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That was made of win.

I don't have an account on ff.net since I can't write fanfiction, so sorry. D:

I'll leave a review here!

My review here would be that it was done extremely well, but sometimes when I read a fic with too much description or extra sentences that might not necessarily serve a purpose, or when sentences don't get to the point (like this one), I skip over them, which is something you don't want your reader doing.

It definately wasn't a big problem in your fic, and the description was superb, but some sentences could have been toned down a bit to make it easier to read.

I'm usually wrong when it comes to these things, though, so you should probably ignore me.

Really? Well...do I need to anymore? XD

It's a common mistake that is sometimes overlooked. I rarely skipped over sentences in your fic, though, which is a really good sign. You're a very talented writer, and I'll be stalking your fic from now on.

M'kay, I left it...I think. =D

Why don't people realize that some of the best fanfiction is overlooked?

Some of the fics with the most reviews are also really bad. >_>

Flames suck, but it also seems that people rarely give criticism in their reviews, which I know many authors (and I) really like. o_o

Okay, here's the news.

As some of you may already know, seven pages of chapter 2 had to be trashed - obviously, this is going to mean big delays till the next update, not that there was an actual date in mind...

There is good news, and bad news about the changes. Bad news? Yaoi = gone, in this chapter. Good news? It makes more sense this way, and it'll be written better.

However, I am a bit unsure about my new changes. Some things that you're deffinitly going to notice about Sora in this story is that I excentuate the fact that he is deffinitly beyond normal human standers quite extensivly. It's not favoritism - I would do the same if someone like Cloud or Leon showed up, though less for the latter, maybe... Then again, Cloud kinda isn't human, sooo... that's a bit of a moot point, I suppose. Heh. ^^"

Also: There will be angst. I appologise for this in advance if you don't like that, but I think that after everything that's happened, it was be an insult to his charecter if he wasn't messed up a little. Mercifully, however, there will be no cutting, no suicide, none of that stuff. NONE. ...Not that I have a problem with that, but it just really isn't right for this story at all, and I really just... have a problem with putting a charecter I have that strong an empathic connection with through that kind of hell.

One thing you should keep in mind though, and this is my own personal touch here, is that he has a rather... severe... case of post traumatic stress that will become more obvious as the... hm... well, events, wear off a little. For those of you who have experienced post traumatic stress, you know what I'm talking about. There's this sort of... delay. And then... Well, the next thing you know, you're instinctivly falling into a fighting position the second you hear a door open, or you attack anyone who touches you while you're three-quarters asleep.

...So yes, there will be some of that.


*coughs*

I have to give you credit.
I'd send ina sample, but I'm more interested in reading yours.
Really, I should draw you a goat.