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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 9:53 pm
Richard Rider I have to agree with the drag queen. The waist is very...Liefeldesque. Was gonna say it but didn't want ta make her cry. Afterall she flipped the man's work off in disgust...
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 9:56 pm
I don't want her to cry either, 'cause she's good otherwise. I just want her to get better.
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 10:01 pm
Hey now I didn't say anything about Liefeld. The waist should just be less concave. Cassie when you look at the drawing think about where her rib cage is going to be and how to communicate that it's under her skin, think about how it affects the shape of the body.
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 10:10 pm
Meh, that's what I was thinking when I saw the waist and thought you were too. Sorry 'bout that.
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:28 pm
I thought it was very Turner-esque, not Liefield myself. I think she's going for a stylistic approach, and it's lovely.
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:53 pm
Cassandra Sandsmark Jamie, the new Wonder girl my character in the DC/Marvel future rp  I'm agreeing with the Turnereque approach. I do think her breats are a little on the anatomically off side, a lot of it having to do with the clevage lines. Breats just don't go up that far. I'd say work on arm anatomy (the forearms are a little waif-like), otherwise I think it's a lovely drawing. I like the face and I think the gesture of the position is very nice.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:39 am
xd Wow never expected so many different responses. Don't worry about critizing my work everyone has there own opinons and it's interesting to hear all them ( Try point out the flaws without calling me Liefield.. besides if nothing else I'm a much nicer person then that d**k) . Yeah, I did have a few problems with the waist, made it to dark and to thin. Truth though is I was trying to go for an exagerated look, simply because many of the comic book women I've seen have been overly exagerated ( not just Liefield, but lots of others). The Wonder family is often more exagerated then most.
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 2:57 pm
I really like the face and hair Cassie, it's very well done. I just have to say it again. Anyway I'm focusing on anatomy and such in my art right now so that's going to be the focus of any crits I have for the forseeable future. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:19 pm
 A Halloween Pic done in about 30 min... sweatdrop Yeah It's crap but I was bored...
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:26 pm
I really like his facial expression.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 8:10 am
Reminds me of the good ole days with Freakazoid!
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 8:51 am
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 2:41 pm
Heh, cool. I'm working on a Bizarro pic.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 3:43 pm
I'm working on Trent Reznor, who is not a superhero!
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:58 pm
And I'm eagerly awaiting it, as I loved your last picture of Trent.
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