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 Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 3:27 pm
Nishino - Denied.
Shinigami- Make it longer, and detail it exponentially. I want at least a paragraph.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:16 pm
Hrm... It's lacking, to me at least. I'm sorry, but denied. This Bloodline is a little too hard to handle with incapable hands. I am, by no means, bashing on your skills, but it just seems as though you should go for something simpler.
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:43 pm
I understand i'll make it longer
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:56 pm
iNishino Maush Name of the Bloodline: Inuzuka Clan Name of Previous Bloodline: N/a New Rpc, or Second Rpc: New Rpc >< Have You Had it Before: >.> nuh uh i tink >< What do you know about it?: These people raise and train dogs as ther family and have attacks that seems like beasts or humans and the dog they train stay with them till they part for death, the dog they've been givien/trained are extremely loyal unless you've made them angry they'll bite Give Example of Rp with bloodline:Sora rushed through the trees " where is he Akuma? " She asked the puppy besides her " raf raf " Akuma said. Sora noddedshe pushed a button on her microphone connecting her to her teammates " Akuma says the enemy is 20 metres south " she said Stopping at a nearby tree to rest when suddenly someone swooped out from a bush and tried to attack her, She dodged grabbing for her Katanas. She sniffed the air around him " a Clone to distract me eh ? " she asked it didnt matter though, She blocked his attack and tried to finish him off a quick as possible. Akuma smelt three more people her teammates " Go on ahead " she said whilst trying to doge the Ninja's attacks " Just go ! " she screamed as the Ninja was able to stab a shuriken into her arm " I wont give up " she said with a smirk trying to stab the Ninja and it Hit his arm " shadow clone hmm ? " she asked herself " come on Akuma lets join the others. I Fixed it
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 12:48 am
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:19 pm
Name of the Bloodline: Aburame
Name of Previous Bloodline: Uchiha
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: Second RPC
Have You Had it Before: No.
What do you know about it?: It is a clan that allows a mutual agreement between a hive of insects and the owner, the insects feeding on the chakra of the 'nest' until the 'nest' calls on the insects for help, and the insects obey.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline:
Slowly walking to the outskirts of the Kusagakure, Mokou was very frightened, but had to steel her feelings. She never really liked bugs before, but she realized that she had to embrace them if she wanted to realize her full potential. Remembering a technique from her clan that she was taught at a young age- the Hijutsu: Mushiyose (Secret Technique: Insect Gathering). Completing the correct handseals while standing in the middle of a field, bugs suddenly started running towards her.
Cringing while the bugs began to burrow into her skin and make their homes, Mokou knew that she had to grit and bear it. The feeling of bugs crawling under the skin, the feeling of things chewing through your skin to get in, and just knowing the nature of the bugs was enough to make most people run away. But the Amburame clan has to do this.
Sighing with relief after the bugs had finished their burrowing, Mokou released the Insect Gathering technique and looked back to the gates of the Kusagakure. "Im a true Aburame now, and no one can stop me.." She said as she put on her sunglasses that the Aburame clan always wore and slowly walked towards the village.
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:27 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:12 am
Name of the Bloodline: Origami no Dara
Name of Previous Bloodline: Inuzuka Clan
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: second RPC
Have You Had it Before: Nope
What do you know about it?: This bloodline commonly shows up amongst ninja of the rain country, obviously due to that being the country of its origin. It is said that users of this particular bloodline have the unique ability to manipulate art at will, altering it’s density, shape, size, and even the paper’s properties
Give Example of Rp with bloodline:
Nishino rushed through trees. Apparently the man she was soposed to capture for her mission told his adress to and old man living im this big estate, Nishino used Chou Tokkoutai to separate herself into pure white butterflies in the middle of the night and went into the estate searching for that one man. Nishino found him in the 15th room it was also the biggest.
Nishino reverted back into her human form and waited for him to wake. She wouldnt kill him yet after all she needed infomation. Nishino quickily hid her headband and looked down at the man, he snored like a pig and looked like one too. She sighed and waited til morning as the fat man woke he got a big surprise Nishino holing a katana to his neck.
The man tried to yell for guards but she stopped him " tch yell and I'll slit your throat, since I'm nice I wont kill you but if you dont give me my infomation its heaven for you fot boy " she said with an evil smirk telling him she was serious " Now I'm Looking for this man " Nishino said holding up a picture, The fat man was so scared for his life that he blurted out the infomation she wanted.
" Good that wasnt so hard was it? ' She said taking her katana away from his throat and used Chou Tokkutaijutsu once again separating into pure white butterflies and leaving the old fat man as he was ' I'm Coming you traitor ' She though the image of her beating him up was making her delighted
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:58 pm
Name of the Bloodline:Ranton
Name of Previous Bloodline:N/A
New Rpc, or Second Rpc:First
Have You Had it Before:No..
What do you know about it?:They can apply their element to their weapons. You have to have Suiton and Raiton as elements. They take extra damage to Wind and Earth. Their Raiton is BLACK.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline:
Will write later.
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:24 pm
Nishi, denied. Your sample is not very good, I will give you another shot to make a good sample for us so that we can gauge how well you'll be able to use this bloodline properly. Take some extra time on it and submit your application again when you're ready.
((Judgement will be reserved until sample is made.))
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:58 am
Name of the Bloodline:Nara
Name of Previous Bloodline:N/A
New Rpc, or Second Rpc:New
Have You Had it Before:Yes, but not in this guild
What do you know about it?:They are most famous for the Kageton(Shadow Release). They’re apart of, and more importantly the Shika, the “Ino-Shika-Cho” trio. The men are lazy and have a thing for women with large breasts.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline: Takashi was standing in the middle of a wide open field. There were several other Shinobi surrounding him. ”Give it up boy. There is no way you can win against all of us.” Takashi just sighed and started to perform the hand signs for the Kage Mane no Jutsu. They didn’t notice that his shadow spread over the distance and hit there shadows. They were completely defenseless against him. “This is a drag. If you’re going to challenge someone, at least put up a fight.” He then did the hand signs for Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu. A hand was sent up from the shadows and choked all but one of the Shinobi. Takashi let that one go. “Now go and tell who ever sent you here to leave me alone.” The Shinobi was mad that his entire force was wiped out. He ran at Takashi, while throwing Kunai. He ducked under the kunai and then did the hand signs for the Shadow Hands jutsu. Two hands appeared and grabbed the Shinobi. “What a drag. I wasn’t going to kill you, but you leave me no choice.” He gathered his shadow and formed a blade with it. Takashi decapitated the man.
Jutsu used:
Kage Mane no Jutsu
Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu
Shadow Hands
Kageton- Kage no Yaiba
Ignore the Ranton...
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:11 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:06 am
Name of the Bloodline: Mei Clan
Name of Previous Bloodline: Sharingan
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: Second...sorta.
Have You Had it Before: No.
What do you know about it?: Everything listed.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline:
Athrun merely grunted, staring at his opponent. He’d already attempted to unleash a dangerous orb of acidic liquid from his mouth and the nimble shinobi dodged as though it had been hardly moving. ‘So a direct attack won’t work? How about I try this…’ He took a deep breath and molded his chakra, feeling his boil element fusing inside of him. Expelling the liquid from his mouth, it covered a large area of their battleground and had Athrun completely hidden inside of it. It didn’t burn him, he was immune to the acid in the steam but his foe didn’t come out so lucky. The puddles he had created, his foe knew to watch out for. But that being said, he had no idea that the puddles would release a steam that would burn him as well.
Athrun merely shrugged, ducking low and delivering a sharp kick directly into the face of the man. It wasn’t a strong kick, but one that was enough to stun the man who had been distracted by his burning flesh. Though, the man fell into one of the puddles…and that was not part of his plan. Rolling the man out of it and scraping the acid off his body, he lowered the power of the acid to nearly nothing. “Tell me what I want to know, damn it! I don’t really want to kill you, ya know.”
((Accepted by Angelo.))
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:15 pm
Mephis Inferni Nishi, denied. Your sample is not very good, I will give you another shot to make a good sample for us so that we can gauge how well you'll be able to use this bloodline properly. Take some extra time on it and submit your application again when you're ready. ((Judgement will be reserved until sample is made.)) edited it alot more
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