something to do with the fact that I read it out loud to myself and it was just very funny. I've never ever heard a comparison between things stated in such a frank manner.
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Wealthy Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 8:59 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:29 pm
Lightning Core: I just like that one D: What if I just make the cost be one rank + since it's increasing the power of the jutsu?
Panther: What about 25m? And greg, I've ran 50m, it's not that much... I run 50m every day from one side of my house to the other...
Retribution: Yes, that was what I was thinking. And sure, 10 meters it is.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:38 pm
Gotta say, I wish I had your house. Cause a 200ft house is, oh, four or five times the average. (Average is 20-40, or so I'd say, from experience in foundation work.) But fifty meters is a very large distance for any attack. 25 is still quite large. I suppose the deciding factor would be the speed this attack is going though. How fast is it exactly? I can't find it in the review window, so you kind of need to repost.
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