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 Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 9:25 pm
Second Character is Ready, Alex Barret.  Thanks Casey! *hug*
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 9:52 pm
Nice job on the Alex Barrett sprite there Chi!
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Posted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 6:00 am
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 9:59 am
Sorry, This Week i can work in the RPG for Study... ^^U
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:34 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:44 am
Official Critique!!! Island of Moreau
Hunh - never heard of a Quique before smile - Looks like a neat mustelid!
I understand that English isn't your native language, and I know you're learning. Flow is more important generally than spelling. But if it's distracting it might count against you in RP contests. We know you're learning - and we definately understand. But don't hesitate to use spell checks, ask for help, etc smile
I like the concept of trying to make up for the wrongs of his father by overcompensating with charity work, but ultimately it's for appearing good to other people as opposed to doing it out of the good of his heart.
All in all, the character concept sound good, though honestly I did have a bit of trouble getting through some of the grammar. Work on polishing it a bit, but otherwise he sounds very good smile Thanks for the Critique, I know that I need to improve my english, ugh. That will be the most difficult part... whee I'll see what part need to be polish blaugh
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 9:08 am
Hey, sweet, if you need help with spelling/grammar check, don't be afraid to hit me up. ^^ I'm actually majoring in English and I've been called a human spellcheck on more than one occasion, so I ought to be able to help.
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Posted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 2:00 pm
Hey Thanks Shiaree!! ^^ I'll acept you help, Thanks. when we can start with the class? xD
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:51 am
*is hugged*
No problem, Chi! Any time. I'm having issues with tektek. As soon as that clears up I'll get your 100% up. ^^
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 3:56 pm
Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuux!!!!! ._.
My Pc have some problem with the System32 and something... And can do nothing in it... I can't open Windown, I can't open the Anti-Failure System... Nothing ._.
I hope that tomorrow I'd know what happen whit it... I don't want to loss All the Data in it. ._.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 10:55 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 1:24 pm
well... New Pc, trying to recover all lossing info.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 5:55 pm
Sorry, I had forgotten I posted here. ^^
If you want me to just spellcheck your front page, I'll get on it as soon as I can.
If you want something else, lemme know and I'll help ya.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:11 pm
Aww, don't worry Aislinn and congrantz for enter in the island, I hope that you dont forget the questers sad xD
I'll give you the thanks if you can help me with the front page, And tell me what I need to care in a future, i don't want to ask to you always that I wrote something. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 7:30 pm
*nods* I figured the front page was sort of crucial.
As far as the rest, I think there are online spellcheckers, if nothing else. You don't have Word? If you do, you should try plugging stuff into that and doing a spell/grammar check before you post it, at least for big important rps and stuff.
Of course I won't forget the Questor guild! XD. I spent enough time here, afterall.
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