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 Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:54 pm
* Did use one hand to freeze the water, and the other to throw Senbon *
Yeah, I didn't use spell check on that...
I'll edit it.
EDIT:
Fixed it, and I hate this keyboard, I have to smash the buttons to get them to work.
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 11:23 am
Rpc Name: Masashi Tachibana Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Chakra mouth -Exploding clay- What you know about the clan/bl: The Bloodline, Chakra mouth, has the ability to use exploding clay by the mouths in there Palms. Chakra mouths users tend to fight long range to mid as they use tactics to confuse enemies and bomb them with their clay. They are poor close range fighters as they leave some to a lot of open spots, leaving them for a easy attack. Chakra mouth users only have one element, Doton, as clay is apart of the ground and earth. Their clay can be defused if they are struck by lightning or someone that has the element Raiton. Other than that, they are perfect bomber ninjas. Rp Sample: Masashi was walking in the training grounds as he finally became a Chunin. He had a huge grin on his face as all his hard worked had payed off and all he wanted to do was train ever farther into his shinobi life. Setting all that aside, he reach in his backpack that was around his lower back down to his bottom, reaching in for some clay. The mouths on his palms started to chew huge pieces of clay, taking his hands out of the bag. Looking at his palms as the mouths chewed away, he smiled as he waited for the clay to soften up. About a minuet pass as the mouthes stick their tongues out with animal figures. One was a dog as the other was a bear. Masashi then toss the clay figures at the ground as a huge smoke surrounded the clay. Masashi watched as the clay was life size, seeming almost real but in a clay form.
The dog barked as the bear stood on his hind legs. The dog ran at a tree as he sticked it's self to the tree while the bear ran after a boulder about ready to attack the huge rock. Masashi smirked as the only word he said was "Kats!" and the two clay figures blew into a high explosion. The rock was completely gone as the tree itself was demolish, leaving almost no trace of it. Masashi nodded his head as he got the hang of this already. He sat on the ground as he needed to think on what other objects he could blow up next. The idea then came to his head as Masashi got up from the ground as he reached for some more clay in his bag. The mouths chew fiercely as he took his hand out and waited for the clay to soften up again. The mouth's tongues stuck out again as the figures were a tombstone and a spider. He toss them to the ground as another smoke cloud burst out of the air, reveling the life size objects.
The spider was as big as the bear as the tombstone was just staying at one spot. The spider turn to look at Masashi as it's front leg shot up as the fangs were moving. It's eyes bolted from every direction as to look and see what was around. His eye that had a scope on it extended and shot back in as to examine the thing. He smiled as the jutsu was just about right, commanding the spider the hid in the ground. The spider hid himself to surprise someone. The tombstone molded up into a texture like tombstone, camouflage from it's clay texture. Masashi smiled as he was about ready to explode a slay a random lightning bolt stuck the tombstone, messing up the properties as Masashi tried to set the clay off. Masashi was confused as nothing happen as the spider as well pop out of the ground, animating it's death. They then turned back to the small size as Masashi sighed.
Masashi looked around to fine the person that did this, knowing all too well that it was a lightning element user. He zoomed in on his scoped eye he had as it sense no chakra signs near by or anything else. A hour or two later, he gave up as he headed back to the training grounds, looking to train more. Masashi then reached for more clay as it seems that he was all out. masashi cursed under his breath as he turned back to the gates, wishing that he resupplied more. Taking a few steps further, he was thinking that he needed to find someone that has the same bloodline he has. He was at the gates as he looked back for the last time as the grounds looked peaceful as ever. Breakout a a smile, he ran out the gates as he needed to get stronger for him and his family. His mouths on his palms smiled as they sticked out there tongues like a dog as he ran full speed to the Kage's office, asking to see if he could find another user with his bloodline. Masashi spoke under his breath as to see which place he should go first as his trip will last him for some time.
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:39 pm
Rpc Name: Kuroki Kaguya
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Shikotsumyaku
What you know about the clan/bl: The Kaguya clan (Shikotsumyaku) possess the ability to manipulate the cells in their body to give them Sped up regeneration as well as bone manipulation. The bone's depending on how skilled the ninja is are harder then steel and can come from anywhere. The clan was mostly based in Kirigakure around the time Zabuza was a ninja of the mist. But the Kaguya clan had staged a coup and from that majority of the clan was cut down. The remaining clan was kept alive by Orochimaru. The last of the clan was Called Kimimaro and he was suppose to be Orochimaru's body but do to the face he died fighting gaara and that orochimaru had sasuke he was found to be useless and not needed. So as a recap a dead clan is now resurrected. The clan has the ability to manipulate bone and cells to regenerate the body where its cut.
Rp Sample:
( I'm gonna bump my character up to Jounin for this RPing Example))
Deep in the fire country a ninja stood in a field of flowers. Around him were the remains of a Squad of ninja from the Rock village. He had a sad and angry look on his face as the Iwagakure symbol on his head band shinned in the sun light. " Poor souls i will make sure your honor was up held." The man said as he crouched and grabbed some sort of item to show they were from the rock village. But as he bent to pick it up the faint sound of a shuriken was heard and the figure leaped back. He looked around to see where the shuriken came from. It missed him by a bit as it now lay in the dirt near him. He looked around his heart was beating normally. He knew who ever this man was he was the cause of the dead comrades he knew it. From the shadows several men stood weapons drawn as he watched this new shinobi come check on his fallen allies. He made a single hand signal as a few ninja from the trees dashes out at him. The man known as Kuroki looked up at the approaching ninja. He didn't draw a weapon but simply took a basic neutral fighting stance.
Kuroki was going to win this first match with ease as he watch the men come at him and try to stab him. He weaved back a bit dodging the hit bringing a knee up to nail the guy in the gut. Instantly the man screamed as blood shot out of his mouth from the hit. But unknown to everyone else this was two part hit. First the blow of the knee hurt the man but then a split second after the knee hit he forced a sharp bone of from his knee cap area just big enough to stab into the guy and then go back in. It wasn't a super huge bone but it was sharp and deadly. It didn't kill the man but it caused him to go into shock which made him useless. Kuroki ducked next as the next ninja tried to decapitate him with a katana. Kuroki decided to get rid of this ninja easily but charging forward he caught the blade as it came down in a slashing arc to cut him in half. The blade stopped in his hand as it cut the skin easily but very little to almost no blood came out as he smiled a bit. He pushed the sword up as he crouch and delivered a spiked palm thrust to the chest stabbing the heart and killing the man. He drew his palm back as a bone stuck out and slowly went back into his body.
The third ninja was was already running back to the cover of the trees when Kuroki raised his hand and inhaled then exhaled slowly as he focused on the man. As his finger tips started to poke through the skin and in a second were shot off like a bullet at the running man. He was struck in the back as he fell. He was only hit with 3 shots the other 2 shots missed and hit the trees causing the trees to burst a bit as the bullets hit them and drilled in a bit. The remaining ninja were given the signal to charge out as a small squad of 4 dashes out weapons at the ready and approaching fast. Kuroki simply rotated his shoulder a bit as a bone started to form and poke through the skin. He grabbed it and drew what appeared to be a sword. He held it at his side as the areas where the bones left the body were back to normal as if nothing happen. He charged back at the ninjas sword at the ready as he slashed and parried at oncoming attackers. He deflected a few blows and struck back killing one. The bone sword barely was scratched only small scratches from the constant hammering of blows was shown.
Kuroki decided to end this as he took a position from his clan. " Dance of the Camellia" He said softly as he moved in a fluid movement cutting and dicing at all who came near him. He cut down two of the 3 remaining ninja with ease as they fell to his feet left sanding was the very last ninja his face was covered in sweat as of a mixture of fear and fatigue. He was the most skilled out of all of them. He pushed forward slashing faster then Kuroki could parry or dodge as a result several slashes formed on his body as he fell back a bit. Like before very little to no blood formed as the cuts started to heal already. He knew he needed to end this soon he was getting tired from the chakra usage so he decided to give it his all. He dashes to the side throwing his Bone sword like a giant kunai. While starting to spin around the target." Dance of the Pines" he said softly as bones protruded from his body and he became a bladed top. He spun and rotated his body and arms as the ninja did his best to dodge and get away but he was unable to escape the torrent of cuts that hit him. His vest and shirt were sliced to pieces and stained with his blood. Kuroki finished the technique standing face to face with the man as the bones slowly moved back into his body the nearly dead shinobi who attacked Kuroki smiled and then fell back. He was defeated by a shinobi on a whole other level then he was on. Kuroki finished his move and couched next to his comrades and took their headbands leaving this blood stained field. No longer were the sunflowers blooming now only stood the red blood flower.
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:30 am
Rpc Name: Tatsuhide Azai
Village: sand
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Iron Sand
What you know about the clan/bl: i know that it was invented by the second kazekage to mimic the one tail's control of sand. it uses chakra to create a magnetic fields to manipulate metal.
Rp Sample:
Tatsu had no idea what was going on around him! for some reason bits of metal were getting stuck to him. Fear was beginning to swell up in his chest despite his best efforts to stay calm. He had attempted to remove it. he had pulled of a coin and strangely it floated for a moment before shooting off through a window like a bullet. everything would be fine if he had not moved but he had and in his clumsiness nocked his sword from its stand. he thought it was still originally because the sword was in its sheath but slowly the metal of the sword pulled free of the wooden sheath. He had attempted to kick the katana away but this too was a mistake as all it did was turn the point of the blade toward him. Things were getting worse by the second since the more he panicked the faster the sword came at him. The fear pumped up from his chest to his brain as the thought of pain and mortal injury entered his mind. suddenly the sword zipped off the ground toward his chest. In a bizarre way that only being close to death could do time seemed to slow. in his mind Tatsu remembered something his father had once taught him. "Fear is a natural part of being alive. Tatsu you must take control of your life and grab hold of your fears. they are a part of who you are, you cant out run them and you cant deny them. you must focus your mind and body into your sword. everything you are: both your hopes and fears must be channeled into your blade. only then can it truly be an extension of yourself..." When he finally realized his eye were closed Tatsu opened them immediately. What he saw and other senses supported he could barley believe. in his left hand was the sword. it was not about to stab him. it was hin his hand to do his will. The relation dawned on Tatsu about what had happened. He had taken control and grabbed his fears. he had guided the sword into his hand. This power was his and he could not run from it. taking the blade in both hands and closing his eyes he focused. he felt the warm metal stuck to him detach from his body. opening his eyes he saw the metal slowly orbiting his body. this time there was no surprise as that was what he willed. In his mind he felt the metal. he felt what he could do... bend... break... move... "grind to dust!" he said as he made the floating metal disintegrate till it was no more this a dark swirling cloud about him. with a swing of his sword Tatsu released his control of the metal. the cloud dropped to the floor and he sheathed his sword. Tatsu inspected the powder that now lay on his floor. scooping some of it up he felt how granularly it was and said "huh iron... sand..."
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:02 am
Beauchene - APPROVED
D.S.W - A couple of things:
1 - I think the word for the explosion is "katsu"...(though it does in reality sound like 'kats')
2 - Making a huge spider (while possible I suppose is possible) doesnt really show the RANGE of clay creations you can make. Deidara was capable of making both very small and VERY large clay creations to act as explosions. All I saw you do was make relatively large ones... and a tombstone of some kind (which is interesting... since I guess it's like a mine)
I don't doubt that you know how to use the bloodline, but see if you can't incorporate a few more creations to show the range of what can be done (flying creations, small creations... digging creations... you can do a lot with them)
[Also, I'm sure a Chuunin would be able to carry enough clay for more then just 4 jutsu.]
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:46 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:59 am
Kurgistar: Several Things are amiss here...
1) I don't like RP Samples that are just a Block of text. You should break the sample out into appropriate paragraphs and space things properly.
2) You really shouldn't make an RP Sample BEFORE you learn of your powers. The whole point of the sample is to show that you know HOW the powers work, HOW to use the jutsu properly and that you can use them all well.
3) It was the 3rd Kazekage who utilized the Iron Sand... AND it does not work the way you are stating. The third kazekage already had 'Magnetic Powers' (due to his Doton/Raiton manipulation)... so he used small Iron particles (Iron Sand) to emulate/imitate the Ichibi.
4) The way you made the iron sand was fine, but your manipulation of a sword was not in line with the Bloodline's description. it says you can control SMALL amounts of metal... (Kunai, Shuriken, Metal Wire)... but not a sword.
...I would suggest writing an RP Sample from more of a Chuunin/Jounin level perspective and have it assume the form of some kind of training... or a combat situation, so you can really show us that you know how to use the style.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:29 am
sorry bout that ill rewrite it. i figure the sword would work since its close. and i was thinking a quick logic thing for future writing... whats the difference between it being it being one chunk of metal rather a million particles? if anything wouldn't it be easier to use the chunk of metal since it would require less concentration?
your right about which kage. it was a mess up in my head but from what i read up in the manga and on the web the power is crated (and i quote naruto wiki) "The Iron Sand is a special technique used by the Third Kazekage, in combination with his unique ability to convert chakra into magnetic forces. The Third studied a host of the One-Tailed Shukaku and learned to imitate the power to control sand."
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:08 am
Kurgistar sorry bout that ill rewrite it. i figure the sword would work since its close. and i was thinking a quick logic thing for future writing... whats the difference between it being it being one chunk of metal rather a million particles? if anything wouldn't it be easier to use the chunk of metal since it would require less concentration? your right about which kage. it was a mess up in my head but from what i read up in the manga and on the web the power is crated (and i quote naruto wiki) "The Iron Sand is a special technique used by the Third Kazekage, in combination with his unique ability to convert chakra into magnetic forces. The Third studied a host of the One-Tailed Shukaku and learned to imitate the power to control sand."
Think of it in terms of an overall magnetic field which you can manipulate at will. The field itself only has enough strength to support fine grain particles of sand... though it can lift as many of those pieces of sand as their are in a certain area. Anything individually heavier then a kunai/shuriken simply isnt affected by the weak field. You can then control the size, spread, direction of movement OF that weak magnetic field, but you cannot increase the INTENSITY of the field to pick up individually heavier objects. Combined however, when held each in it's individual place by the magnetic field, the iron sand particles are then heavy enough/solid enough to act as both defense and offense when formed through jutsu.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 10:14 am
i can see why it would be made that way. alright now that its cleared up thanks to you i can get to writing!
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 11:07 am
Rpc Name: Tatsuhide Azai
Village: sand
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Iron Sand
What you know about the clan/bl: i know that it was invented by the second kazekage to mimic the one tail's control of sand. it uses chakra to create a magnetic fields to manipulate metal.
Rp Sample:
Tatsu sat meditating in a room that he had set up to train himself. Aside from the floor one foot around him the the ground was covered in shuriken and kunai. hanging above him were four empty pots. He had to clear his mind and focus. any hesitation and he could be killed by doing this. the point of this training was perfect control.
He let his breath leave his lungs and he he used his charka to reach to the room around him. it would not be as most would think of reaching out. It was through a use of magnetic field he made using his own chakra. Opening his eye he began to pull all of the metal in the room straight towards himself. Just as he was about to be hit by the weapons he began to break them down into minuscule pieces. they became nothing more then grains of sand.
As the weapons became sand he moved it upwards till it reached the ceiling. soon the room held no more of the metal weapons and in their stead was a swirling cloud of iron about Tatsu. He grinned at his handy work as he sat there and starred from the center of the metal storm. He even put his hand in the cloud and felt the metal move softly across his flesh. Pulling his and back he said "amazing how gentle it is right now yet it is still so deadly." that said he focused again on his training.
He force the swirling metal to contort and soon it was raining down pellets against the stone floor. As solid as the floor was the metal relentlessly chipped away at it. Satisfied he had control of the jutsu he let the rain come to a end and pulled all of the metal back to himself. Soon he had it as a floating cloud once more.
The next jutsu would be by far the most difficult as he had to exert the most control not to hit things. still he had to do it to train so he could do it easily. using more chakra he formed the Iron sand world method. the spikes of metalic sand stabbed every which way in the room aside from five key locations. Four of those spots free of the attack hung from the ceiling while the fifth was himself.
As the chakra was drained and the concentration tolled on his mind and body Tatsu almost had to release the jutsu. Mustering up more self will he held the sand under his control and continued. looking up he checked to make sure he did not destroy any of the pots. when he was sure they were all totally interacted he once more pulled all of the sand back into to himself.
Tatsu completed his training with flying colors and was proud of himself. There was only one thing that remained to do. Tatsu took the sand and divided it in four sections. each of those sections he used to simultaneously fill all four large pots. Standing up and walking to each pot he double checked to make sure he had not made a minuet hole for the iron sand to escape from. seeing there was none he left the room in a hurry.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 11:42 am
Rpc Name: Takeshi Konan
Village: Kirigakure (best place for this one, and I already have an rpc in rock)
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Oragami no Dara
What you know about the clan/bl: I know that this bloodline is the manipulation of papers, capable of changing the shape, density, and grows stronger over time through training and promotions. To weild this kekki genkai one has to have both suiton and doton, and cannot reduce wood that was created by others into paper. The papers are also weak of fire and lightning. The papers can become as sharp as knives, making it become a lethal weapon. To add to the danger, explosive notes can be used.
Rp Sample:
The sun was slowly setting over the horizon in the Hidden Mist, shadows extended longer as the sun slowly vanished. A pair of large white wings appeared in the air, attached to the shoulder blades seemingly to a tall figure, male. As the angelic figure landed gracefully on a tree branch the wings dispursed into hundreds and hundreds of paper, which the slowly vanished and there was only one animated being, the ANBU standing there with a mask on. Turning towards the distance, according to intel a boat should be arriving soon with a group of shinobi from the land of iron, a task force ment to invade the Hidden Mist. With this small bit of information, he'll set a trap for them and deal with them accordingly.
Taking out two scrolls he laid them about before him on the ground, making a seal the two scrolls exploded into smoke. Four books laid before him, and they opened up with paper exploding upwadrs, manipulating the papers from the book he would be using this amount to set the trap he wanted. Setting the paper along the ground he used Kimitate-assembly, having the paper crumble into the same shape of the ground so the layout is identical. Realizing that the paper would need to take a similar color to properly mirror the ground, he weaved handsigns. "Koujin Bunshin no Jutsu (Dust Clone Technique)"
He muttered under the mask, the dirt and small bits of mud from the path besides him came to life, spinning around and creating multiples of himself, roughly about 20 clones. The path from the docks and the village is a great amount, and with more then half of the path with paper groundings would require a great amount of dirt to conceal the obvious paper on the ground just enough to where, at night, one wouldn't be able to tell. Having the clones spaced out over the area, an equal radious from the other he threw several shurikens through the area, cutting all of the clones' throats and having them burst, scattering dirt and dust everywhere. Within a few moments, the ground was covered and by nightfall it'll be indistinguishable. Plus, even with the light coating it'll be hard for one to hear the paper thanks to the dirt. To add to this, he would throw in an animal. "Art of Cutting Blast" He muttered, paper coming together and creating a deer, which began acting as one, walking around. This would be for cutting the numbers down to where, if any survivors, he'll eliminate them with ease.
Night fell over the forest, the stars barely visible due to the mist that covered the entire village and outside its borders. The 'deer' walked around, acting as if it was eating grass. A boat eventually came in to the docks, about a group of four was dropped off. From the distance, Takeshi watched the latter. The sound of footsteps was heard meeting the ground, which now from this point on was to execute the plan. The deer approached them slowly, the shinobi stopped for a moment, cautiously looking around when they saw the deer. Laughing to themselves they started walking past it. However, as the last two got by it to get ahead the 'deer' suddenly exploded, and storms of needles made of paper rocketed out everywhere, skewering the two who took the blunt of the blast. The other two were knocked onto the ground from the force and the surprise of the explosion, one of them getting some needles in his leg causing him to curse under his breath.
Now that the two were on the ground, Takeshi started the second phase of the trap. Some of the papers he used, were also explosive notes. Weaving his hands in a blurred fashion he muttered another jutsu name. "Explosive tornado". Suddenly around the injured nin, a storm of papers burst from the ground, surrounding him in a tornado type fashion, blocking the other shinobi from reaching his injured comrad. The injured intruder called out for help, begging for his friend to get him out of the tornado onslaught he was trapped in. But before he could even do that, the tornado exploded, and an ear splitting scream was heard as the body become nothing more then pieces on the ground. The force of the explosion knocked the remaining shinobi away on the ground again.
He realized he was alone, his friends and partners dead and they have yet to even identify their assailant. From the sky however, he looked up and saw a mass of white papers, taking shape of white wings as the one they were attached to descended slowly towards him. His eyes grew wide, as he has heard of the rumors of a angel being among the bloody mist. Anger distorted his judgement as he then drew out a sword and leapt out at Takeshi. Takeshi merely watched the attacker get closer, before bringing one wing between them and the sword struck the paper.
To the shinobi's surprise, it sounded like metal when the two collided, the paper not even breaking. Slowly, the paper parted barely where the blade was, going through the wing so he thought. Though in reality the paper wing was coming to strike him, which moments later the wing knocked him away, cutting him up on his arm, face, and chest which was very painful. The nin crashing into the ground was stunned, coughing blood alittle bit due to how much he was knocked around and being struck by a very strong yet sharp wing made of paper. As he tried to get up, he noticed on his stomach was two paper butterflies. He then looked up at Takeshi, which to him was all in slow motion as the paper angel brought a single sign and muttered a word. The two butterflies detonated, ending the life of the last intruder.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:32 pm
Quote: Rpc Name: Masashi Tachibana Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Chakra mouth -Exploding clay- What you know about the clan/bl: The Bloodline, Chakra mouth, has the ability to use exploding clay by the mouths in there Palms. Chakra mouths users tend to fight long range to mid as they use tactics to confuse enemies and bomb them with their clay. They are poor close range fighters as they leave some to a lot of open spots, leaving them for a easy attack. Chakra mouth users only have one element, Doton, as clay is apart of the ground and earth. Their clay can be defused if they are struck by lightning or someone that has the element Raiton. Other than that, they are perfect bomber ninjas. Rp Sample: Masashi was walking in the training grounds as he finally became a Chunin. He had a huge grin on his face as all his hard worked had payed off and all he wanted to do was train ever farther into his shinobi life. Setting all that aside, he reach in his backpack that was around his lower back down to his bottom, reaching in for some clay. The mouths on his palms started to chew huge pieces of clay, taking his hands out of the bag. Looking at his palms as the mouths chewed away, he smiled as he waited for the clay to soften up. About a minuet pass as the mouthes stick their tongues out with animal figures. One was a dog as the other was a bear. Masashi then toss the clay figures at the ground as a huge smoke surrounded the clay. Masashi watched as the clay was life size, seeming almost real but in a clay form.
The dog, which was the same size as a wolf and, barked and growled at a a tree as the bear roared softly at a boulder. The Bear it self was huge, about the same size as a grizzly and with huge claws that could tear a person in half. The dog ran at a tree as he sticked it's self to the tree while the bear ran after a boulder about ready to attack the huge rock. Masashi smirked as the only word he said was "Katsu!" and the two clay figures blew into a high explosion. The rock was completely gone as the tree itself was demolish, leaving almost no trace of it. Masashi nodded his head as he got the hang of this already. He sat on the ground as he needed to think on what other objects he could blow up next. The idea then came to his head as Masashi got up from the ground as he reached for some more clay in his bag. The mouths chew fiercely as he took his hand out and waited for the clay to soften up again. The mouth's tongues stuck out again as the figures were a tombstone and a spider. He toss them to the ground as another smoke cloud burst out of the air, reveling the life size objects.
The spider was as big as the bear as the tombstone was just staying at one spot. The spider turn to look at Masashi as it's front leg shot up as the fangs were moving. It's eyes bolted from every direction as to look and see what was around. His eye that had a scope on it extended and shot back in as to examine the thing. He smiled as the jutsu was just about right, commanding the spider the hid in the ground. The spider hid himself to surprise someone. The tombstone molded up into a texture like tombstone, camouflage from it's clay texture. Masashi smiled as he was about ready to explode a slay a random lightning bolt stuck the tombstone, messing up the properties as Masashi tried to set the clay off. Masashi was confused as nothing happen as the spider as well pop out of the ground, animating it's death. They then turned back to the small size as Masashi sighed.
Masashi looked around to fine the person that did this, knowing all too well that it was a lightning element user. He zoomed in on his scoped eye he had as it sense no chakra signs near by or anything else. A hour or two later, he gave up as he headed back to the training grounds, looking to train more. Masashi then reached for more clay as he gathered more clay into his chakra mouths. Masashi, taking a minuet for his clay to soften up, made a small bird that was roughly 5 cm in width and 2 in hight. In his other hand was a couple of worms he made so in case that person came back to the training grounds. He toss the small clay bird in the air as the bird then grew bigger around 10 feet in width and hight as the worms just slid off from his hand onto the ground. The worms swim its way into the dirt and earth as they lay still for the vibration of another to walk by. Masashi quickly jump on the back of the huge bird, a falcon from the looks as it quickly zoomed through the air to the Kage's office. He was thinking that he needed to find someone that has the same bloodline he has. He was at the gates as he looked back for the last time as the grounds looked peaceful as ever. The mouths on his palms smiled as they sticked out thier tongues like a dog as he calmly glided to the Kage's office, asking to see if he could find another user with his bloodline. Masashi spoke under his breath as to see which place he should go first as his trip will last him for some time. Edited
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:52 pm
Rpc Name: Tatsuo 'Tyr' Konaga
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Konaga
What you know about the clan/bl: The Konaga Clan is composed of nomadic men and women who were born with a wellspring of chakra high enough to rival that of a Bijuu. Every fiber of their being, every cell is overflowing with inhuman amounts of chakra however such a long concentration of chakra is not without it risks. Every instant of their lives is filled with unbearable amounts of pain, a constant reminder of their grand power. Whenever they have utilized too much chakra or experience high levels of emotional trauma, their gargantuan amount of chakra becomes chaotic and is released in a violent surge of chakra that often devestates their surroundings while they experience crippling levels of pain. This is known as the Raging Spirit.
Though they have a high quantity of chakra Konaga clansmen are not able to harness the full scope of this power, but years of training may bring them close. Very few Konaga survive childbirth and even fewer mature into ninja but those lucky enough to do so are able to drastically augument their physical traits in battle. Overusing their abilities results in the activation of the Raging Spirit. Also, because of their ever-present pain and constantly surging chakra, the Konaga are highly resistant to the effects Genjutsu but are also unable to utilize illusionary arts. Their chakra control is quite formidable regardless.
Rp Sample:
Space rippled in front of a Konoha Jounin and the tell-tale whine of the space/time scar revealed an airborne Tyr wielding dual scimitars of remarkable craft. The silver blades expertly reflected moonlight over the rocky formation, trailing streams of blood as they located vital locations in the enemies body. Before the shinobi could blink his guide was slain before their eyes during the surprise attack.
Once again space rippled but this time Tyr held a spear in his right hand, several meters away from the seven jounin and wearing a cocky grin. "By order of the Tsuchikage, Konohagakure shinobi are not allowed to set foot in this particular spot. Approximately ten minutes ago you crossed this boundary. The penalty for your trepassing is death!"
Tyr enjoyed theatrics, it was one of his quirky ways to supress the throbbing pains in his body. It didn't always work but if he kept his chakra usage down and kept a level head, he only felt a portion of the curse. However during battle it always intensified and fluctuated, as if his agony was playing a high-tempo piece of music that vibrated throughout his lightly armored body. His grin didn't waver despite his pain, a testament to his pain tolerance and experience over his bloodline. The Jounin, well aware of his crime, instantly moved into battle positions and drew a scythe. When Tyr examiend the extremely large weapon and the way the heavy-build of his opponent he began to experience some regret over his swift action.
"I don't suppose we can negotiate?" Tyr offered weakly and he imagined the giant man smiled before he swung his weapon. The scythe devestated the earth and released a shockwave of chakra that shattered the scimitars Tyr used to defend against the attack. Smoke rolled off his body as he hurtled through the eair and landed on his knees, gasping in pain. "Little ********," he growled as blood ran down his left eye. He hadn't broken any bones but he felt a gash on his left shoulder that would most definetly scar sometime in the future. Although he wasn't very excited about it, he knew he wouldn't be able to countinue using his Jikukan Ninjutsu for awhile. "I'll show you what its like to be a Konaga!"
The name drew an astonished expression which Tyr would revel in if massive amounts of pain wasn't blooming from his shoulder. This was mianly because he drawing chakra from his core and the onrushing energies werent really helping his wounds. He really only needed one handseal to perform the technique, such was his level of mastery of Earth Jutsu. His armored palms slammed into the ground and a powerful shockwave swept through the rocks. Fizzures opened and large sections of the earth rose and fell as the jutsu completely altered the terrain. His specialized kunai would be re-located but Tyr simply launched ten more towards specific locations near the flailing Jounin. He utilized another space/time scar to appear behind the ninja as he held onto a gouge on the vertial portion of earth he was trapped on. Without hesitating Tyr jabbed his fingers into the ninjas back and unleashed waves of chakra into his body, instantly brining on a pain he was forced to live with everyday of his life.
Tyr felt that pain quite strongly at the moment as he slid down the rock face with the temporarily incapitated ninja, leaping off spires of earth in search of the shinobi's scythe. When Tyr returned to the final shinobi's body he was curled up in pain as gargantuan amounts of chakra wreacked havoc on his body. A pain he would never experience was forcing its way through his body and already his eyes were gouged out because of the pain.
"Only a fifth of Konaga children make it through childbirth. Even less than that survive to become adults,"
As he spoke Tyr hefted the scythe from the ground and spun the well crafted weapon in his hand. He found himself actually relieved of pain for a few moments after dispatching the last ninja but it was rolling in with full force...Too much force. His clsoed his eyes in pain and widened his stance to stay erect but he felt as if the world was spinning as his pain rocketed through his body. His skin prickled painfully and a silver aura began to seep off his body. Veins bulged along his skin and is pupils were swalloed by his scelera....Tyr knew that the pain he was feeling was the result of the intense training session he udnerwent half an hour before tracking the invaders. He knew he shouldn't have but once again overconfidence got the better of him. "Aw..."
He stumbled towards the shinobi writhing in a watered down mirror of his pain and allowed the scythe to fall from his fingers. "Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!"
The surrounding landscape was vaporized as a large bubble of rapidly oscilatting violet energy expanded from Tyr's body. Curved burns flowed over his skin and the surrounding rubble was torn to pieces as chakra surged through every pore, every cell in his body. The nearby enemy was reduced to nothing but ash and the earth became unstable as the enourmous explosion sent frequent shockwaves through the earth. Tyr lay face down in a ten feet deep crater, covered in multiple burns and completely unaware of his surroundings. Steam seemed to role off his body and a faint violet glow clung to his flesh and the smoking remains of his cloth. The metal gauntlet on his left arm was grafted to his skin and glowing amber as the metal cooled. It would be less than ten minutes before Iwagakure medics arrived, special ninja who knew enough about Tyr's fits to understand the proper treatment for his wounds.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:28 pm
かろなしろいヴぁす RPC Name: Karonashi Roivas Kaguya Village: Going for Suna once I know if this is accepted or denied. Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan Applied for: Kaguya/Shikotsumyaku What do you know about it?: That in the main series, there was only one known survivor who could use this ability. It is centered around the fact that the members of the clan who have this bloodline are able to control their bones to do many things, from shooting from their fingertips to forming dense barriers to creating razor sharp blades. The material of the bones of these people are stronger initially than those of anyone else, and continue to grow even stronger as they become more skilled in controlling their ability. Also, members of this clan are forced to remove the bones from their body to use them, but the make-up of their genetic system is such that when they push their bones out through their skin, the spot instantly reseals, though this ability does not extend to healing wounds, just as a heightened healing factor. Could go on.....but want to get to the RP sample. RP Sample:Karonashi sighed as the man in front of him tapped his foot impatiently on the ground. I just wanted a nice quiet afternoon, just wanted to go visit a friend. Do I get that? Noooo, I get the bandit that's too chock-full of himself to realize that he's trying to rob a shinobi. He sighed and slipped one hand down to hand limp at his side. "I ain't gonna wait all day white-head! Give me the damn money, and maybe I'll let you pass!" The bandit in front of Karonashi picked up his pike and held it horizontally in front of himself. "But if you keep delaying, I'm not going to let you get away alive!" How do I want to do this? Oh, I know.... Karo ignored the boisterous man in exchange for concentrating his attention on the ground beneath his feet. Slowly, then with a bit more speed, bone began flowing out of his ankles to pierce through his shoe into the dirt below. That feeling always gives me the shivers. Of all the places, the feet is probably the one we're least accustomed to using this way... Karonashi began forming a web of bones that spread out from beneath his feet, spiraling outwards to encompass the entire clearing. However, while he was doing this, the bandit finally grew fed up. With a strange war cry that sounded like he had learned it from a crappy B-movie, the pike wielding bandit charged the shinobi. It was only when he was swinging his pike around to slice Karonashi open that the ninja reacted. He leaned backwards at the knees, in an unnatural seeming position. The weapon passed harmlessly over him, though he did scowl as he saw his reflection on the blade. He straightened up again, and saw that the bandit was staring at him with a dumbfounded expression. "What?" "Wh..Nevermind! I'll kill you anyway!" This time, the bandit tried a diagonal slash with his pike, a maneuver that prevented Karonashi from easily leaning away. He was forced to make a choice between either giving up his spot, which meant that his bone-web would be abandoned, or he would have to take more drastic measures to counter the bandit. For the shinobi, running away from this easy fight was most assuredly not an option. He chose to react more violently. From the hand that hung down at his side, a blade sprouted almost instantly. The effect that the baggy clothes had made it appear that the blade was hidden within his sleeve, preventing the bandit from realizing just what he was fighting. Karonashi brought his bone-blade up and deflected the attack to the side, causing the bandit to stagger away, off-balance. The man quickly recovered and spun around to charge, only to freeze when he saw the blade pointed at him. To him, it was designed strangely, as if it was meant to be a collapsible weapon, like one of the segmented staffs that were meant for concealment. He grinned, he would love to have a weapon like that for himself! "On second thought, I'll let you go with all of your money...in exchange for that sword!" The bandit had not put together what the color meant. Karo blinked several times, stunned. He glanced down at the blade that had been formed from his bones, then back up at the man. A malicious thought entered his mind. With a quick fluctuation in the energies governing his kekkei genkai that was slowly burrowing through the soil, a final touch was added to the death of the who had interrupted his nice pleasant afternoon. "So you want this sword?" The man nodded eagerly. Karonashi tossed the bone weapon over to him, snorting as the bandit dropped his pike in order to catch it. As soon as the man's hands closed around the hilt of the blade, two things occurred. One, he realized that there was something strange about this blade. It had no true hilt, nor was it collapsible like he had assumed. Makai, it wasn't even metal! The bandit would find out what the second thing was too late. "Hey, what are you tr-gurk!" Stunned, he looked down to his chest. A blade identical to the one he held in his hand, right down to the ridges that had made him think it was collapsible, protruded through his chest. "I'm sorry, was that one not enough? Have some more then." From the ground shot five spires of bone, the final few feet of each resembling the sword the man held. The bone spikes skewered the man, the impact of one that was close to his feet lifting him up from the ground slightly. When the attack was done, the unfortunate bandit hung transfixed in the air, six spires of bone emerging from the ground to puncture his body. The first had just narrowly missed his heart, while each successive spike pierced a vital organ. He bled out onto the blades, staining the lower portions closest to him with his life's blood. Karonashi strode over to him, breaking his connection to the bones in the ground. "I think I'll leave this here, as a warning to bandits who seek to stop travelers on this path. And those who seek to take the weapons of another." He shrugged and strode away, whistling a jaunty tune now that the peace of his afternoon was restored. "Hmm, I wonder what Asuki has made for lunch today?" RP Sample End
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