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 Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:47 pm
Zero yelled in agony as orochimaru put the tatao on his arm as he out it on his arm zero yelled then when he looked at orochimaru then look at him arm orochimaru was not even half done after a hour of yelling and screaming orochimaru was finally done and "zero thats it it done now cut your hand and"orochimaru was interupted as zero said"cut my hand what are you crazy"zero said as he jumped back"you fool you did not let me finish you cut your hand then you wipped the blood on your arm and then you call fourth the snake"orochimaru said as he thought what was he getting into with a innorant kid"ok.....here goes nothin"zero pulled out a kunai as he was about to cut his hand and he stoped out of fear
Earth Flow River 2/9
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:49 pm
[.-Forsaken-.] Ace Zero Zero was walking in the afterlife when"you there nara hmm...seems like you want to go back to earth well then i know the secret but you must amuse me in the processss you can gets some training so do you want to do it"orochimaru said in a slimey soft voice as he walked over to zero and moved his hair out his face"come my child we have much to learn as you seek the exam right"orochimaru said"um....yes yes i want to pass"zero said as he followed orochimaru"kid Whats your name"orchimaru said"my name is Nara Zero"zero said"your the sound kage orochimaru if i am not mistaken"zero said"i am gonna teach you a summon called the mandra summon"orochimaru said as he grabbed zero arm and put some kind of tatao on it mandra summon1/20 Quote: -= Mod wrote: =- Alright I'm getting irritated, none of those techniques count until you fix them. So go back and fix all of your posts or your techniques won't be added. Everyone in this guild puts effort into their posts, its not fair that you get these techniques putting low quality nothingness into your posts. There is nothing about any of your posts that have any form to it at all. Which is sad. So basically all you have are tons of syllables forming words that half are misspelled and none in the right place. Make them into sentences and Add punctuation. That is all. whats is your problem do u have issues or somthing do u hate me u know what u just made me quit this guild
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:55 pm
Ace Zero [.-Forsaken-.] Ace Zero Zero was walking in the afterlife when"you there nara hmm...seems like you want to go back to earth well then i know the secret but you must amuse me in the processss you can gets some training so do you want to do it"orochimaru said in a slimey soft voice as he walked over to zero and moved his hair out his face"come my child we have much to learn as you seek the exam right"orochimaru said"um....yes yes i want to pass"zero said as he followed orochimaru"kid Whats your name"orchimaru said"my name is Nara Zero"zero said"your the sound kage orochimaru if i am not mistaken"zero said"i am gonna teach you a summon called the mandra summon"orochimaru said as he grabbed zero arm and put some kind of tatao on it mandra summon1/20 Quote: -= Mod wrote: =- Alright I'm getting irritated, none of those techniques count until you fix them. So go back and fix all of your posts or your techniques won't be added. Everyone in this guild puts effort into their posts, its not fair that you get these techniques putting low quality nothingness into your posts. There is nothing about any of your posts that have any form to it at all. Which is sad. So basically all you have are tons of syllables forming words that half are misspelled and none in the right place. Make them into sentences and Add punctuation. That is all. whats is your problem do u have issues or somthing do u hate me u know what u just made me quit this guild Wow, I don't have a problem with you, I just asked you to fix your paragraphs. There is not one period in any of them. Thus making them run-ons, but they can't be run-on sentences cause they aren't sentences, so I don't know what to call them. If you wish to quit the guild because you are asked to fix your paragraphs, then go ahead, I doubt you'll find another Naruto guild as leniant as we are.
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:18 pm
This time zero took the kunai and closed his eyes then slashed his hand and whiped it over the tatao and tryed to call foruth the mandra"hmm...aeem your not strong enough yet kid your gonna have to train more but i will help you out with that"orochimaru said with a sneaky and soft voice as he touched zero face"can you please stop touching me"zero said as he jumped back and orochimaru did the same"you ready kid"orochimaru said as his sleeves got long and zero ran at him with speed"you pretty fast kid but not fast enough"orochimaru said and he moved funny me he moved side to side like a snake zero was getting cunfused as he done it zero had jumped back some he did not know what orochimaru was about to do and zero stuck to the wall away from orochimaru
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:20 pm
[.-Forsaken-.] Ace Zero [.-Forsaken-.] Ace Zero Zero was walking in the afterlife when"you there nara hmm...seems like you want to go back to earth well then i know the secret but you must amuse me in the processss you can gets some training so do you want to do it"orochimaru said in a slimey soft voice as he walked over to zero and moved his hair out his face"come my child we have much to learn as you seek the exam right"orochimaru said"um....yes yes i want to pass"zero said as he followed orochimaru"kid Whats your name"orchimaru said"my name is Nara Zero"zero said"your the sound kage orochimaru if i am not mistaken"zero said"i am gonna teach you a summon called the mandra summon"orochimaru said as he grabbed zero arm and put some kind of tatao on it mandra summon1/20 Quote: -= Mod wrote: =- Alright I'm getting irritated, none of those techniques count until you fix them. So go back and fix all of your posts or your techniques won't be added. Everyone in this guild puts effort into their posts, its not fair that you get these techniques putting low quality nothingness into your posts. There is nothing about any of your posts that have any form to it at all. Which is sad. So basically all you have are tons of syllables forming words that half are misspelled and none in the right place. Make them into sentences and Add punctuation. That is all. whats is your problem do u have issues or somthing do u hate me u know what u just made me quit this guild Wow, I don't have a problem with you, I just asked you to fix your paragraphs. There is not one period in any of them. Thus making them run-ons, but they can't be run-on sentences cause they aren't sentences, so I don't know what to call them. If you wish to quit the guild because you are asked to fix your paragraphs, then go ahead, I doubt you'll find another Naruto guild as leniant as we are. also the mods had nothin to say about it so why dont u mind you buissness and it wont be nothin aright
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:30 pm
Zero ran on the wall at orochimaru as he pulled out a windmill shurikan and threw it at orochimaru then orochimaru grabbed it and "your gonna have to do better than that if you want to beat me"orochimaru said as he stood there like a wall"huh? i have to beat you that would take forever even if i was strong enough well i gotta try"zero said as he ran at him again and this time he stop right before him and jumped over him and then jumped back over him but in the air he used kage bushin no jutsu and summon 2 clnes and then use the flying thunder god to take cover as the clones exploded as they fell doen 1 in front of orochimaru and 1 behind him orochimaru could not be seen in the smoke but zero threw 2 shurikans anyway just to make sure
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:40 pm
Orochimaru appeared out the smoke unharmed "u think a lengedary ninja would fall that easy"orochimaru said as he ran a zero again and confused him and zero jumped back again he did not want to let him get close there was no telling what he could do zero."hey whats that"zero said as he threw a kunai and it went pass orochimaru and he looked the way of the kunai and he felt a kick to the face and orochimaru got up off the ground and stood there"you past u can go to the kage and train with him the 3rd remeber that"orochimaru said as he left"ok...............um be "zero said as he walked toward the kage he had wanted to learn more skills and get back to life so he could get to the chunin exams but he had no idea when it is
5/9Earth Flow River
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:45 pm
Zero walked p to the kage and then"you ready kid"the kage said as he got up and use the Earth Flow River and zero jumped back he did not want to fall in his pit not yet at least then the kage said"i am not wasting any time and you should not either"as he made the mud turn into a earth dragon and it shot mud at zero and zero kept jumping back into he ran into a wall and he jumped to the right"man he is not giveing me any time to perform jutsu"how am i suppose to do anything Zero had thought then he threw to kunais at the kage 1 to his right then 1 to his left and the kage looked to the left as soon as it happened zero used kage bushin no jutsu as the kage looked back and seen 12 zero running at him 1 by 1 he dispatch him and there were 5 left as they ran at the kage
6/9Earth Flow River
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:48 pm
As the clones ran at the kage the kage made a wave of mud and it smashed on the clones and they exploded and made a whole threw the mud and zero jumped threw it and kicked the kage but the kage blocked it"your an old man you shoul not have moves like that"zero said as he contiue to attack"hmm i was a kage u should know i would be strong even at old age"the kage said and he jumped back and shot fireballs out his mouth and zero did the same to counter his and then zero jumped back and made a ball of rasengan and then summon an clone and used him as a shelied and then the clne was dispatch
7/9
Earth Flow River
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:58 pm
Zero got close to the kage then he tried to put the kage with the rasengan but the kage was faster and jumping back then summoned king emmna and zero hit the summon with the rasengan and then king emma fell into the kage and it was a mud clone that zero shoukld have notice earlier as zero used his sound wave to hear the kage heart beat then he ran toward the lage and he haerd the wind btween th kage punch and he dodge the kage attack and zero jumped back and threw 2 shurikan and the kage deflected it with a kunai and the metal sound ring hurt zero ears zero fell to the ground and trned it off"u gotta be carefull what jutsu u use then combine with another to cancel out the weakness"the kage said as he stood there
Earth Flow River 8/9
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 7:03 pm
Zero got up with his ears bleeding and zero wipped it off and then ran at the kage and threw some more shriakans and the kage deflected it again and then he stoped and felt the dynamic entry to the face and he hadthought behind his opponet he thought the sound would hurt his ears again but they did not they zero was caught in the Earth Flow River and zero copy the hands signs and did the Earth Flow River on the kage and the kage was impressed"you pass now i think you would want to learn more moves"the kage said as he relased his Earth Flow River and zero relased his Earth Flow River and the kage went to go sit down and zero wanted to learn more but was not sure when
9/9 Earth Flow River
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 11:21 pm
Zero and the kage trained more then the kage decided to test zero again so this time he wanted zero to master a new skill and zero was ready the kage was going to teach him Earth Dragon Projectile that took the power of the mud that was going to be a hard skill for zero to learn but it would take some time and zero was ready the kage had gave zero a test with questions on it and zero had to slove the puzzles and zero was lazy but smart at this type of thing so zero sat down and the kage had written on a peice of papers the qestions and zero was given the paper and a pencil to answer the question zero did not know what he was getting into it was 20 questions and this was going to be a hard test be zero had grabbed his pencil and hoped
1/10Earth Dragon Projectile
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:38 am
on the test there was
1.What is best to throwa shurikan or kunai .Zero put shurikan because you get more than kunais
2.What Village is the raikage from?Zero put the village hidden in the
3.Name 3 of the great shadows?Zero put the fire shadow,the lightning shadow and the Water shadow
4.Name the 3 lendary sannin.Zero put jiraya,tsundae and orochimaru
5.Name 5 of the villages.zero put the hidden sound village,the hidden leaf village,the hidden snow village,the hidden cloud and the hidden grass
zero had to take a breack from the test as it seem it was easy to him but he was tired
2/10
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:43 am
Zero was done taking a break for doing nothin he wandit to do the test some more seeming that it was easy
6.What do you have to do to become a chunin?Zero put you have to pass the exam or show that you are chunin level already
7.What country is the leaf village in?Zero put the leaf village is in fire country
8.What is the hyuuga bloodline and what does it do.zero was stumped he never seen a hyuuga in action so zero put there eyes are there bloodline and it enable them to see stuff that other with out byukan cant zero had sat down and was goingto take a nap from how boring the test was but he had to finish if he wandt to prove he was ready
3/10
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:47 am
zero grabbed his pencil again and started to do the test to finish it but it was soo long and he was soo bored
9.Who was the fourth hokage students?zero also was stumped but he put kakashi,uchiha obito,and tin
10.How did kakashi get his sharingan eye?zero put obito gave it to him as a present when he became jonin because he had got kakshi nothin and he was about to die and kakashi needed to save rin the healing nin zero was ready to take a break because he was lazy and like to do nothing and he sat there and looked at what he had called a sky but he was in the afterlfe
4/10
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