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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 12:55 pm
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:09 pm
Stop working on it and start Working on it!!!! scream
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 11:11 pm
Calen18 Stop working on it and start Working on it!!!! scream Think about that trip for a Second. wink
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 12:03 pm
I NEED MORE. AS THE FOUNDER OF YOUR FANCLUB I DEMAND AN UPDATE!!!
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 12:28 pm
If you guys don't calm down i will discontinue the entire story!
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 12:28 pm
*Puppy dog eyes*
Pwease Blammy?
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 1:26 pm
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 2:20 pm
Seriously. BE PATIENT! I'm not THAT good of writer! I have Severe Writers Block! IT SUCKS!
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:09 pm
Alex! Inquiring minds want to know! When will your next update be? *holds microphone in front of Alex*
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:39 am
moon_child_27 Alex! Inquiring minds want to know! When will your next update be? *holds microphone in front of Alex* umm, I'm going to write right now so hopefully soon.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 8:08 am
Give Me Novocaine moon_child_27 Alex! Inquiring minds want to know! When will your next update be? *holds microphone in front of Alex* umm, I'm going to write right now so hopefully soon. Better, I've written 22 updates for you! CMON NOW!
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:48 pm
*Hugs Blammy*
I'm even hugging you for updates! This isn't like me! sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 8:49 am
ZOMG! YOU'LL NEVER BELIEVE IT BUT THIS IS AN UPDATE POST! ZOMG!
Chapter 3
Gee and Nicky sat at the bus stop waiting patiently for the bus to come.
"GeeGee when the bus gonna be here?" Nicky asked, shaking slightly from the cool night air. Gee wrapped his sweater around the youngster.
"It'll be here any minute." And as if on cue the bus turned a corner and pulled up to the stop. Gee and Nicky climbed aboard and paid their toll. Getting many strange looks from the passengers as they saw a teenage boy and young girl climb onto the bus dressed in all black. The two sat in the back and kept to themselves not wanting anyone to think they were too strange. But of course by the time the bus came to their stop Nicky was jumping around yelling "I'M GONNA SEE GERWARD WAY AND BOB BWYAR AND WAY TORWO AND MIKEWY WAY AND FWANK IEWO!" and getting many strange looks from the other riders. They got out of the bus and ran to the concert hall. Handing the man their tickets they ran to large arena and took their seat right beside the stage.
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"Arwe my eawrs suppowsed to be winging?" Nicky asked as they waited outside the concert arena. They had just gotten out and decided to wait a little bit for all the fans to leave before they tried to make their way home.
"Yeah kiddo, they are. We were right by the amps so it might take a minute for the ringing to stop." He said as a large crowd came by. The crowd was bigger than Gee thought it was and it took a few minutes to go by, but as soon as it did Gee was horrified. Nicky was gone without a trace.
"Hey! Gee!" Someone called from behind. He turned around to be greeted by the happy face of Gerard. But the happy face didn't last long when the singer found that Gee was alone.
"Where's Nicky?" He asked, slightly confused.
"I- I don't know, she was right here and this huge group of people walked by and then she was gone and... and.... and.... AND WHAT DO I DO!?" He yelled, panic taking over his body.
"Okay, calm down. She must be around here somewhere." Gerard said. But Gee knew otherwise, because after all he wasn't that lucky. They searched for hours with no sign of Nicky. Gee growing more and more concerned.
"M-Maybe she went home. Go home and check if she isn't back by tomorrow morning come find me and we'll go looking again." Gerard said, giving Gee a hug and running off.
Gee walked home, not bothering to take the bus. What am I gonna tell mom? he thought as the sun started to rise and he climbed through his bedroom window. He collapsed on his bed, no knowing how tired he really was. He fell asleep almost instantly. Nightmares flashed through his head during the few hours of sleep he had. Images of Nicky tied up in an abanndoned house in the middle of no where crying in fear and pain made him toss and turn in his sleep until he was woken by the sound of his mother screaming. She burst through his bedroom door as he got out of bed.
"WHERE THE ******** IS NICKY!?" She screamed, grabbing the collar of his shirt, making it difficult for him to breathe.
"M-mom, I.. I c-can't b-breathe." He gasped, but she didn't losen her grip.
"I'll Let You Breathe When You Tell Me Where Nicky Is!" She demanded, tighten her grip slightly and making Gee's face turn a light shade of blue.
"I... I d-don't k-know." He said, his face turning a darker more sickening color blue. Mrs. Hamsured let go of his collar making him collapse on his bed gasping for air. Her face turned from anger to shock and she started to shake. Suddenly she fell to the floor, making Gee jump. He quickly threw on some new clothes and ran from his house before his mother had time to wake up. He ran down the many busy streets towards the concert hall only to stop suddenly when the MCR bus wasn't there.
"NO! He said he would help me!" Gee yelled, dropping to his knees as tears started to fall from his eyes. He jumped as someone put their hand on his shoulder.
"Come on, we have to find Nicky." Gerard said.
"You... you didn't leave?" Gee said, dumbstruck.
"Of course not, now come on. We have to start looking." Gerard said, grabbing Gee's wrist and pulling him up from the ground.
"But we looked all over, she's no where near here." Gee said, becoming frustrated as thoughts of last nights useless search flashed in his mind.
"I know, that's why we're looking everywhere else." Gerard said with a sly smile as the MCR bus turned around the corner.
"Come On! We Have To Find Nicky!" Ray yelled from the drivers window. The two Gerards ran to the bus, both fashioning hopeful smiles.
I better get all kinds of comments now.
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 9:02 am
NICKY!!! eek
Oh no! She can't have gone missing! emo
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 9:24 am
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