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Hiro Knight Kansei

PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 12:16 pm


Hokai,I think...wait,I KNOW I am ready razz
I have said this before,but I am not sure if jutsu is custom or not,but I will use my favorite as my RP example.

RP sample
Hiro sat on opposite sides of his scroll in the medium sized room,he stared at it,wondering when it would be when he would be truly called upon to use its power.The scroll,when opened,produced his signature Massive Puppet Jutsu.Hiro shrugged off the combined feeling of terror and anticipation and walked across the room and holstered the scroll.Before leaving his house,he checked his calender, "Yep,today is the day",he whispered to himself before opening the door and heading toward the academy.


(I hope that was good,I didnt want to put to much into the character until it was approved!)
PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 8:15 pm


Yo!

My name is Mugan and I will go whare needed. (Personally I Like Kanoha.)


Example

Mugan was tired he had been training for 7 hours strait. Mugan Fell on his Butt and sighed "This is a real pain... Why did sensai need me to do all of this if I dont even have good chackra control?" Mugan stood up and leaned on the training dummie. "I bet I'm about to pass out..." Laughed mugan as he felt lightheaded. "aw... Dang." and with that everything went black.

Approve me as Fast as possible. I Want to RP!!

Mugan Von Hellscream


kouri-chan_xx
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Noob

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 5:09 am


Sorry for the wait ^_^ thanks for being so patient Ieviathan XD

It's understandable <<; Your sample I mean. But so full of grammar errors.. D: But no spelling errors ^^ After a comma or full stop you have a space lol. Unless it's your computer?

Haha it should be a full stop at the end of 'he checked his calender'.

But anyway, the language standard is OK, but if you do the punctuation changes it'll be so much easier to read XD Pass ^^

@Kazucoon: Ah Konoha huh.. <<; It's sort of empty at the moment. Heh..
Hmmm well this is another classic example of 'you never use the word he'. It gets a little repetitive with all the 'Mugen's ^^ Oh and you capitalise at weird moments... A few spelling errors but still understandable. Of course it would be better if you changed it XD But more RPing naturally brings more experience :3 So pass ^^
PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:22 am


Ok, the name of my character is Drake.
Here is the rp sample:

Drake ran through the corridors of the academy. He was late for class again and the sensei had already warned him a few times before. He barged into the classroom gasping and almost fell over his own feet. the girls in front of the classroom started laughing because of his clumsy appearance. he felt horirble. Another disgrace in front of all his classmates. He slowly walked to his place and ignored the teasing of his neighbours.

(Sorry about the small post.)

Bigmyth


hell_life

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 6:59 pm


kk ill just make a new sample of mi character which is sakamoto. (he likes being called saka

As Sakamoto leaves his room to get ready for training he hears annoying sounds. The sounds come from the sink. As Sakamoto go to the source of the dripping to his surprise it was blood. On the walls was a letter in blood that was freshly painted. It was now startting to dripoff the wall to the floor. As Saka reads the message he relizes there is someone out there that does not want him to be a ninja. As soon as the message is read he leaves the room and wounders why would someone not want him to be a ninja. As soon as he came back to the source of the dripping there was only blood on the floor but the bloody writing seemed to vanish. As Saka relizes it he knows a ninja hates all others outside of his country and threatening those who were going to we a newly aquired ninja. Saka new what to do. He simply closed his eyes and opened them and as soon as he did that he cleard his mind of interuption and speedily went to the ninja exam to finally become what he wanted to be his whole life, a ninja!

I hope that was good (if it is a little choppy or confusing ill try to correct it or explain because you might just not get it where as another might ^_^)
PostPosted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:23 pm


The wind was harsh and cold and the rain pelted her like bullets.

Sai sighed and shook her head vigirously trying to keep her hair from falling into her line of sight. Using both hands she swept her hair out of her face in both directions and pouted.

"Stupid rain.", she though, glaring at the sky. "Of all the days you could have rained, you chose today!" She shook her fist at the sky. Leaning back on the branch of the old oak tree, she 'hmph'ed, and crossed her arms, still glaring at the sky.

"Rain..Rain...Go away... Come again another day...." Sai couldn't help but giggl as she sang the old nursery tune she remembered her father mumbling under his breath when he use to work outside in the rain.

"...Maybe some day....I'll see him again?" Sai pondered to herself. she stopped glaring at the sky and looked down, letting her hair hang in her face to cover her silent but steady tears that began to flow.

saikiyoumi2


kouri-chan_xx
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Noob

PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 6:53 pm


@Saikiyoumi: I loved it!! Pass!

@hell_life, Bigmyth: The sentences are really short, and thusly it sounds really well choppy >< Could you make it sound better? Flow, and all that.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 6:21 pm


hell_life
kk ill just make a new sample of mi character which is sakamoto. (he likes being called saka

As Sakamoto leaves his room to get ready for training he hears annoying sounds. The sounds come from the sink. As Sakamoto go to the source of the dripping to his surprise it was blood. On the walls was a letter in blood that was freshly painted. It was now startting to dripoff the wall to the floor. As Saka reads the message he relizes there is someone out there that does not want him to be a ninja. As soon as the message is read he leaves the room and wounders why would someone not want him to be a ninja. As soon as he came back to the source of the dripping there was only blood on the floor but the bloody writing seemed to vanish. As Saka relizes it he knows a ninja hates all others outside of his country and threatening those who were going to we a newly aquired ninja. Saka new what to do. He simply closed his eyes and opened them and as soon as he did that he cleard his mind of interuption and speedily went to the ninja exam to finally become what he wanted to be his whole life, a ninja!

I hope that was good (if it is a little choppy or confusing ill try to correct it or explain because you might just not get it where as another might ^_^)


As Sakamoto leaves his room to get ready for training he hears annoying sounds. The sounds come from the sink that is located in the kitchen. As Sakamoto go to the source of the dripping to his surprise it was blood that was dripping from the wall to the floor. On the walls was a letter in blood that was freshly painted. As Saka reads the message he relizes there is someone out there that does not want him to be a ninja. As soon as the message is read he leaves the room and wounders why would someone not want him to be a ninja. A few minutes later as he came back to the kitchen there was only blood on the floor but the bloody writing seemed to vanish leaving only a stain like someone was bleeding on the wall and not writing a message. As Saka relizes it he knows a ninja hates all others outside of his country and threatening those who were going to we a newly aquired ninja. Saka new what to do. He simply closed his eyes and opened them and as soon as he did that he cleard his mind of interuption and speedily went to the ninja exam to finally become what he wanted to be his whole life, a ninja! Then when he did become a ninja he hoped the writer of the message would relize it and hunt Saka down but Saka would be ready and show that nothing will get in his way of being the best ninja he can and the writer will be defeated. Than he will be a great ninja that he had always dreamed of being.

x_x i hope this was better because im not too good at choppyness and i extended the sentences and deleted something. hopefully this will be better and i can pass.

hell_life


kouri-chan_xx
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Noob

PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 4:58 am


Lol it is better. :3 Pass ^^ Sorry for the wait XD;
PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:22 am


I have yet to get a village but I'll have one soon! ... I think... anyway here is my sample my characters name is Vesimine Fuyu... xp

Example Post

Vesimine looked around nerviously as she entered the clearing but when she saw nothing daunting she put her back to a tree and finally broke into tears. It hurt, but there was no blood; it bled, but there was no bleeding. She could see it, but it was not there. And yet it hurt, the pain seared through her making her blood boil in its veins. But it was cold, an icy feeling she knew was unique to only her.

Because she wan't normal. The once shady clearing filled with sunlight slowly but without her notice at first. Her ripped and torn robes were falling off her shoulders and the seven year old had never felt so exposed in the face of the growing light. She shyed away from it but it drew ever closer, until finally; it touched.

She threw her head back and her long mahogony hair swept the ground. A scream tore from her lips, pain unlike any other. A pain only she could feel. Her skin burned and blistered at the touch of the rays, rays so gentle to everone else, but not to her. To her; it burned.

Muzsa

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satasi

PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 3:53 pm


Lets see, i have yet to pick a village but here it goes,oh and I am Satasi Tarakahn

rp sample.,
Satasi looked around, his pitch black eyes absorbing all the light possible in the depths of the forest of death. The kage was very specific, dont return until the wolf demon was desroyed."Man why do i get stuck with the S rank mssions" thought Satasi
PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:05 pm


(( well I guess i'll try this one last time before i give up))

Rp Sample:

As the rain pours down on top of the newly added bodies, Alex was frozen sold when the last bit of blood feel off his blade. With Alex not moving just looking off into space his mind was trying to catch up to his body. with his Mind re-playing the event that just happend. Finally getting to its final place Alex began to move once again. But instead of looking at the bodies he began to run as fast as his feet can toward the near by Village hopping that no one would hunt him down for his actions.

Valis Parn

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kouri-chan_xx
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Noob

PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:54 am


@Muzsa: Pass!! I love it!

@Satasi: Hmm... could you make longer with more detail? Changing the spelling grammar errors would be nice too XD

@Blank101: Still some grammar errors, but it's understandable so pass biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 2:44 pm


kouri-chan_xx
Lol it is better. :3 Pass ^^ Sorry for the wait XD;
its fine ^_^ thank you for the pass.

hell_life


satasi

PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:32 pm


Satasi stood at the edge of the black forest, he felt an urge to pull out his fathers silver ring. Through all the years it was the only thing that he held dear, putting it on he felt the roughness from the words that had served as his motto ,scratched into the side of the ring"victory is power",. The Kage had been very specific, he snapped himsef out of the daze he found himself in, "no time for stopping, i still have a mission", jumping into the trees Satasi began his search for the mist ninja whom had been killing the academy recruits,


(i hope this is better)
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