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 Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 9:24 am
((I like the idea of you coming back as a spirit Rani. Just remember that as a spirit, you cannot manipulate physical objects.))
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 10:27 am
Mickey and the Horseman dueled in the cemetary Mickey becoming weak but the Horseman was getting stronger "Well it seems you have lost king" "Not just yet Horseman!" Mickey swiped the horseman across the back "GRAH!" the Horseman nailed Mickey and sent him into a willow tree "You will pay for that Mouse!"
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 10:32 am
Narrator: Now chapter four comes to a close with the arrival of king Mickey . this epic battle is slowly unfolding.The Horseman growing stronger and with Mickey helpless will the heroes aid him.(Oh and the Horseman will be defeated but this will count as a win for the Villains. I know its complicated but all will be revealed in the end)
The Horseman raised his sword over Mickey's head "Now you're rein will come to an end!" just as he slashed down Mickey blocked it with his sword and pushed him off "Horseman, I know you are filled with hatred for Ichabod but is killing me really going to satisfy that?" "Yes" the two crashed blades together and sparks flied everywhere
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 9:39 pm
(Pipe down grandpa I changed it neutral ...)
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 10:05 pm
l Villain Horseman l (Pipe down grandpa I changed it neutral ...) I know, I posted that a long time ago. lol. And I thank you kindly. smile
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:42 am
(But i'm keeping Mickey since he was in my origonal plans)
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 11:40 am
Ariel glared at Frollo when he said out loud that he didn't believe in fairies and sealed her friend's fate. She watched in sorrow as Rani made her last bubble to her friends in Neverland and then her glow disappeared. She watched as Ichabod summoned a massive sea dragon and then with a swipe of it's a tail made a massive tidle wave over the villains before returning to the deep and the puddle vanishing. She watched as she soon became soaked with water,she looked over at Jack as he soon had a pistol and pointed it at Frollo and spoke to him with tears running down his cheek.
Ariel just looked at the scene before of Jack and Frollo and looked at Frollo and saw where his gaze was going to and was a dagger that was just a few inches or so from her. She watched as Frollo lunged for the weapon successfully picking it up and stood to his feet wrapping his arm around her neck. She felt the tip of the dagger poking at her chest just above her heart. She felt Frollo begin to pierce the dagger through her flesh and with her eyes looked down at the small trigger of blood running down the blood. She felt Frollo lean in and could feel his breath and heard him whisper in her ear and she remained silent scared to say the wrong words that could end her life.
Ariel looked at Jack and Ichabod with a small tear rolling down her cheek as Frollo dug the dagger deeper into her chest. She slowly felt weaker as more blood leaked from her wound and onto the dagger with every passing second. She watched as memories of her family came to her only causing more tears to flow from her eyes as she thought of her father and sisters at how sad they would be to not have her around anymore.
In a sudden flash of light a portal from Ariel's world opened and her family came out of it. Triton looked at his daughter and glared at Frollo and spoke up with great anger in his. "RELEASE MY DAUGHTER!!!" he yelled so loud he caused the church to shake a bit. Eric and Melody stepped out behind Triton from the portal Eric kept Melody behind him refusing his daughter to look at the state her mother was in bcause he knew how angry she would become and what she would so badly want to say to a villain like Frollo. Eric glared at Frollo with anger for harming his wife so badly but knew better and looked at King Triton as he waited to see what Frollo's next move was going to be,Triton pointed his trident at Frollo and spoke up. "Release my daughter or you will be sorry."he said
(King Triton and Melody and Eric are only here for a short time)
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 6:04 pm
Frollo shot a glare at Ariel's family, his short white hair drenched with sweat. Short bangs stuck against his sweaty brow. You have no power here, Triton! You wouldn't dare strike me! Less you want to kill your daughter as well! Frollo dug the dagger deeper into Ariel's chest, wincing in anger. Now like I said, drop your weapons... or the girl dies!
Frollo leaned into Ariel's ear and whispered. Now I suggest you tell your family to leave... Unless you want your kingdom invaded by France.. All I have to do if inform the King of France that you and your husband are involved with beings super natural powers and your kingdom will be plagued with war.. And all the death and ruin that come with it..
((Please do keep Mickey! I actually quite like that idea. It was just the whole Jesus thing I found a little hokey.))
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:22 pm
King Triton glared at Frollo and spoke up. "I would not be so sure about that."he said. King Triton looked at his daughter who was slowly losing her life. "Your majesty you must not."Sebastion said. 'Am sorry Sebastion but I have no choice."he said and both him and Eric put away their weapons. Melody was by Jack and Ichabod and spoke up. "We need to find a way to get my mother out of Frollo's grasp without getting Frollo to stab that dagger deeper into her chest."she whispered to Jack. "Any ideas?"she asked
Ariel felt Frollo's whisper in her ear and listened to him and looked at her family.She looked at father and spoke up. "Eric,Melody please leave go and stop the Horseman, I love you daddy."she said. She looked down at the dagger and saw how deep it was inside her chest. She grabbed Frollo's hand that had the dagger in her chest and used all her strength to make Frollo pull the dagger out of her giving her father the chance to attack him without hurting her. She fell to the ground with blood coming from her chest and her father quickly blasted the dagger from Frollo's hand with magic from his trident and spoke up. "Don't you dare touch my daughter again unless you wish to have your life be gone."he said as pointed his trident towards Frollo ready to strike him again should he go after Ariel one more time. "Jack please get my daughter before Frollo goes for her one more time, losing my wife was bad enough for me I don't wish to lose my youngest daughter."he said
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:38 pm
Frollo sneered at the Triton, his dark eyes ablaze. I did not wish to have to do this.. but you leave me no choice.. Frollo snapped his fingers, a large pillar of fire rising from the ground and surrounding the entire church, setting it on fire. I suggest all of you surrender, IMMEDIATELY! OR WE ALL DIE! The flames became more intense, Frollo's eyes blazing. You cannot put this fire out, and destroying me will only make it kill you faster! Rubble collapsed all around the exits, providing no way to escape. Ariel, I demand that your family leave at once! And that the rest of you surrender!
((Heroes, I just want to reassure you that this is the last of Frollo's magic for a long time! This is pretty much my last ditch effort to get you to surrender so that we can get the rp moving. I have a few ideas, but the good guys need to lose this battle.))
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:42 pm
(I must say this is getting good.)
Chapter 5: Death of a King
The Horseman picked up the weak mouse and threw him into the burning church Mickey crashed through the window all beaten and bloody and He struggled to get to his feet and saw what Jolly and Frollo have done and he just looked shocked before falling over unable to get up and Ichabod rushed over and looked at the Mouse "Mickey!" he held Mickey in his arms
"Who did this to you?" Mickey spoke softly
"The Horseman..." and with that he went limp
and Ichabod felt his heart go slower and slower until nothing, Ichabod gently set him on the floor and spoke out as the room was silent "He's gone...." and then he looked at frollo with anger in his eyes "This is all your fault! if yoou didn't come here none of this would of happened do us all a favor and just drop dead!"
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:50 pm
[between me and the Horseman, Mickey is not really dead its just suppposed to be like that one part of Kingdom Hearts where Goofy "Dies"]
Jolly Roger looked at the fallen king and took his hat off in respect
and he drew his sword and pointed it at Ichabod "its his own fault he is dead, only a fool would challenge the Horseman to a duel." Jolly Roger chuckled alittle "There is a reason Maleficent chose the Horseman to lead this attack you know." He looked back at Mickey "And it seems we know who is the victor here HAR HAR HAR!"
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 2:01 pm
Jack twirled Soul Robber around Frollo's arm and drew it back bringing the dagger out "Melody I can't hold it forever you have to bring your mother over here,quickly!" Jack struggled to hold Frollo's arm back as the soul robber went from green to yellow "Hurry!" He shouted as it went from yellow to orange next would be red.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 3:59 pm
the horseman went back to the table where the boy and he was gone "GRAH! I can't become immortal without that boy!" he looked over at the banshe's "Don't just stand there find him!" the three beautyful ghosts flew off into the different parts of the hollow to find the boy and the horseman looked at Diablo "Bird make yourself useful and look down for him in the air" he watched as the crow flew up into the sky and the Horseman rode through the forest looking.
Ichabod picked up Mickey and ran behind a piller "Cmon m'lord wake up...." Ichabod wished as hard as he could hoping that Mickey would revive "Cmon.....why isn't it working!?"
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