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[Misc.] SasuSaku Open Poetry Night. Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2 3 ... 5 6 7 8 9 10 ... 13 14 15 16 [>] [»|]

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I want to wax poetry upon you.
  So listen and hit the bongos.
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tenshinohana-chan

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:02 pm


Um... let's just write poetry, shall we?

Here's a kind of fanfic type of poem. Enjoy.

One Rainy Day

One rainy day I strolled
on the street of Cherry Lane
when I saw a small somebody
sitting sadly in the rain.

I went to him and said "What's up?"
But he only looked forlorn
I felt a lil embarrassed
But he continued to look torn.

I had no idea what to do
so I shared my umbrella with him
he asked why I did such thing
I said it was a whim.

He was so sad that
I wished I could do something
So I offered the pretzels from my bag
But he couldn't stop his staring.

"Why are you being so nice to me?
This isn't doesn't mostly happen."
He asked if I knew him well
Or if I was after a dollar ten.

I said that I could stand people
looking forlorn in the rain.
It breaks my heart and I wanted to
always make them smile again.

He looked like he didn't trust me
But I could only smile and grin.
He continued to stare strangely,
I wonder what I was to him.

It usually was a thankless job
to make someone happy
the rain had stopped, I had to go
I couldn't wait for any.

Then a couple of words I heard
That I have never heard as much
He looked up and mumbled "Thank you"
and turned away to blush.

I watched his stern red face
look happier than before
He was cute when he was happy
My heart started to beat more.

Maybe I fell in love that day
to someone who needed me
It was always hard to make him smile
but I'll try to, patiently.

...

But now he has gone off and
left no comforting words of good-bye
The "Thank You" that should've made me smile
now only makes me cry.

I want to grab the moment
when he has come back to me
I will drag and beat him, then heal him
if the need of it comes to be

Now I'll be content to remember
the rainy day on Cherry Lane
when I saw a small somebody
sitting sadly in the rain.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:15 pm


That's so sad!! Very beautiful!

Sakura~Kusanagi


Taisetsu-chan

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:21 pm


Untitled (It’s actually called, “Untitled.”)

Endless darkness…
Is that where he resides?
Walls of black diamond stop him from escaping.

There I go…
My world blooms in light.
I try my best to get to him.

Sweet love,
Beautiful love,
Why should I have thee?

Dark love,
Tainted love,
Why do I pursue thee?

What shall I call our love?
It’s neither of these.
Our love is not yet titled.

Universal blackness…
Is this where he is held?
All his efforts are for naught.

Here I am…
This is where I stand.
I will try to save him.

He isn’t a hero,
Yet to me, he is,
Whether he thinks he is or not.

He’s just a child,
That I wish to protect.
The other parts of him I shall love.

What is our love?
Is it one-sided?
Is it really nothing at all?

Our love is not yet named,
It is unknown.
Our love is still untitled.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:26 pm


OMG, that's beautiful. Very good in the use of the word "Untitled," not because you can't think of a title, but because... well... their love is untitled. So sweet! heart

tenshinohana-chan


Taisetsu-chan

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:31 pm


tenshinohana-chan
OMG, that's beautiful. Very good in the use of the word "Untitled," not because you can't think of a title, but because... well... their love is untitled. So sweet! heart


Thanks! blaugh I was looking at how, when you guys couldn't think of a title, you'd call it "Untitled." And I thought, "Whoa. That'd be cool as an actual poem name!" And then the ending line, "Our love is still untitled" just popped into me head! xD
PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:42 pm


That was amazing, beautful and definatly fit SasuSaku. 3nodding

iNibble v2


Taisetsu-chan

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:47 pm


~[Fading Light]~
That was amazing, beautful and definatly fit SasuSaku. 3nodding

Thank you!
PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:13 pm


^^

Sakura~Kusanagi


PeacefulLight

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 6:29 pm


~[Fading Light]~
Your second poem fits with this Sasuke Tribute Fic I wrote. o.O Did you steal my journal!?

Naw, I jsut read you mind. :3 I'm kidding! I jsut have such a gift to do such. biggrin

@Tenshi: That's a really good poem. :3
@Taiset: Nicely done!

Lol, I'm a poem rater! biggrin

Hm...
PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:04 am


I'm still kinda hung over the Sakura POV.

Rewrite

If the world was written in a different way,
if fate decided to twist differently,
would you still love me?

If tragedy had not flamed your soul,
if loss had not numbed your spirit,
would you still have cared?

If I had met you earlier,
if I had said a comforting word that day,
would you have given me a glance?

If I was stronger, if I was better,
If I had been someone worth noticing,
would I have been able to stop you?

If I had said those three promising words earlier,
those words that mean a thousand feelings,
would you have stayed with me?

If you were something that isn't anything
like you are right now,
would you have loved me?

If I were someone who wasn't anyone like I am,
who would not be me,
is it me that you could've loved?

Maybe it's better this way.

Nothing is perfect.

Because in the end, I would have it no other way.


I know, I know. It's so obvious it was impromptu. I wrote it after listening to Asian Kung Fu Generation's "Rewrite."

tenshinohana-chan


PeacefulLight

PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:50 am


*sniffles* That.. Was.. B-beautiful! crying She would SO send a book with all her poems in it to Sasuke in Sound...
PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:32 am


TT.TT Tenshi you have good quality, your poems are deepier than mine because you take your time to write them and to get full meaning into them.

iNibble v2


PeacefulLight

PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 12:57 pm


*nods* Oh.. I'm gonna make a poem about Sasuke's chibi-self. :3 I'll post it when I finish it.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 3:36 pm


I'm writing a poem about Itachi, from Sasuke's view. Small Hints of SasuSaku. <3

iNibble v2


PeacefulLight

PostPosted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 5:27 pm


I was thinking of putting up my poems on Fanfiction.net...
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