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Elen_Gilthoniel
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:21 pm


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She's approved. You can post a profile thread and all that--she won't have a roommate to start with. =3
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:53 am


Phaea

Hi there Phaea.. I really love your characters.. You're really good RPing them base on their personality..

You can add 'Paranoid' as an additional flaw.. Since I've read that he feels like somebody is watching/following him..

And he's good to go.. He's accepted and you know the rules emotion_awesome His room mate will be ME emotion_dowant Kidding.. His room mate will be MacPEE.. emotion_awesome I mean Mac..

StrawberryZ0mbie

Hi Eshy.. Happy Birthday! xD Quoting you in just to let you know *huggles8

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 1:59 am


StrawberryZ0mbie
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She's approved. You can post a profile thread and all that--she won't have a roommate to start with. =3


Yayz!! Thank you, thank you. With the rooms, where do I post in?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:09 am


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StrawberryZ0mbie
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She's approved. You can post a profile thread and all that--she won't have a roommate to start with. =3


Yayz!! Thank you, thank you. With the rooms, where do I post in?


i don't understand. D= Are you asking what sub forum you post in or what threads are active right now?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:18 am


StrawberryZ0mbie
M i n i R e d S t a r s
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She's approved. You can post a profile thread and all that--she won't have a roommate to start with. =3


Yayz!! Thank you, thank you. With the rooms, where do I post in?


i don't understand. D= Are you asking what sub forum you post in or what threads are active right now?


Do I make my own sub-forum for Lucy's room? thats what I was meant to be asking D:
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:32 am


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StrawberryZ0mbie
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She's approved. You can post a profile thread and all that--she won't have a roommate to start with. =3


Yayz!! Thank you, thank you. With the rooms, where do I post in?


i don't understand. D= Are you asking what sub forum you post in or what threads are active right now?


Do I make my own sub-forum for Lucy's room? thats what I was meant to be asking D:


No, if you look in the astronomy forum, you'll see that no one else has done that and that we're all just using the dorm threads. =)

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:35 am


StrawberryZ0mbie
M i n i R e d S t a r s
StrawberryZ0mbie
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StrawberryZ0mbie
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She's approved. You can post a profile thread and all that--she won't have a roommate to start with. =3


Yayz!! Thank you, thank you. With the rooms, where do I post in?


i don't understand. D= Are you asking what sub forum you post in or what threads are active right now?


Do I make my own sub-forum for Lucy's room? thats what I was meant to be asking D:


No, if you look in the astronomy forum, you'll see that no one else has done that and that we're all just using the dorm threads. =)


Oh, derp. Thanks cool
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:32 am


Magic and Mystery presents. . .



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Penelope Thomasina Mikelovitch
department: Music
(OCCUPATION: STUDENT)
"Well... That's ah... I mean... Hi."


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nickname:Penny. Twig.

age:15

gender:Female

height and weight:178 centimeters, 65 kg

blood type:A Positive

sexual orientation:Gay

status:Single

birthday:August 28

zodiac sign :

appearance:Tall, with thick reddish brown hair that tends to be on the more uncontrollable side and goes down in between her shoulder blades. There's a reason she used to be called "Twig," though she is by no means unnecessarily thin. It was mostly in regards to the length of her limbs, and her height. She has soft facial features, big blue eyes, a unobtrusive brow, and a nose that might be considered slightly longer than average.

personality:All in all, Penelope is a warm and affectionate person. She deeply cares for her friends and is very sensitive to their feelings, only feeling truly at peace if she knows that those she cares about are at peace as well. This is mainly due to the fact that she doesn't make friends easily, or at least she doesn't believe she does, so she tends to do anything she can to make sure that the few friends she has stick around. She really does enjoy being around and interacting with people... the only problem is that she's so shy that she often finds it impossible to do so. She tends be incredibly awkward when meeting new people, but won't hesitate to respond in a friendly manner if talked to. Most of her awkwardness comes from the fact that she tends to overthink how she should interact with people, and in overthinking, she tends to verbalize things that she probably shouldn't.


character flaws:
✖Self Conscious - Especially when it comes to her physical attributes. She feels that she's too tall, or that her hair is too wild, or that her nose is just too long. She gets easily depressed if any sort of physical flaws are pointed out.
✖ High strung - She gets startled really easily
✖ Speech impediment - not so much your standard lisp or stutter. When Penelope tries to form sentences, they end up coming out... odd. The severity of how mixed up her sentences are usually rises depending on how nervous or uncomfortable she is.
✖ Easily flustered
✖Easily Swayed - She has a very hard time saying no to people.


ability:(ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE)

talents:Piano - Penelope is a fairly talented pianist.
Singer - Penelope is a fantastic singer, though she's too shy to sing in front of others
Bassist - Penelope can play the bass quite decently


bio:Penelope has had a fairly normal and good life, as far as lives go that is. Her parent's are still happily married. Her family has always been comfortably middle class... She's never had a relative or close friend killed by a serial murderer or anything. Nope, the only thing that could be considered abnormal about Penelope's life would probably be that her parents are both Wizards. Well, a Wizard and a Witch, respectively. Despite this, Penelope has always gone to public schools, and lived the life of a normal, non magic using child, always keeping the fact that her father would go off and settle legal cases between other magic users ( a wizard lawyer, go figure) and her mother would go and cure odd curses as her day job, a secret from her friends.

It wasn't a difficult job actually. Penelope didn't really have many friends to keep secrets from. Being an early bloomer, as well as fairly sort of really introverted doesn't lend aid to the social sides of childhood. As such, She grew up with very few friends, who didn't stay friends for very long, whether due to them moving away, changing schools, or the occasional mysterious disappearance (her parents are wizards... well, a wizard and a witch respectively) Her only constant friend was her Teddy Bear, who was her imaginary friend up until the middle of middle school.

Towards the end of middle school, she was sent to an all girl's boarding school in england. Why? Well frankly, her parent's were unsure what to do about their daughter's social inadequacies. They decided that a change in scenery, and a bit of healthy forced coexistence with other girls her age would help her to make some friends and break out of her shell. It worked to a degree. She did make friends, but once again, she was bullied due to some of her seemingly uncommon physical attributes, I.E. Her height specifically. It was also here that she realized her sexual preference... And that is all I have to say about that.

So she made friends, but ended up staying fairly shy and awkward, with a newly reinforced body issues feature attached to boot. Nice, but you know, not really. She ended up leaving the school after she began to abruptly exhibit magical qualities. This came as a bit of a surprise to her parents, seeing as she hadn't ever shown any magical aptitude up till that point, but it wasn't something they were necessarily unhappy about. They enrolled her in the Resonance Skies academy as soon as possible, sending her there to hone her newly discovered abilities.


likes:
✔ Shojo Manga
✔ Comics
✔ Stuffed Animals
✔ Jazz
✔ Tea


dislikes:
✖ Long, Dark Hallways
✖ Spiders
✖ Flirts
✖ Asparagus
✖ Scary Movies


extra information:Penelope is a bit of a closet comic book nerd.
After spending several years at a boarding school in England, she speaks with a soft, North London Accent
She's a bit of a tea snob.
Being called Penny makes her incredibly flustered. However, she refuses to state why...

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 6:59 pm


(Your Bunnie Babe) presents. . .



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Trinity Fray Clare
department:Music
Student
"A pictrue says a throusand words,and speaks many storys."


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nickname:Trint

age:14

gender:Female

height and weight:158 cm 49kg

blood type:O

sexual orientation:Straight

status:Single

birthday:October 13

zodiac sign :Scorpio

appearance:Trinity has short blonde hair to her shoulders and has bright blue eyes.Her skin is alittle pale and she has a scar on her right shoulder.She's pretty flatchested,and wears flattop shoes or scandals to almost all the time.

personality:Trinity has a smart mouth and use's it when she feel's like it,weither people find her acting sarcastic or not.She'll sometimes keep quiet,watching from the side line's before jumping into something so she won't think she's making a fool of herself.She's a calm young girl,and can be known as a little easy going,althrough she can get alittle serious about her art and photography.

character flaws:
✖ Aimless - She pretty much has no sense of direction
✖ Absentminded - she often daydreams from time to time
✖ Smart a**
✖ Phobia of cats,along with needles
✖ Nosey


ability:(ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE)

talents: singer - She really isn't that bad of one since she used to sing alot when she was a kid
phototherapy - she learned from her farther how to take photos',and she love's taking pictrue's of people..
art - she does different kinds of ways for art like painting,drawing,and chark, she likes making 3D like art on sidewalks,something like your falling in a hole or in a hottub,even through it takes her days just to make the shape of it..


bio:Trinity grew up being homeschooled,living with her mother,farther and older brother,even through her mother worked in another city.While her mother worked in another city,her farther was in phototherapy and often brought her and her brother,Oliver,with him.Her dad was her teacher in fact,so he had excuses to bring her along.
She and her family went on trips to different places half the time,just so her farther could take photo's of the Pyramids in Giza and Egypt,go to Franch to see the tower,so you get the pictrue.
In fact,you could say they sorta travled half the globe.
For her tenth birthday,her family took her to Tokyo in Japan to spend a few days there for it.Her dad gave her a camera of her own to take photo's with,and since then she has taken extreme care of it.
This year,to improve her skill's her parent's sent her to Resonance Skies Academy.


likes:
✔ Jackets,sweaters,coats,etc.
✔ Games - Video games,card games,etc.
✔ Pokemon - She's been in love with these cute little guy's since she was little,and loves anything about them
✔ Stuffed Animals
✔ Coffe,tea,milk,etc.
✔ Music
✔ Red,white and black.It's some of her facorite colors


dislikes:
✖ Carrots
✖ Loud people/places
✖ Bad endings
✖ Docters,needles,medicine - She's pretty scared of anything that has to do with docters
✖ Cigarettes
✖ High heel's


extra information:- Trint has a older brother name Oliver
- Trint was hooked by a fishing hook on her right shoulder from a fishing trip when she was small,which is where the scar came from
- If she likes a photo,Trinity will draw whatever was in it,and if a person,she may even give them the drawing
- Trinity still has her old camera with her,and she carry's it around with her in it's black bag almost all the time
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:53 pm


Craft_Knightpresents. . .



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Ein Kazehaya
department: Astronomy : Student
"Starry night skies are filled with stories of hope, trust, fate, and bonds."


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nickname:Ei-chan

age:Sixteen

gender:Male

height and weight:171cm and 60kg

blood type:AB

sexual orientation:Straight

status:Single

birthday:16th of August

zodiac sign :Leo

appearance:The picture above says it all

personality: To start of, Ein can be blunt to a certain extent yet an intelligent and calm young man. He takes everything via planning ahead before taking a action and may use cunning procedures if seems to fit although is somewhat laid back. However, he hates violence and will only fight if its necessary. Ein can be mischievous like his cousin and he too is kind and warm-hearted. He cares for his love ones dearly same with his friends and is ready to put himself in harms way to help them, including strangers. Ein is reckless and evil to a certain degree.

character flaws:
✖ Impish
✖ Blunt
✖ Reckless
✖ Mercurial
✖ Laid back


ability:

talents:
• Innovative, imaginative, strategic mind - Ein can easily formulate plans, ideas and such with a definite detail.
• Improvising - Self explanatory
• Sewing - Even men has the right to do this


bio:His story, Ein's story starts with his parents passing away when he was just a year old. He was took in by his aunt or to be more precises, Yukiharu's mother. And the rest of his story gone on like Yuki's with a difference and that is Ein will stay up a bit late and star gaze till that day. Ein hit his head at the glass of the door next to him, his uncle and aunt dying before his eyes and Schnee screaming for help till her voice gone hoarse yet she still continued. His consciousness little by little faded to darkness.

When he woke up from his deep slumber. Ein caught the scent of clean air and was cold, almost like a hospital, sans the sanitizing chemicals and the recycled air. He slowly opened his eyes and what he saw was his cousin. Seating at a chair, skillfully peeling the apple and was around the ages of 17. But after a teary reunion with Yuki, Ein found out that the girl can't speak without feeling pain at her throat. He stayed at the hospital for sometime to rehabilitate his body back to shape and had to take a lot of supplementary lessons to catch up due to him being in a coma for a few years


likes:
✔ The night sky
✔ Yukiharu
✔ Books
✔ Coffee and sweets
✔ Surprising people(especially Yuki)
✔ Many more things


dislikes:
✖ Sun
✖ Arrogance
✖ Rashness
✖ Cloudy night sky
✖ Few more things


extra information:
• Ein is Yukiharu's cousin.
• His a albino which is why he hates the sun.
• He wears contact lens due to him having a really poor eyesight which comes with his albinism.
• Many more

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 3:33 pm


Dantes_river

okay he's accepted ^^
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 6:57 pm


Emperor Ochimaru presents. . .



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Shirune Takagi Kinshiro
department: Music
OCCUPATION: Student
"Sweep against the strings, a dream upon a reality."


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nickname: Takagi

age: 19

gender: Male

height and weight: 170 cm 64 kg

blood type:AB

sexual orientation:Straight

status: Single

birthday: June 7

zodiac sign : Gemini

appearance: Shirune's appearance is a rugged type of style, as he always is seen wearing his beanie and and a worn out jacket. Though he shed those when he's playing his cello or about to get into a fight

personality: Shirune is a very quick witted person who's always up for a good challenge. Once he gets into a problem though he'll often try to solve it with stubbornness. He enjoys a good conversation or a thorough workout. When he's not doing any of these things he prefers napping in the sunshine or playing his cello

character flaws:
✖ Stubborn - Won't back down even if he's wrong
✖ Clumsy - Has a habit of falling on obviously seen objects or wires
✖ Competitive - Shirune won't stop till he's either one, or he's been serious defeated
✖ Temperamental - Can go from a good mood to a bad one in a flash
✖ Forgetful - Shirune unfortunately gets revved up about things and forgets sometimes what he's doing.


ability:(ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE)

talents: Mechanic/Good with hands - Shirune has always had a natural knack at fixing things, though he can't fix everything
Playing the Cello - Self-explanatory
Fighter - Never one to give up whether it be inside the ring or inside a classroom. He'll always try his best


bio: Shirune grew up in a rough environment. His parents even though they loved him had to send him away for financial reasons. After being an orphan for 10 years he ran away and tried making it on his own. He lived on for six more years before he was taken in by an elderly couple who wanted to be able to teach a youngster like him a proper way of life. Shirune from there learned the basics of society, but always missed the free willed spirit of being out on his own. Over the course of the next three years he learned how to play the cello and piano from the old man and learned how to cook for himself from the old woman. After they passed away though Shirune had no where else to go, he had no belongings except for a small bag of clothes and the old man's cello. But after rummaging through their room he found an application to The Resonance Skies Academy. He saw that they accepted musician players and he knew that this was the place for him.

likes:
✔ Sunshine
✔ Fried Food
✔ Sleeping
✔ Starlight
✔ Playing his cello


dislikes:
✖ Darkness
✖ Vegetables
✖ Being awake for more than 14 hours everyday
✖ Winter
✖ Seeing someone touch his cello


extra information:Shirune often sleep walks, and has a tendency to make enemies with inanimate objects

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Elen_Gilthoniel
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 8:34 pm


Emperor Ochimaru


He's approved (though you may want to add pertinent information to his appearance section--how tall is he, for instance?). Please post up a character profile thread and his roommate will be Dante.

You may start posting right away. If you have any questions, let me know.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 7:47 pm


Huong Le presents. . .



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Kim Phan
department: Music
Student
"I do what I want. You got a problem with that? Deal with it."


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nickname: Kimmy

age: 17

gender: Female-looking male

height and weight: 193 cm; 72 kg

blood type: AB

sexual orientation: Heterosexual

status: Single

birthday: May 29th

zodiac sign : Gemini

appearance: If one were to call Kim dainty, then that person must clearly be blind. By no means should she be called delicate, and doing so would result in a high heel aimed straight for the eyes. Kim is practically an amazon with her height and she enjoys adding to it with heels. Kim has light green eyes but that’s through colored contacts and has a ridiculous amount wavy pink hair. Since she has broad shoulders and narrow hips, Kim doesn’t enjoy wearing revealing or form-fitting clothes. Instead, she sticks things that are either loose or have plenty of ruffles. For her school uniform, she stuffs herself especially in the boobage department in order to trick people about the curves that she doesn’t have. She also loves her makeup, so it’s rare to ever see her without it on.

personality: Kim is a jerk. Everything she does is for her own sake, and she prefers to do it with the least amount of effort. However, she is aware that she can be an a**, and frankly, she doesn’t give a damn. There is always a purpose as to whatever Kim might be doing because randomness can just shoot itself in the face, and while she might seem “nice” about it, she’ll most likely have some kind of motive behind it. At least, this applies to girls. Guys, however, are a different story. She drops her guard, and she can get overly rambunctious and obnoxious, pretty much being very open about things. Then again, Kim might have a motive behind that as well. Also, sugarcoating is not in Kim’s dictionary. She says what she wants without care, but that doesn’t mean she doesn’t take the time to think about it. Action before thought isn’t her thing.

character flaws:
✖ Vain - What more can she say? She’s hot, and she knows it.
✖ Selfish - She does whatever she wants as long as it benefits her.
✖ Snob - She’s always better.
✖ Flirt - Guys, watch out. Kimmy’s here.
✖ Indifferent: Anything that’s outside of what she needs to do, she won’t bother.


ability:

talents:
- Makeup. From cutesy to horror, she can do it.
- Fashion. She knows how to glam and glitz herself up.
- Mastery of all things heel-like. In other words, she can run like a boss in heels without breaking an ankle.


bio: Kim was lucky. In fact, her younger siblings and she were incredibly lucky to have been born in the U.S. and not Vietnam. Her older sisters, not so much, but hey, this was her story here. They didn’t matter. What mattered was that Kim didn’t have to go through the same hardships as a majority of her family did. That being said, it also meant that she was a tad spoiled. What else can she say? Her parents loved her best, and the whole family knew that.While she didn’t need to lift a finger to please her parents, her sisters did she mention that she had seven of them? had to work for it.

That was the benefit that came with being the favorite, but don’t get her wrong. It wasn’t like she hated her sisters it was more of the things they did or anything. It was more pity than anything else, but hey, that was their business. It wasn’t like Kim could be there 24/7 for them. Her sisters did help influence her though she learned to have a backbone unlike them, so she tried to return the favor. It wasn’t the best of ideas since it certainly chipped a crack into their relationship. She was just glad that some of them were still on speaking terms.

And so, Kim flipped a table metaphorically of course and stopped giving a s**t after that. Everything was going to be about her from now on, and that definitely showed when she ignored her parents’ wishes being a doctor or a lawyer wasn’t her thing and signed up for the Resonance Skies Academy.


likes:
✔ Flaunting
✔ Gossip
✔ Teasing
✔ Coffee
✔ Baked goods
✔ Amusement


dislikes:
✖ Traditions
✖ Rice
✖ Girls at least, the doormats anyway
✖ Disorganization
✖ All things involving housework


extra information:
- It’s recommended that one shouldn’t give Kim any sob stories, or else she will use it as blackmail.
- She learned her talents from her sisters while they still liked her since a majority of them went to a beauty school.
- She can do housework, but that doesn’t mean she likes it.
- If you give a Kim a cookie, she’ll probably steal the rest from you.
- She also plays the triangle because she refuses to blow into anything the implications are horrible or risk breaking a nail.

Huong Le


Elen_Gilthoniel
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 9:04 pm


Your Bunnie Babe


Bunnie - I have a few problems with Trinity.

I had warned you with your previous character, Renee, that it seemed like you might be getting ideas from other characters, and gave you an example where you used nearly identical wording as another profile for one of her talents. There were also several other small things that seemed to be kind of..."borrowed" (intentionally or not) from other characters due to very specific wording, but we chose not to point them out because we figured it might be unintentional for her to have so many borrowed traits. Instead, I gave you a gentle reminder/warning about copying and/or taking overt inspiration from others.

Unfortunately, Trinity seems to also share some very specific attributes with several other characters. It's normal to share one or two traits with others--that is totally fine. Especially when we're dealing with really common things. For instance, we have several characters that are flirts, or several who are quick tempered; those are really common so it's normal that there would be several characters with those kinds of traits. But it starts to raise red flags when your character shares a LOT of talents, likes, dislikes, physical characteristics with characters from this guild or from other guilds where you RP with the same people or when they share very specific and less common things. And your characters share a lot more specific traits with people than any other characters, and some of those traits are very, very specific. And...you sometimes even use similar or exact wording.

That is why I feel the need to point out some of the issues with Trinity.

1. Her story about her stuffed rabbit is nearly identical to Eve in Red Moon--who was also given a stuffed rabbit, which she cherishes and treats as if it's real, from her older brother. Like Eve, Trinity also carries the rabbit around everywhere.

2. Trinity dislikes bald people because they "freak her out" which is identical to Ihsan in Red Moon. This is a really unusual dislike and you literally used the exact same wording as what is on Ihsan's profile which makes it very obvious.

These are the main two things that feel like they were kind of, well, copied (again, unintentionally or not). But not only does she share those traits with two characters I know you're familiar with, she also has a talent for Math, like Michael and a talent for logic and solving puzzles and things like Marc. Math, I can kind of understand--it's not common, but it's not horribly uncommon either and the puzzle thing isn't too bad since it's slightly different from Marc's skill with logic. But Trinity also just happens to like stage magicians and stage magic and we just happen to have a stage magician character. That is something really uncommon so, again, it's fairly obvious.

By itself, none of these things would be an issue. Again, it's totally normal to share a few traits with other characters. But Trinity has five major traits she shares with other characters---one of which is a major personality trait, and one of which has the exact wording to a character of mine I know you're familiar with. And one of which is obviously based on a character from this guild.

Considering that I had to remind you about using exact wording with Renee, and that even with the edits, Renee still has a few specific traits (like her 'smooth, fair skin', fear of roaches, frogs, etc, for example) in common with others, I'm starting to be concerned that taking "inspiration" from others is becoming a bit of a problem because this is the second time I am having to point out that you are using exact wording from another profile and about the third time (if we count Renee's initial incarnations, which you edited but that shared a LOT of obvious specifics with other characters) that you've ended up with substantial traits and characteristics that are incredibly similar to other profiles.

You need to create a character that stands completely on her own--whose traits you come up with specifically for her, without getting ideas or wording from other characters. She needs to not be geared to instantly like (or dislike) any existing characters but be set up in a way that any relationships (positive or negative) will develop on their own. It's one thing to work with someone else to intentionally create a rival or friend or their character and another thing when you seem to just do it on your own, without talking to others. And it's definitely not okay to base your character, even in small part, on other characters whether they're in this guild or another guild.

Please try to go through and really think about this character and come up with traits that are uniquely hers. And definitely be careful not to use exact wording from any other profiles whether they are in this guild or Red Moon, or anywhere else.

Thank you. <3
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