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 Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:22 pm
Spottedteddybears rachel7896 Can I PLEASE BE MARZIPAN!! for the land of sweets? I Love the movie the Nutcracker and I would love to help out...please? No! Marzipan's MINEE!! razz Just kidding. All you have to do is audition! Feel free to do Marzipan if you want! ^^ Thanks..your really funny BTW. I am auditioning but I need to find the perfect coustume
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:22 pm
Red7227 - lurks -
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I'm watchin' you all plan, considering trying out but you don't know that because I'm a luuuurker from last year. LURK WITH ME RED! *lurklurk*
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:23 pm
rachel7896 Spottedteddybears rachel7896 Can I PLEASE BE MARZIPAN!! for the land of sweets? I Love the movie the Nutcracker and I would love to help out...please? No! Marzipan's MINEE!! razz Just kidding. All you have to do is audition! Feel free to do Marzipan if you want! ^^ Thanks..your really funny BTW. I am auditioning but I need to find the perfect coustume Haha, thanks! Good luck!
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:35 pm
I'm planning to actually do something this year (I have a really bad habit of that, but last year, I swear it was not my fault D: I will take the blame any other time, but I SWEARS it wasn't my fault I wasn't around for this like I said I would be!)
I'm hoping to get some of my girls involved this time, our guild has practically died but my little ones still lurk -it may help us come back to life as well.
I just have to figure out what to send in the announcement.
Also, I have claimed Christmas Past.
Can I even do that?
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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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Hester Peche Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:37 pm
Angel Nicholson I'm planning to actually do something this year (I have a really bad habit of that, but last year, I swear it was not my fault D: I will take the blame any other time, but I SWEARS it wasn't my fault I wasn't around for this like I said I would be!) I'm hoping to get some of my girls involved this time, our guild has practically died but my little ones still lurk -it may help us come back to life as well. I just have to figure out what to send in the announcement. Also, I have claimed Christmas Past.
Can I even do that?If you want your part back from last year, then PM Broken.
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:42 pm
SorceressJacklyn iNk_mAy -hits Chat floor shivering and cowering at the yelling for roles- I-I'll just be happy to get a part. sniffle sniff. you're all so viscious. -blubbers and scoots under nearst table clinging to its leg- *stands on top of table* Don't worry dear. I'll make sure they don't hurt you. Just go audition for the part you want while we take care of them... -looking up face flushes and laughs nervously- I did. I'm aiming for either sweet princess which is...One of the parts they -points finger accusingly- are arguing and fighting for so adamantly. Of course if that falls through I also am trying for Spirit of Christmas Future. Heh heh...I'm versatile and flexible. You're the Queen of Sweets right?
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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:57 pm
Hester Peche Angel Nicholson I'm planning to actually do something this year (I have a really bad habit of that, but last year, I swear it was not my fault D: I will take the blame any other time, but I SWEARS it wasn't my fault I wasn't around for this like I said I would be!) I'm hoping to get some of my girls involved this time, our guild has practically died but my little ones still lurk -it may help us come back to life as well. I just have to figure out what to send in the announcement. Also, I have claimed Christmas Past.
Can I even do that?If you want your part back from last year, then PM Broken. I did in fact do that cool Just wondering if I was allowed to say it : P
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:57 pm
Spottedteddybears rachel7896 Spottedteddybears rachel7896 Can I PLEASE BE MARZIPAN!! for the land of sweets? I Love the movie the Nutcracker and I would love to help out...please? No! Marzipan's MINEE!! razz Just kidding. All you have to do is audition! Feel free to do Marzipan if you want! ^^ Thanks..your really funny BTW. I am auditioning but I need to find the perfect coustume Haha, thanks! Good luck! you too
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Link_to_Your_Destiny Crew
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 3:19 pm
Since none of the newbies know, I am Black Peter. I had the part last year and I wished to have it back again. Nice to meet you all. :3
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:02 pm
rachel7896 [Insert your audition here] Dear, if you don't get a grip on this rp style, you won't be given a part at all! This rp is to be done in third person, past tense. Lemme tell ya 'bout this style and maybe help you get better. First, I'm going to point out some things you did wrong. I don't mean to offend you, but we can't have someone around who rp's on a totally different level than we do. Quote: Marzipan then replied with a happy tone. Really good. I havent seen almost everyone here for so long. Marzipan then gave him a hug. I better go say hi to everyone else, I mean everyone has changed so much. Also I better go and help Fondant to the bathroom she looks sick. Marzipan runs over to Fondant. Let me help you. Ugh I don't feel so well said Fondant sickly. Number one, you are not quoting what your character is saying. USE QUOTATION MARKS AROUND HER SPEECH These things: " "APOSTROPHES. USE THEM. "havent" should be spelled "haven't" With the apostrophe. This thing: 'Simple, yes? Moving on. Number two, you are controlling more than one character. What Fondant says and does IS NOT UNDER YOUR CONTROL if you are auditioning as Marzipan. Seriously. Deal with it. I'd probably make Fondant puke on you for that if she were mine. You do not decide what other characters do. End of story. Next lesson. THIRD PERSON, PAST TENSE. PAST TENSE! PAST TENSE! PAST TENSE!Instead of saying: Quote: Marzipan then replied with a happy tone. Really good. I havent seen almost everyone here for so long. Marzipan then gave him a hug. ANDMarzipan runs over to Fondant. Let me help you. You could say: Quote: "Really good, I haven't seen most of you for so long!" Marzipan replied happily, giving him a hug. ANDMarzipan quickly ran over to Fondant and reached out to her. "Let me help you!" she said worriedly. This example does not mean it was okay for you to control Fondant, but do you see what I mean? Third person. You've got that down, so I'll give you credit there, but you NEED TO USE PAST TENSE. This means what is happening HAS HAPPENED. Examples of past tense: - I lived in that house when I was young. - He didn't like the movie. - What did you eat for dinner? - John drove to London on Monday. - Mary did not go to work yesterday. - Did you play tennis last week? - I was at work yesterday. - We were not late (for the train). - Were you angry?
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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:25 pm
Angel Nicholson rachel7896 [Insert your audition here] Dear, if you don't get a grip on this rp style, you won't be given a part at all! This rp is to be done in third person, past tense. Lemme tell ya 'bout this style and maybe help you get better. First, I'm going to point out some things you did wrong. I don't mean to offend you, but we can't have someone around who rp's on a totally different level than we do. Quote: Marzipan then replied with a happy tone. Really good. I havent seen almost everyone here for so long. Marzipan then gave him a hug. I better go say hi to everyone else, I mean everyone has changed so much. Also I better go and help Fondant to the bathroom she looks sick. Marzipan runs over to Fondant. Let me help you. Ugh I don't feel so well said Fondant sickly. Number one, you are not quoting what your character is saying. USE QUOTATION MARKS AROUND HER SPEECH These things: " "APOSTROPHES. USE THEM. "havent" should be spelled "haven't" With the apostrophe. This thing: 'Simple, yes? Moving on. Number two, you are controlling more than one character. What Fondant says and does IS NOT UNDER YOUR CONTROL if you are auditioning as Marzipan. Seriously. Deal with it. I'd probably make Fondant puke on you for that if she were mine. You do not decide what other characters do. End of story. Next lesson. THIRD PERSON, PAST TENSE. PAST TENSE! PAST TENSE! PAST TENSE!Instead of saying: Quote: Marzipan then replied with a happy tone. Really good. I havent seen almost everyone here for so long. Marzipan then gave him a hug. ANDMarzipan runs over to Fondant. Let me help you. You could say: Quote: "Really good, I haven't seen most of you for so long!" Marzipan replied happily, giving him a hug. ANDMarzipan quickly ran over to Fondant and reached out to her. "Let me help you!" she said worriedly. This example does not mean it was okay for you to control Fondant, but do you see what I mean? Third person. You've got that down, so I'll give you credit there, but you NEED TO USE PAST TENSE. This means what is happening HAS HAPPENED. Examples of past tense: - I lived in that house when I was young. - He didn't like the movie. - What did you eat for dinner? - John drove to London on Monday. - Mary did not go to work yesterday. - Did you play tennis last week? - I was at work yesterday. - We were not late (for the train). - Were you angry? sorry bout that was in a rush and I completely forgot about the quotation marks! Sorry My Falt! I hope I didnt screw up my chances in getting a part... I was so busy trying to finish it so I can write a chapter in a book I'm writing so I could post the Chapter today on Wattpad.com Sorry for making you write like 15 paragraphs of corrections...I hope you can forgive me ~Rachel7896
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:27 pm
rachel7896 Angel Nicholson rachel7896 [Insert your audition here] Dear, if you don't get a grip on this rp style, you won't be given a part at all! This rp is to be done in third person, past tense. Lemme tell ya 'bout this style and maybe help you get better. First, I'm going to point out some things you did wrong. I don't mean to offend you, but we can't have someone around who rp's on a totally different level than we do. Quote: Marzipan then replied with a happy tone. Really good. I havent seen almost everyone here for so long. Marzipan then gave him a hug. I better go say hi to everyone else, I mean everyone has changed so much. Also I better go and help Fondant to the bathroom she looks sick. Marzipan runs over to Fondant. Let me help you. Ugh I don't feel so well said Fondant sickly. Number one, you are not quoting what your character is saying. USE QUOTATION MARKS AROUND HER SPEECH These things: " "APOSTROPHES. USE THEM. "havent" should be spelled "haven't" With the apostrophe. This thing: 'Simple, yes? Moving on. Number two, you are controlling more than one character. What Fondant says and does IS NOT UNDER YOUR CONTROL if you are auditioning as Marzipan. Seriously. Deal with it. I'd probably make Fondant puke on you for that if she were mine. You do not decide what other characters do. End of story. Next lesson. THIRD PERSON, PAST TENSE. PAST TENSE! PAST TENSE! PAST TENSE!Instead of saying: Quote: Marzipan then replied with a happy tone. Really good. I havent seen almost everyone here for so long. Marzipan then gave him a hug. ANDMarzipan runs over to Fondant. Let me help you. You could say: Quote: "Really good, I haven't seen most of you for so long!" Marzipan replied happily, giving him a hug. ANDMarzipan quickly ran over to Fondant and reached out to her. "Let me help you!" she said worriedly. This example does not mean it was okay for you to control Fondant, but do you see what I mean? Third person. You've got that down, so I'll give you credit there, but you NEED TO USE PAST TENSE. This means what is happening HAS HAPPENED. Examples of past tense: - I lived in that house when I was young. - He didn't like the movie. - What did you eat for dinner? - John drove to London on Monday. - Mary did not go to work yesterday. - Did you play tennis last week? - I was at work yesterday. - We were not late (for the train). - Were you angry? sorry bout that was in a rush and I completely forgot about the quotation marks! Sorry My Falt! I hope I didnt screw up my chances in getting a part... I was so busy trying to finish it so I can write a chapter in a book I'm writing so I could post the Chapter today on Wattpad.com Sorry for making you write like 15 paragraphs of corrections...I hope you can forgive me ~Rachel7896 Honey, it's not just the quotation marks that are the problem. You need to take your time on these things, don't rush them. And you're still... OMG. YOU CANNOT CONTROL OTHER CHARACTERS. ONE CHARACTER. O.N.E. JUST ONE. And now we have to discuss the use of CAPITALS? You are ruining your chances here. I'm sorry, but you're just...you're somehow not grasping this. THIRD EDIT. Do you know what a question mark is? Because you need to be using those at the end of questions.
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Angel Nicholson Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:39 pm
iNk_mAy SorceressJacklyn iNk_mAy -hits Chat floor shivering and cowering at the yelling for roles- I-I'll just be happy to get a part. sniffle sniff. you're all so viscious. -blubbers and scoots under nearst table clinging to its leg- *stands on top of table* Don't worry dear. I'll make sure they don't hurt you. Just go audition for the part you want while we take care of them... -looking up face flushes and laughs nervously- I did. I'm aiming for either sweet princess which is...One of the parts they -points finger accusingly- are arguing and fighting for so adamantly. Of course if that falls through I also am trying for Spirit of Christmas Future. Heh heh...I'm versatile and flexible. You're the Queen of Sweets right? Yes. I am the Queen of Sweets, Queen Bondeline "Bonbon" Chiffon Tiramisu. Which means ten to one I'm gonna be asked my opinion on those applying to my land.
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:59 pm
Please write your audition prompts in the form of, 3rd person past-tense narratives. You must write them solely as your first choice character. You don't have any power over any other characters. Also any grammatical errors will be a deduction in your audition evaluation on November 20th.
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Hester Peche Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:09 pm
Link_to_Your_Destiny Since none of the newbies know, I am Black Peter. I had the part last year and I wished to have it back again. Nice to meet you all. :3 So who/what exactly is Black Peter? More so I have an idea of what is going on and not because I wanted to take the part.
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