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 Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:51 am
Narmer looked over Natalie, lifting her by her destroyed shoulder and forcing her to look at him, pink eyes focusing on hers.
"Do you understand the severity of what you've done, child? You still smell human, perhaps that is why your mind is so clogged with what you may and may not do. You are too used to being part of the royal family, able to get away with anything-"
Here he shot a glance towards Ninak, letting him know that this applied to him as well.
"-but that is no longer so. So, do you renounce your claims and grovel at the feet of your Elders, or would you prefer to die?"
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:59 am
'Nat, just do it. We might be able to escape with our lives if we do...'
'But... He's a putrid, disgusting, egotistical --'
'I don't care.'
Natalie groaned as the pain only increased. She could barely feel her feet come off the ground, the pain was just too bad. "I-I," At first, she found how ruined her voice was from screaming. Cracked and hoarse, she barely managed to speak, "I'll renounce my claims." She could feel Ninak relax when she spoke, "But I'll never grovel to you!"
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:06 am
Her first words cause a smile to cross his expression, but what she said next brought a growl from his lips. He gripped her shoulder harshly and turned throwing her effortlessly into the wall with the slightest of effort, but it would have still been enough to bend a steel girder.
"Insolent-!" he shouted, stalking across the floor, his hand raised to backhand her again.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:09 am
Another scream parted her lips when he held her shoulder even tighter. She groaned when her body slammed against the wall. Weakly, she stood, and watched his hand to come to backhand. Already, her vision was blurring from the pain.
Akina forced herself between the two. Where she was would cause his attack on Natalie to hit her instead. Her pink eyes were still tear-filled, as she had to watch her sister be punished.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:44 am
His hand made contact with Akina's cheek with enough force to send her into the wall, a growl issuing from his lips. He took a deep breath, and calmed himself. Looking at Akina with a frusturated gaze.
"Alright, Akina. You wish to take her place?" he asked, coming towards her with his hand in a fist, "Or, would you rather do it yourself. Yes, perhaps that is the best option. You punish her, I will watch."
He stepped back and waved his hand towards Natalie, "Unless you would wish for me to do it..."
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:44 pm
(Even though it's hard to do, Akina should realize how much better it would be if she did it. She could cause pain in her own ways, enough to satisfy Narmer, but not cause real damage from what she's doing. Narmer, on the other hand, is causing indiscriminate damage, so that's much worse.)
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:57 pm
(At the same time, Akina knows Narmer cannot kill her. If she took Natalie's place, she would be able to know Natalie could survive it. Besides, it would still be punishment for Natalie to watch Akina have to go through it, too. Since Akina is brahmaparush, I'm worried about just letting her go on Natalie, especially since she's all ready wound up from hearing her previous screams. She might go too far on accident. gonk )
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 4:07 pm
Wincing, she felt her back hit against the wall, as her cheek tingled with pain from the slap. Wide, pink eyes stared at Narmer, unsure of what to do. Natalie's screams were so perfect... The pitch and volume was just enough to make her want to slaughter her. She couldn't. That was Natalie, her closest friend, and most loyal one, without a doubt. Knowing she could not hurt her friend, or see her hurt anymore, a soft whisper came from her lips.
"I-I would rather... That I took her place..." Even though it would most likely be easier if she just did a quick punishment to Natalie and got it over with. Just the sound of her screams would make Akina go too far, and probably end up killing her.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:35 pm
(( I was sort of intending what Silver was mentioning... 'I will beat you so that he does not beat you harder' thing... Hmm... Narmer could always oversee the punishment. If he intends to let Natalie live, he'd keep Akina from killing her. ))
(( Or he could get Ninak to punish her. His kid'n all. ))
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:38 pm
(( Does he even care if Natalie dies or not? I didn't think he did. Then, it would be up to Akina to stop herself. Since she's such a young brahmaparush, it would be incredibly hard. That's why I was trying to stay away from it. If you want Akina to, then he can always be like, "b***h, beat your friend. D:<" ))
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:51 pm
[ xD Alright. She'll have to beat Nattie, maybe Ninak can stop her when it's too much, since he's just standing there? ]
Narmer raised his eyebrow, his hands crossed across his chest.
"I think not, Akina. The Pharaoh is not the whipping boy for another. If anything, I should be beating her for your disobedience. In fact, I think I might in the future."
He chuckled, turning his attention back to Natalie on the floor, "Get to work, Akina."
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:58 pm
Akina's eyes were on the ground, wishing Natalie had never come here. In an instant, her eyes were locked on Narmer again, surprise clear in their pink color. A direct command, one where she had to obey. Her blood -his blood- compelled her to. Sighing in defeat, Akina kneeled next to Natalie, as she turned the beaten vampiress to lie on her stomache. Closing her eyes, she let her claws get to work.
She used a single claw to rip down the back of her shirt. Then, she allowed her fingers to have fun. It would be incredibly painful. Though nothing she could not heal within the next few days. She refused to shatter her bones as Narmer did. First off, Akina dipped her claw under the skin at the bottom of her neck. Quickly, she ran it down her spine, pulling all of the skin off.
Natalie moaned in pain as her shattered bones were forced to move. Her eyes were just about closed, with a dimming vision. Instantaneously, her eyes snapped open, as a coarse scream vibrated from her lips. The skin evenly peeling off, revealing her pearly joints in her spine.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:37 pm
(( Sorry for taking so long... laundry duty x.x ))
Narmer nodded approvingly, "Very well done, very well done indeed. You may stop, if you wish. I am satisfied. She will not do it again?" he asked, looking into Natalie's pained face.
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:44 pm
(( It's okay. I've got some homework I should probably do. D= ... Tomorrow! :3 ))
Akina did not listen to Narmer. More technically, she did not hear him in the first place. She forced herself to think of Natalie as a complete stranger, causing her screams to be even sweeter. The instincts pushed her farther, having her claws dig into the nerves lining her spinal cord.
As he listened to more of his child's screams, he heard what Narmer said, unlike Akina. Quickly, he went behind her, and wrapped his arms around her, holding her arms at her sides so she would not be able to hurt Natalie anymore. "He said to stop, Akina. Now stop." The words were hard, even as he looked into the dazzling pink eyes.
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