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| It’s GODAWFUL! Scrap the whole thing! |
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 Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 10:53 pm
I am now open for critiques!!!!! heart heart heart
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 12:32 pm
*says in musical voice* Tag!
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 2:41 pm
I'm glad to finally see Branwan fleshed out. She seems like a very intriguing character and is believable. I can't find any inconsistences at this point as most of this sounds very typical and everyday. She almost reminds of Daria from the show of the same name.
If I find anything to nitpick, I'll let you know. Only thing I can badmouth is the grammar at times but oh well. Overall, I give Branwan a thumbs up of approval and look forward to sharing some RPs with her. I think Christopher and her will get along nicely.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:40 am
Well I’m glad Branwan seems real. And feel free to badmouth my grammar, it needs that. XD
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:04 am
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 12:56 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:04 pm
~singing to the tune of "I'm Ready" by Fats Domino~
Well I'm ready!
I'm willing!
And I'm A-BLE to post 'n post all night!
Come on lil' Branwan!
We're gonna post!
We're gonna tag!
From the mornin' to night!
Cause I'm ready!
Mmmhmm
And I'm a-ble!
Mmmhmm...
TAG! razz
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:15 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:33 pm
Whaaaaaaaaat? razz
I was just trying to have some fun with the tagging. Afterall, Christopher is a shiny character as you put it. But ok, that'll be the last time I do that.
By the way, tag.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:49 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:52 pm
Right back at you!
The tag that is.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:01 pm
HUH! *flounces away*
Branwan has a boston accent, can you tell?
Tag!
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:07 pm
Just a little bit, yes.
TAG!
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:09 pm
Tag!
Oh, and Dark_Musashi will be joining us in just a little bit.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:21 pm
Tag Chris, well it's only a small accent as she grew up just outside of boston.
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