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 Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:49 pm
Crimsondot Crimsondot Rpc Name: Kai Blightwater Rpc Rank: Student Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative Talent Name: Blind Sense Description: Kai has developed and even stronger form of increased senses than a Were Beast normally has. By sacrificing his eyesight, like be closing his eyes or wearing a blindfold, Kai can send vibrations through the ground and sense them, painting a perfect picture of everything attached to the ground for a 100 yard radius. Kai has to focus while doing this however, and loses 2 speed while it is active. It also drains his body, and only lasts for 5 posts at a time with a 3 post cooldown. Ineffective on flying or floating objects. Alternatively, Kai can use up some of his energy to apply Blind sense to an object, which can extend his range. Skills: Blind Sense Extension D rank Kai touches an object, and uses it as a becaon for his blind sense. This can be done either in blind sense or out of it. For three posts, the object gives off vibrations laced with Kai's energy, that he can sense no matter where he is. The downside is the shorter duration, and it only works for a 25 yard radius of the beacon. Does not work on objects not touching the ground. Can work on a person only if they are lower rank than Kai. Rp Sample: Kai sighed. He had to catch some cat for an old lady who it had ran away from. The Were Beast had tracked the cat down to this grove of trees, but it was proving elusive. Kai could keep up to the cat several times over, but it was small, and his eyes could not track it. Kai pulled out a white blindfold from his backpack, and slipped it on over his eyes. As soon as his sight was lost, Kai began to send vibrations through his feet into the ground, and it was working like a sonar. Kai's had snapped towards the left of him. To him, the enitre world was made up of black white white outlines, and there was a shape darting through the trees, messing with the outlines of them. This was obviously his cat. Kai took off, sprinting. He was easily able to keep up with the cat once he could 'see' it. The cat was running on the ground, and Kai lunged at it. Kai came up a little short, and the cat kept running. Kai forgot. He was much slower in this state. The cat had gotten away. Kai decided to pick up a rock, and apply his energy to it. Kai threw the rock in the direction he saw the cat go, and when it landed, Kai could sense it vibrating. For a few moments, he saw the cat running by the rock, picked up by his beacon. Kai took off towards the rock. After a while more of chasing, Kai finally caught the cat, and took of his blindfold. He was panting now, using his ability for that long caused some serious stress. Added something that I hope makes it different. I have one question though... why? I mean, I support individuality entirely, but this talent seems to only weaken you more than anything else. It seems like it weakens you ALOT, actually. You sure you don't wanna add something that makes it alot more useful?
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:55 pm
Incubus Shane Crimsondot Crimsondot Rpc Name: Kai Blightwater Rpc Rank: Student Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative Talent Name: Blind Sense Description: Kai has developed and even stronger form of increased senses than a Were Beast normally has. By sacrificing his eyesight, like be closing his eyes or wearing a blindfold, Kai can send vibrations through the ground and sense them, painting a perfect picture of everything attached to the ground for a 100 yard radius. Kai has to focus while doing this however, and loses 2 speed while it is active. It also drains his body, and only lasts for 5 posts at a time with a 3 post cooldown. Ineffective on flying or floating objects. Alternatively, Kai can use up some of his energy to apply Blind sense to an object, which can extend his range. Skills: Blind Sense Extension D rank Kai touches an object, and uses it as a becaon for his blind sense. This can be done either in blind sense or out of it. For three posts, the object gives off vibrations laced with Kai's energy, that he can sense no matter where he is. The downside is the shorter duration, and it only works for a 25 yard radius of the beacon. Does not work on objects not touching the ground. Can work on a person only if they are lower rank than Kai. Rp Sample: Kai sighed. He had to catch some cat for an old lady who it had ran away from. The Were Beast had tracked the cat down to this grove of trees, but it was proving elusive. Kai could keep up to the cat several times over, but it was small, and his eyes could not track it. Kai pulled out a white blindfold from his backpack, and slipped it on over his eyes. As soon as his sight was lost, Kai began to send vibrations through his feet into the ground, and it was working like a sonar. Kai's had snapped towards the left of him. To him, the enitre world was made up of black white white outlines, and there was a shape darting through the trees, messing with the outlines of them. This was obviously his cat. Kai took off, sprinting. He was easily able to keep up with the cat once he could 'see' it. The cat was running on the ground, and Kai lunged at it. Kai came up a little short, and the cat kept running. Kai forgot. He was much slower in this state. The cat had gotten away. Kai decided to pick up a rock, and apply his energy to it. Kai threw the rock in the direction he saw the cat go, and when it landed, Kai could sense it vibrating. For a few moments, he saw the cat running by the rock, picked up by his beacon. Kai took off towards the rock. After a while more of chasing, Kai finally caught the cat, and took of his blindfold. He was panting now, using his ability for that long caused some serious stress. Added something that I hope makes it different. I have one question though... why? I mean, I support individuality entirely, but this talent seems to only weaken you more than anything else. It seems like it weakens you ALOT, actually. You sure you don't wanna add something that makes it alot more useful? Explain? It's the fact that his picture has a blindfold makes me go into a ragey OCD like state and i want it to have some use, but, I also like the idea of having a tremor sense detection ability. I don't really see how it weakens more than helps.
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:59 pm
Crimsondot Incubus Shane Crimsondot Crimsondot Rpc Name: Kai Blightwater Rpc Rank: Student Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative Talent Name: Blind Sense Description: Kai has developed and even stronger form of increased senses than a Were Beast normally has. By sacrificing his eyesight, like be closing his eyes or wearing a blindfold, Kai can send vibrations through the ground and sense them, painting a perfect picture of everything attached to the ground for a 100 yard radius. Kai has to focus while doing this however, and loses 2 speed while it is active. It also drains his body, and only lasts for 5 posts at a time with a 3 post cooldown. Ineffective on flying or floating objects. Alternatively, Kai can use up some of his energy to apply Blind sense to an object, which can extend his range. Skills: Blind Sense Extension D rank Kai touches an object, and uses it as a becaon for his blind sense. This can be done either in blind sense or out of it. For three posts, the object gives off vibrations laced with Kai's energy, that he can sense no matter where he is. The downside is the shorter duration, and it only works for a 25 yard radius of the beacon. Does not work on objects not touching the ground. Can work on a person only if they are lower rank than Kai. Rp Sample: Kai sighed. He had to catch some cat for an old lady who it had ran away from. The Were Beast had tracked the cat down to this grove of trees, but it was proving elusive. Kai could keep up to the cat several times over, but it was small, and his eyes could not track it. Kai pulled out a white blindfold from his backpack, and slipped it on over his eyes. As soon as his sight was lost, Kai began to send vibrations through his feet into the ground, and it was working like a sonar. Kai's had snapped towards the left of him. To him, the enitre world was made up of black white white outlines, and there was a shape darting through the trees, messing with the outlines of them. This was obviously his cat. Kai took off, sprinting. He was easily able to keep up with the cat once he could 'see' it. The cat was running on the ground, and Kai lunged at it. Kai came up a little short, and the cat kept running. Kai forgot. He was much slower in this state. The cat had gotten away. Kai decided to pick up a rock, and apply his energy to it. Kai threw the rock in the direction he saw the cat go, and when it landed, Kai could sense it vibrating. For a few moments, he saw the cat running by the rock, picked up by his beacon. Kai took off towards the rock. After a while more of chasing, Kai finally caught the cat, and took of his blindfold. He was panting now, using his ability for that long caused some serious stress. Added something that I hope makes it different. I have one question though... why? I mean, I support individuality entirely, but this talent seems to only weaken you more than anything else. It seems like it weakens you ALOT, actually. You sure you don't wanna add something that makes it alot more useful? Explain? It's the fact that his picture has a blindfold makes me go into a ragey OCD like state and i want it to have some use, but, I also like the idea of having a tremor sense detection ability. I don't really see how it weakens more than helps. Even though it makes sense that you would lose speed, you can remove the -2 speed thing if you want. It does help a blind person substantially, yes, but it still feels like a weakness to me.
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:02 pm
Incubus Shane Crimsondot Incubus Shane Crimsondot Crimsondot Rpc Name: Kai Blightwater Rpc Rank: Student Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative Talent Name: Blind Sense Description: Kai has developed and even stronger form of increased senses than a Were Beast normally has. By sacrificing his eyesight, like be closing his eyes or wearing a blindfold, Kai can send vibrations through the ground and sense them, painting a perfect picture of everything attached to the ground for a 100 yard radius. It drains his body, and only lasts for 5 posts at a time with a 3 post cooldown. Ineffective on flying or floating objects. Alternatively, Kai can use up some of his energy to apply Blind sense to an object, which can extend his range. Skills: Blind Sense Extension D rank Kai touches an object, and uses it as a becaon for his blind sense. This can be done either in blind sense or out of it. For three posts, the object gives off vibrations laced with Kai's energy, that he can sense no matter where he is. The downside is the shorter duration, and it only works for a 25 yard radius of the beacon. Does not work on objects not touching the ground. Can work on a person only if they are lower rank than Kai. Rp Sample: Kai sighed. He had to catch some cat for an old lady who it had ran away from. The Were Beast had tracked the cat down to this grove of trees, but it was proving elusive. Kai could keep up to the cat several times over, but it was small, and his eyes could not track it. Kai pulled out a white blindfold from his backpack, and slipped it on over his eyes. As soon as his sight was lost, Kai began to send vibrations through his feet into the ground, and it was working like a sonar. Kai's had snapped towards the left of him. To him, the enitre world was made up of black white white outlines, and there was a shape darting through the trees, messing with the outlines of them. This was obviously his cat. Kai took off, sprinting. He was easily able to keep up with the cat once he could 'see' it. The cat was running on the ground, and Kai lunged at it. Kai came up a little short, and the cat kept running. Kai forgot. He was much slower in this state. The cat had gotten away. Kai decided to pick up a rock, and apply his energy to it. Kai threw the rock in the direction he saw the cat go, and when it landed, Kai could sense it vibrating. For a few moments, he saw the cat running by the rock, picked up by his beacon. Kai took off towards the rock. After a while more of chasing, Kai finally caught the cat, and took of his blindfold. He was panting now, using his ability for that long caused some serious stress. Added something that I hope makes it different. I have one question though... why? I mean, I support individuality entirely, but this talent seems to only weaken you more than anything else. It seems like it weakens you ALOT, actually. You sure you don't wanna add something that makes it alot more useful? Explain? It's the fact that his picture has a blindfold makes me go into a ragey OCD like state and i want it to have some use, but, I also like the idea of having a tremor sense detection ability. I don't really see how it weakens more than helps. Even though it makes sense that you would lose speed, you can remove the -2 speed thing if you want. It does help a blind person substantially, yes, but it still feels like a weakness to me. There? I took it out, is it accepted now? It's more a way to look for people hiding, or set a trap. Not really for one on one straight up fighting.
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:04 pm
Crimsondot Incubus Shane Crimsondot Incubus Shane Crimsondot Crimsondot Rpc Name: Kai Blightwater Rpc Rank: Student Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative Talent Name: Blind Sense Description: Kai has developed and even stronger form of increased senses than a Were Beast normally has. By sacrificing his eyesight, like be closing his eyes or wearing a blindfold, Kai can send vibrations through the ground and sense them, painting a perfect picture of everything attached to the ground for a 100 yard radius. It drains his body, and only lasts for 5 posts at a time with a 3 post cooldown. Ineffective on flying or floating objects. Alternatively, Kai can use up some of his energy to apply Blind sense to an object, which can extend his range. Skills: Blind Sense Extension D rank Kai touches an object, and uses it as a becaon for his blind sense. This can be done either in blind sense or out of it. For three posts, the object gives off vibrations laced with Kai's energy, that he can sense no matter where he is. The downside is the shorter duration, and it only works for a 25 yard radius of the beacon. Does not work on objects not touching the ground. Can work on a person only if they are lower rank than Kai. Rp Sample: Kai sighed. He had to catch some cat for an old lady who it had ran away from. The Were Beast had tracked the cat down to this grove of trees, but it was proving elusive. Kai could keep up to the cat several times over, but it was small, and his eyes could not track it. Kai pulled out a white blindfold from his backpack, and slipped it on over his eyes. As soon as his sight was lost, Kai began to send vibrations through his feet into the ground, and it was working like a sonar. Kai's had snapped towards the left of him. To him, the enitre world was made up of black white white outlines, and there was a shape darting through the trees, messing with the outlines of them. This was obviously his cat. Kai took off, sprinting. He was easily able to keep up with the cat once he could 'see' it. The cat was running on the ground, and Kai lunged at it. Kai came up a little short, and the cat kept running. Kai forgot. He was much slower in this state. The cat had gotten away. Kai decided to pick up a rock, and apply his energy to it. Kai threw the rock in the direction he saw the cat go, and when it landed, Kai could sense it vibrating. For a few moments, he saw the cat running by the rock, picked up by his beacon. Kai took off towards the rock. After a while more of chasing, Kai finally caught the cat, and took of his blindfold. He was panting now, using his ability for that long caused some serious stress. Added something that I hope makes it different. I have one question though... why? I mean, I support individuality entirely, but this talent seems to only weaken you more than anything else. It seems like it weakens you ALOT, actually. You sure you don't wanna add something that makes it alot more useful? Explain? It's the fact that his picture has a blindfold makes me go into a ragey OCD like state and i want it to have some use, but, I also like the idea of having a tremor sense detection ability. I don't really see how it weakens more than helps. Even though it makes sense that you would lose speed, you can remove the -2 speed thing if you want. It does help a blind person substantially, yes, but it still feels like a weakness to me. There? I took it out, is it accepted now? It's more a way to look for people hiding, or set a trap. Not really for one on one straight up fighting. Accepted. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 7:38 pm
Incubus Shane Okay, I'll judge the other talents (except for mine... so I'd like someone to look at those biggrin ) I reserve the right to reverse any decisions made if it gets out of hand. @Tavian: It feels similar to seer in a way... and I feel like it can make metagaming legal in all cases... but I guess it can't really hurt too much. Someone may overturn this decision... but... approved. @Dotty: So basically... Toph? XD It's also similar to seer though... perhaps too similar. I'd like something a little less copy paste, so I'm going to deny this, unless others think it's okay. @Snuff: Approved @Muffin: The first feels like a non-combative talent too... >_< Anyway, one-hundred feet is far too much. And I know you could just flash-blind them and then use your giant speed boost to kill them before they can even see, so that's too much. Either make the talent non-combative (thus ditching the other one) and remove the skills, or tone the skills down. I'll think about the stat boosts; they're not too bad. The second one is approved but if I see you find some loophole where you can damage someone's mind then I will reverse this decision. Toned the ability down to a thirty foot radius. Trust me...when you see it in battle, you'll realize how combat-useful it is.
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:53 pm
approved...
But as always, I reserve the right to reverse this decision if I see it used too ridiculously.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:24 pm
Rpc Name: Kora Summer
Rpc Rank: Master
Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative, I think?
Talent Name: Sneaky priest. (Ain't I curative? )
Description: Kora is able to hid just as good as the Hunters Stalker with their clocking stealth. She can not be quick, make poison or any of those deadly thing that makes up of a hunter's reputation for that kind of thing does not fit a priest. Kora can only learned the stealth skills up to A that will allow her hide away from enemy's. There are four skill in total Kora most learn because the stealth needed those three other skills.
Skills: (If any) Hiding, Cloaking, Stalk, Stealth.
Rp Sample: Kora is somewhat scared. All she was doing was helping a man that was badly hurt . Strangely, that man was actually was being hunted down by some knights. He ran away, leaving her with the knights that think she 's to blame of actually letting the wanted man escape. She did not knew of this and doesn't want to get in trouble but it seem like knights will not lesson.
So the captain she choose was to run away. As much fast a priest might be that a heavy armor knight may be, sometimes it wont always work that great. After all, they sometimes have number of ally with them. Before the guys are getting close to her, Kora blend in the area, putting on the stealth on her to hidden her. it sort of work. She disappeared from their view, thinking they lost her. Not know where she is know, Kora ran the other direction of the men to get away the area and escape.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 5:52 pm
RPC NAME: Lucien Holsey
RPC RANK: Student
COMBAT-ORIENTED/OUT-OF-COMBAT ORIENTED? Non-Combat
TALENT NAME: Feral Nightmare
DESCRIPTION: This is the simple recognition of the fact that Lucien is a hybrid of both the Kiranu and the Nightmare bloodlines. He has both bloodlines, and that's about all that this talent contains.
SKILLS:
Every Nightmare and Kiranu skill.
RP SAMPLE:
(Short description, but it's really not something that I can put into very much detail.)
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 8:21 pm
Rpc Name: Lauren Bishop
Rpc Rank: student
Combative Talent or Non Combative: I consider it combative, but if it's non-combative, may i give up my combative for a second non-combative?
Talent Name:
Fire Skills
Description:
Allows Lauren to learn and cast fire based skills
Rp Sample: palease, for this?
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:08 pm
Rpc Name:Rachel Alucard
Rpc Rank:Student
Combative Talent or Non Combative:Combative
Talent Name razz ure Madness
Description biggrin uring battle, if the odds are against her via stats(aka stats of the opponent are higher than hers), Rachel recieves an increase in strength and speed by 2[+2/+2].once the battle is over though, this increase ceases and the stats go back to normal.
Rp Sample:Uhhhhhh.... sweatdrop
RPC Name:Rachel Alucard
RPC Rank:Student
Combative Talent or Non Combative:Non-Combative
Talent Name:Madness Control
Description:When near others of the black blood, their sanity and her sanity seem to become controlled and fixed to that where they won't go utterly insane while around each other, keeping each other calm and stable.
RP Sample:Uhhhhhh..... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:21 pm
Chill: aproved
Shane: approved, now check mine
Satsui: the second one is approved, but the first one...
I need some help explaining the stat gains she gets.... is the gain a flat out +4/+1?
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:23 pm
Snuff that Muffin Chill: aproved Shane: approved, now check mine Satsui: the second one is approved, but the first one...
I need some help explaining the stat gains she gets.... is the gain a flat out +4/+1?eheh sweatdrop yeah, should've worded that out better but correct, its +4/+1 and it only works if the stats are higher than hers
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:25 pm
Satsui-No-Hadou21395 Snuff that Muffin Chill: aproved Shane: approved, now check mine Satsui: the second one is approved, but the first one...
I need some help explaining the stat gains she gets.... is the gain a flat out +4/+1?eheh sweatdrop yeah, should've worded that out better but correct, its +4/+1 and it only works if the stats are higher than hers tell you what, make it +2/+2, but only when she's the underdog, and it's approved. Normally I hate plain stat boosts, but yours is fair...
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:27 pm
Snuff that Muffin Satsui-No-Hadou21395 Snuff that Muffin Chill: aproved Shane: approved, now check mine Satsui: the second one is approved, but the first one...
I need some help explaining the stat gains she gets.... is the gain a flat out +4/+1?eheh sweatdrop yeah, should've worded that out better but correct, its +4/+1 and it only works if the stats are higher than hers tell you what, make it +2/+2, but only when she's the underdog, and it's approved. Normally I hate plain stat boosts, but yours is fair... Okay smile Edit biggrin one
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