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 Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:58 pm
((Sorry I was writing Cid and not Cesar who is my character name in this story redface
I think I have fix it))
Cesar saw the girl running to the room "Hey stop, don't go there..." But the girl didn't stop.
Then Cesar opened the door of the corridor but without take his sight out of the 303 room's door "Excuse me, Ms I have find your daughter... " while turning his face to the floor, he noticed her wasn't Scarlet
"Uhmm... Sorry wrong person... Who are you? what are you doing in the floor?..."
Actually Dylan looked too suspicious there "It's too young for an agent, so why is she peeping here?... Could be a Lucky's friend?"
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:18 pm
Dylan looked up "oh...well there was this room and all this blood...i feel sick and really dizzy" she said too weak to lie.
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:47 pm
Cesar helped Dylan to stand up, he took a look behind her there may be someone else "This night I have been meeting too many people that just appear without notice... That's problematic!" But fortunately there were no one, a little break to Cesar since he can do what he want with others in his back.
"You felt dizzy eh? but who let you come? ...Anyway young girl this is no place for you to come, you can't just be peeping around here"
Then he go for Scarlet's daughter in the 303 Room
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 2:00 pm
"ah...wait!" she said, jogging to catch up to him.
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Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 5:25 pm
( Kalima why you don't continue with the game??? while Jiver not reappear. )
- 3º Floor Corridor:
When Cesar and Dylan approaching the Door of 303 Room something happens!
Both have a feeling of dizziness, but not the point of faint, a strange smell in the air begins emerging, and starts becoming stronger.
Cesar feeling dizzy accidentally open the room's door. ( Sorry make an action with your char Jleiver. )
Suddenly with the door open, the dizziness stoped and the smell of rotten stabilizing but keep it strong.
The place does not look more the same, the whole room is dirty, with blood, looks abandoned, a little dark and the corridor is in the same state of rotten. More details you need to investigate to find.
Note: Now you have a corpse full of blood lying on the corridor's floor.
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:50 am
Eaky ( Kalima why you don't continue with the game??? while Jiver not reappear. ) (My next action was dependent on Jiver's response to my last post. If you want me to go on without his response, then I can try to make a sensible segway for my next post. Just let me know what you'd like for me to do!)
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:25 pm
( ah..just a coment ^^"...you can do what you think is better )
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 12:02 pm
Dylan grabbed at her stomach when she looked through the door. "I-I don't....." she fell to her knees and started throwing up.
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:42 pm
Eaky - 3º Floor Corridor:
When Cesar and Dylan approaching the Door of 303 Room something happens!
Both have a feeling of dizziness, but not the point of faint, a strange smell in the air begins emerging, and starts becoming stronger.
Cesar feeling dizzy accidentally open the room's door. ( Sorry make an action with your char Jleiver. ) Suddenly with the door open, the dizziness stoped and the smell of rotten stabilizing but keep it strong. The place does not look more the same, the whole room is dirty, with blood, looks abandoned, a little dark and the corridor is in the same state of rotten. More details you need to investigate to find.
Note: Now you have a corpse full of blood lying on the corridor's floor. (I'm confused, where did the body come from?)
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:29 pm
Sportie was just rounding the corner when she saw Dylan go down to her knees. She hurried over to where the child was and wrapped her arms around her " You poor child!" She exclaimed, as she reached into her hand bag and pulled out a beautiful silk handkerchief to wipe Dylan's mouth with. Dylan seemed very interested in the hanky, because of the strange expression on her face when she saw it. " Tell me what has caused you to become so ill." Sportie tried her best not to show it, but she was really terrified of what Dylan's answer was going to be. Sportie was also concerned that Dylan appeared to be alone. How could a young child manage to be up and out all by herself, with it being to late at night. Not to mention right in the middle of some very terrible and strange occurrences.
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:17 pm
( well...I think I should give some information to clear the situation.
Dylan was with Cesar in the 3º floor corridor when the strange felling comes;
After the dizziness the corridor and the 303 room looks very diferent like a diferent place;
The dead body appears from nothing, i did this on purpose, if want to know why, it's time to some investigate;
to Update, Sportie comes to this corridor, since she have never been here, she may not have knowledge that the place is different, but the place is a little bizarre now.
I hope that the doubts have been cleared up ^^ )
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:28 pm
((sorry about not posting in such a long time I was caught addicted to fable and watching multiple foreign films like Record or Battle royal))
Charles came round the corner as well ignoring Dylan and going straight for the corpse "where did this corpse come from?" he looked at Dylan hiding the relief that she was found
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:29 pm
((Sorry I was inactive... exams... there is not problem in use my character Eaky if it help the story and its just a little... and I'm Jleivar))
"This feeling of dizziness again... It have not happen to me since long ago"
Once in the room Cesar cover nose and mouth with his sleeve but the putrid smell in the room was too strong.
Meanwhile Dylan started throwing up, Cesar could hear it, he was used to this kind of smells and sights but it always do butterflies in his stomach, and this time that sound made the Cesar worst some noises came from his stomach and he was sweating, he need some fresh air.
Out site he find Dylan been helped by a woman
"Fine! more people" was his first though before his sight could reach the woman's face
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:21 pm
( yeah..everyoen is here again.
so just to resume.....Everyone is in the 3º Floor )
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 10:19 pm
Sportie looked up just in time to see a man enter one of the rooms, and Charles walking by. At the very moment, she also saw the corpse lying on the corridor floor. She quickly turned her attention back to Dylan and said, " I think it might be better if you returned downstairs and called your parents to come and get you. I can go and wait with you if you'd like me to."
While waiting for Dylan to respond, Sportie remembered the vision she had had while they were still downstairs. And knew that she had to tell Charles about it as soon as possible. "Could that corpse be the woman I saw in my vision?" Sportie thought to herself.
Not wanting to leave Dylan alone, Sportie called out to Charles. "Charles, I need to speak to you right away, it is very very important. I don't think this is something that should wait, because it could have a bearing on your case."
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