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What's your favorite type of thing to write?
Poetry (Their short simple enough)
35%
 35%  [ 7 ]
Songs (I just got that beat ya know?)XD
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Short Stories
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Plays (Oh Romeo, oh quiet with the Shakespeare)
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
Novels
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Other
20%
 20%  [ 4 ]
Total Votes : 20


Jinsei
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 1:53 pm


It's good to try new things. biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 1:57 pm


Jinsei
It's good to try new things. biggrin


*nods* Tis, Tis.

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shadow_of_doubt

PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:31 pm


The falling snow lands upon you
Where you lie bent and broken
The silence belies the screaming inside
That no one seems to hear

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars

You hide away behind your mask
You live your life behind your wall
So now you're trapped inside your mind
Locked secluded, alone with your pain
While trying to beat it you let it win

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars

Cold and stark winter raging
Locked within your secret heart
A mirror of the outside world.
You might never get out again
And no one knows you?re gone

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars


copy write me. shadow of doubt
id like to know what you all think

i wrote this in classes today. just had to write. its the closest to a song ive ever done
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 11:53 am


shadow_of_doubt
The falling snow lands upon you
Where you lie bent and broken
The silence belies the screaming inside
That no one seems to hear

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars

You hide away behind your mask
You live your life behind your wall
So now you're trapped inside your mind
Locked secluded, alone with your pain
While trying to beat it you let it win

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars

Cold and stark winter raging
Locked within your secret heart
A mirror of the outside world.
You might never get out again
And no one knows you?re gone

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars


copy write me. shadow of doubt
id like to know what you all think

i wrote this in classes today. just had to write. its the closest to a song ive ever done

Wow... 3nodding

Stalth


Izu_Reia
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 2:30 pm


Stalth
shadow_of_doubt
The falling snow lands upon you
Where you lie bent and broken
The silence belies the screaming inside
That no one seems to hear

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars

You hide away behind your mask
You live your life behind your wall
So now you're trapped inside your mind
Locked secluded, alone with your pain
While trying to beat it you let it win

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars

Cold and stark winter raging
Locked within your secret heart
A mirror of the outside world.
You might never get out again
And no one knows you?re gone

Cover it over hide it away
It will never see the light of day
But the deeper you hide it
The deeper it hurts
You'll never heal these scars


copy write me. shadow of doubt
id like to know what you all think

i wrote this in classes today. just had to write. its the closest to a song ive ever done

Wow... 3nodding


my thoughts exactly stalth.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 1:01 pm


thanks smile

shadow_of_doubt


shadow_of_doubt

PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 1:02 pm


anyone else have any comments bout it??????
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2005 6:26 am


shadow_of_doubt
thanks smile


De nada. It's exactly what this thread is made for. smile

Izu_Reia
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shadow_of_doubt

PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 12:16 pm


any one else have any comments
PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 12:37 pm


anyone????

shadow_of_doubt


shadow_of_doubt

PostPosted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 1:11 pm


will anyone else have comments?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 2:16 pm


fine

shadow_of_doubt

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