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 Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2014 7:05 am
Feiyimei Type:Kongidō Rank: 40-50ish Related Character: Vizards Name: Shinku Machibuse (深紅待ち伏せ, Crimson Ambush) Incantation: "Blinded by red and deafened by lies, be consumed by ignorance." Description: This spell is a mixture of Bakudo #21 Sekiento and a Vizard's Bala or Cero. The caster makes a downward swing of their arm as though they were throwing a smoke-bomb to the ground as soon as they finish chanting. There will be a small detonation that releases a cloud of red smoke at their feet much like the Bakudo spell, but after 2 seconds, the red smoke will condense into Balas or Ceros that will detonate on the spot. It is more of a trap than a means of diversion. Type:Kongidō Rank: 30-50 Related Character: Vizards Name: Sajida Hitojichi (サジダ人質, Prostrating Prisoner) Incantation: Let this be your release." It is said after the spell has been initiated. Description:The caster shoots out a blast of Reiryoku that mimics the shape and form of Balas or Ceros from each of their finger. They do not detonate immediately upon contact with a hard surface and stick to it instead until the caster says "Let this be your release" followed by the spell name to detonate them all at once. Should Balas be used, only the spell name is necessary to detonate them. They cannot be forcibly removed from the surface they've stuck themselves to and any attempt would cause them to detonate prematurely. Both approved as is. Now for the rankings: Shinku Machibuse - 37...now, I know you put in 40-50 but when you consider the fact thattwo of the most commonly used Hadō are level 31 (Shakkahō) and 33 (Sōkatsui) respectively and are frequently shown to be able to do some serious damage to even high level opponents, I figured that the same could hold true here. It's simple, straightforward, but still packs a punch. Sajida Hitojichi - For the same reason, I'm putting this one at a nice round 49. A bit more complex due to the fact that it's intended to be a delayed reaction and still packs a serious wallop. In closing, very cool job with the first of the official Kongidō.
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2014 6:23 pm
Type:Hado
Rank:1-30
Related Character:Public
Name: Kuro Byakurai
Incantation: Darkness pierce through the pale light
Description: The practitioner gathers high-density spiritual energy, which they discharge from both hands. Alternatively, the practitioner points at the intended target with their index finger and generates a concentrated bolt of lighting to use against the target. Unklike the original this byakurai can be fired from the tip of a zanpaktou with a finer stream of lightning.
Other:This kido spell is the same as hado # besides the color and sword casting and can be learned in the academy if requested.
Type:Kaido
Rank: 20-40
Related Character: Public
Name: Healing Surge
Incantation: Cleansing light bathes over the wounds
Description: When the caster performs healing surge he/she will start to glow a golden while color while his/her wounds start to heal at alarming rates. If the move is allowed to finish he/she will be completely healed.The healing is not instantanious though it does take some time to heal. When the ability finishes or when the caster is attacked the aura of healing light will flash with a glass shattering noise echoing as the light disappears.Since this isnt an attack the only way this ability will not work is if the caster is attacked while activating this ability or attacked while the abiliy is active in which case the ability will simply fail to activate. The caster cannot attack while using this move. Power Duration is 4 turns if not interrupted.{4=100%}{3=75%}{2=50%}{1=25%}.This move has a 10 post cool down time regardless if the move is allowed to finish or is interrupted.
Other: This is not a spell to use while in combat or if so the opponent has to be stunned or the fight has to be over before using this spell.
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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2014 6:47 pm
Master Kamina Reborn Type:Hado Rank:1-30 Related Character:Public Name: Kuro Byakurai Incantation: Darkness pierce through the pale light Description: The practitioner gathers high-density spiritual energy, which they discharge from both hands. Alternatively, the practitioner points at the intended target with their index finger and generates a concentrated bolt of lighting to use against the target. Unklike the original this byakurai can be fired from the tip of a zanpaktou with a finer stream of lightning. Other:This kido spell is the same as hado # besides the color and sword casting and can be learned in the academy if requested. #14 Quote: Type:Kaido Rank: 20-40 Related Character: Public Name: Healing Surge Incantation: Cleansing light bathes over the wounds Description: When the caster performs healing surge he/she will start to glow a golden while color while his/her wounds start to heal at alarming rates. If the move is allowed to finish he/she will be completely healed.The healing is not instantanious though it does take some time to heal. When the ability finishes or when the caster is attacked the aura of healing light will flash with a glass shattering noise echoing as the light disappears.Since this isnt an attack the only way this ability will not work is if the caster is attacked while activating this ability or attacked while the abiliy is active in which case the ability will simply fail to activate. The caster cannot attack while using this move. Power Duration is 4 turns if not interrupted.{4=100%}{3=75%}{2=50%}{1=25%}.This move has a 10 post cool down time regardless if the move is allowed to finish or is interrupted. Other: This is not a spell to use while in combat or if so the opponent has to be stunned or the fight has to be over before using this spell. #40
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Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2014 2:58 pm
As promised, I'm reviewing the Kidos you've made and ranking them. I'm also reviewing the private ones at the same time though your character won't be able to 'discover' them until you have provided more public Kido spells. I've also made some edit, mainly to remove your character's name from the description and added some details/specifications/powerups so as to make sure the spells are really different from what we already have. If I recall, these were supposed to be Hakuda techniques at first, but, now that they are Kido, your character will need to speak the incantation (only the name and number) before using them. Joji-tan - Modified Kido#1. Awai Inazuma no Ken ( 淡い稲妻の拳, Fist of Pale Lightning) None When Byakurai is cast, the spiritual energy is pulled back and wrapped around the caster's arm, which is recoiled in the position before releasing a single punch. Upon release, the strength of both the physical strike and the spell are doubled. - Hado #6 Quote: #2. Kyōdaina Suiryoku ( 強大な推力, Mighty Thrust) Based on Shō (衝, Thrust), Noriko the practitioner combines both physical strength and spiritual energy to augment the strength of this simple Kido by one hundred-fold. The closer that they are to the target, the more internal damage that is suffered, such as broken bones and disrupted internal systems. While it can be used as an open hand attack, the destructive force is concentrated when used with a single finger. Its range and area of effect is also greater than that of a normal Shō. - Hado #27 Quote: - Custom Kido - Future TechniquesThrough much deliberation and extensive training with Tsuki no Ko, Noriko has gained access to the fiery reiatsu of her Bankai without having to release her Zanpakuto. With this latest development, she has created a number of fire based Kido-infused Hakuda techniques and abilities. This part may come into conflict with the upcoming Taijutsu system, but I think it could work as one of the Bankai ability so long as there is a drawback. Quote: #1. Shōkyaku Suru ( 焼却する, Incinerate) By exchanging motion for strength, Noriko is able to augment the intensity that a minute amount of her fiery spirit energy would have on a target when she touches it with one fingertip. Specifically, the target is incinerated completely from the point of contact. The effect will be finished within three of her posts if the target is not able to extinguish the fire before that time. It can burn a hole through an opponent if it is that much weaker than she is. What do you mean by by "exchanging motion for strength"? Does she become slower? I think this spell would be Hado #30 Quote: #2. Ryū no O ( 竜の尾, Tail of the Dragon) A tendril of heated energy that can be seen as distorted air waves wraps itself quickly around the target. Upon contact, it is set ablaze, At this point, Noriko the practitioner can let it incinerate whatever is within its hold completely or keep it bound for three posts at most. Bakudo #38 Quote: #3. Dante no Sākuru ( ダンテのサークル, Dante's Circle) By passing his or her right hand in a circular motion against any solid surface, the practitioner conjures a dark red circle on the ground around the target. Upon completion of the hand movements, a tall column of fire bursts forth within the space of the circle to burn to ashes whatever is caught within it. - Hado #53 Quote: #4. Honō no Chūshin ( 炎の中心, Center of the Flame) This is a fire-based equivalent of Shunko. Noriko's body is encased in 2000°C, making her reiatsu appear white around her body. Her physical surroundings will alter dramatically as the air becomes wavy with the heat, tree burst into flames, and the very ground melting underfoot. These effects can occur withing 50 km. Everything within this distance from her will be heated gradually. Any physical contact can result in third and fourth degree burns or instant incineration. This ability can be used only once during an entire battle and it lasts for five posts in total. So, if she used it and cancelled it within one post, she can use it for four more posts only. If this is Shunko, it would go in the Hakuda category as a variant of Shunko. This would be a personalized version of the technique because the upcoming Hakuda system has its own cooldown system and what not. 50km is way too much. Shrink it down to 800 meters max. I have the feeling that this would go better as a Bankai ability to be honest.
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