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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:42 am
[Q] So I know nobody's reading this. But I would like to take this moment right here. To just express how much I HATE writing chapters where Tali is the main character. Chapter 23 is one of them, and I want to kill myself. .__________. I'm still curious as to why. owo And I read every time there's a new chapter.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:57 am
I think it's because she's a shallow character. There's almost no depth to her. She either gets angry for no good reason or is especially bubbly over something.
Well, I sort of hate girly girls in general. Which I guess is obvious considering CC is a huge sausage fest. There's only really 2 girl characters and one of them isn't part of the main [present] plot(Esvera).
Phoenix Soul is actually a pretty cool character, but Phoenix Soul by itself is not Tali. Tali is... Tali. Tali's comic fodder, really. A chapter with her also implies that there's some sort of romance going on. And I really dislike writing romance also.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:44 am
Tedie is female.
Maybe you should include more women then. ie. Ana, Zae, Meru, Nymphie, Turtle, Luna.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:03 pm
Or go the awesome way and turn all of the men into women in a strange ******** arc.
Genderbending. Life's answer to not-genderbending.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:34 pm
S H O Y K I N G [Q] So I know nobody's reading this. But I would like to take this moment right here. To just express how much I HATE writing chapters where Tali is the main character. Chapter 23 is one of them, and I want to kill myself. .__________. I'm still curious as to why. owo And I read every time there's a new chapter. I've been meaning to, but you update SO FAST, and as I see the number of chapters increase, so does my laziness. D:
Yes, I've always had trouble keeping up to date with things. xD I even forget to read game updates some times. D:
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:59 pm
The website is still only on 10 or 11, and all the updates are really short. xd
@Maggeh Except my story can't do that, because it's a srs story :<
@Shoy Tedie and Nymphie make cameos and at this point in the game, really I don't have any characters that need to be introduced. The main characters have been already, nobody new is going to enter the game this late. :<
Also, I don't know many of the girls. So if they feel like posting up a little character bio as I asked when I was still on chapter ONE, then they can feel free to do so and I'll try my best. xP
Anyway, the main characters are these:
Tali Kingsley Hirun Hikari Fortenra Askasa Q
Sub characters: Amigo Edmond Sim Esvera
sub-sub-characters: Mercain Buzz Opal Tedie
Cameos (Some not mentioned yet and in no order) : Ismaru Roy Salamandra Maggeh Insom Nymphie Eiki Trisk
... I think that's all.
Also, I think the reason why I'm so bummed right now is because I leave in 3 days.
edit2: And when I asked Toastie if she read my story she said no. So considering she was the main character, that was a huge bummer. Also when I was developing Nymphie's character to be more than just a cameo, I asked her what she wanted her Rez to be. She had no idea what a Rez even was. :/
[I'm not blaming them, I'm sure they have valid reasons. It's just that the guys seem to be more interested in this story than the girls, so it seems more fair to give the people who are most interested in the story more screentime]
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:05 pm
Maggeh didn't appear; Zepia Eltnam Oberon did. Very big difference.
Well, at least your story is being read? XD
I really need to get rid of my ******** writer's block at get to it.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:18 pm
I didn't feel like trying to spell your name. xD
Your story got read more than mine did. It'd be read again if you continued to write it, too.
... I tried to sit down and write a bunch of chapters today. My original goal was to finish the entire story before going to boot camp, but now I just want to make enough chapters to cover the website while I'm gone.... The outlook doesn't look good. I only just finished chapter 24...
... I'll probably have to update the website to be just once a week again. :<
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:49 pm
*twitch* I'm in Chapter 12.
My back, neck, and eyes hurt. But I must finish today, or I won't ever. D:
Q Q Q Q Q Q Q I REALLY LOVE IT (so far). Like, srsly.
And I lol'd at Maggeh's genderbending comment, because I would've had loads of fun reading that in a srs story. xD
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:57 pm
Gngerdbending ish fucing awesome n+_n!
^_^( )
LOl! ^_^)
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 5:32 pm
Done reading. *dies*
Now, on the post Q posted after mine: On what you said about people posting a character bio since the very beginning...why didn't you request certain information from the very beginning?
It's easier to write character bios that way, you know.
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:47 pm
Sib: Are you drunk? D: Luna: I'm glad you liked it, hope I didn't guilt you into it. D; Also: Quote: If you have a character you want inserted into the story tell me the name of it and a little bit about their personality and/or what they look like and I will try to insert them into the story. But I make no guarantees that any of the stuff you provide me will remain in tact or that your character will be in for more than one sentence. I don't really ask for specifics because when I started this I had roles I needed to fill and I would just take people who applied and fill the roles with their characters rather than creating my own. So I wasn't so much making new places for these characters so much as fitting someone else's character into an already pre-made spot. WHO IS YOUR FAVORITE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY SRSLY (and why)
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:09 pm
I was not guilted into reading it. xD With remodelations going on at my house, and today them being in the bathroom (right beside my room), I couldn't listen to music or watch animuh videos because I could only hear hammering, so reading was a good second option anyway. 3nodding
Mah favorite character is... Kingsley, for some reason. sweatdrop Because English is awesome, umbrellas are awesome, and I liked the character's personality.
Yes, I'm super specific. xD
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:57 pm
sorry i haven't been up to date on reading and commenting
i've had s**t going on irl so i haven't had much computer time D:
but i must say i like the story still
uh favorite character um um
edmond probably
i like how he's mr. father figure, plus he's all gentlemanly which is way cool
also wtf @ sib
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:31 pm
I like Fort, I just really started reading today and I've gone through 'em all and I just like Fort.
I like wires...
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