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 Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 7:35 pm
c h a p a t s u HEY b***h YOU'RE SO KAWAI. im gonna tell that to people now D: this failfic made me want to kill myself xD wristwrist I don't know if she means kowai or kawaii. Probably the latter. She'd be too dumb to know what kowai means.
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:18 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:46 am
I NEVER LAUGHED SO MUCH.
GOD. I SHOULD HAVE DISCOVERED THIS EARLIER.
"Then I looked out the window and screamed… Snap was spying on me and he was taking a video tape of me! And Loopin was masticating to it! They were sitting on their broomsticks."
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:53 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:36 pm
Whoa. x_O Definintley, a subby. We'll have too much to talk about.
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:09 pm
this s**t has made my summer vacation lulzy.
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:46 pm
HARDY HAR HAR.
What the hell is this? Is she freaking eight years old? Also, "Ebony" is a Mary Sue ... but at least the "Dementia" part agrees with her.
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:31 pm
I've only read to chapter three, and I think I can fell my brain cells dying.
Lqtm, This story, wow!
My firend told me about it, he said it gets much better after hre friends stop spell checking it, Right now.......UGhhh. :shivers:
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:09 am
"Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what
and we did it for the first time."
. . . LOL.
Wow, I really do wonder if this chick is a troll. lol
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:14 am
*headdesk*
I thought I have read some bad fanfictions with Mary Sues before...but WOW. Usually I just point out major problems like "If it's not necessary for the plot for her to have stunning naturally rainbow hair, then don't do it" and I try to be nice.
There are way too many problems for me to even be neutral.
I'm friggin DYSLEXIC!!! I use spellcheck and I can assure you that there are at least 10 red lines that aren't needed (like fanfiction for example, is not in my spellcheck, so it is red), and I will fix them before I post. Ugh. It's annoying having to retype pretty much everything, but I do it so I don't look like an idiot.
This is just like Twilight. omg.
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