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| do you think for my first time making an RP i did good? |
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| it is to advanced for my little mind......... |
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| its the best RP eva! |
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| i cannot comprehend this question or my answer....... |
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 Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:36 am
the cpt sought weirly for revenge. but somthing that leila wouldnt want. so he was doing it as indirectly as possibble. but he thought. how could somthing so lovly be taken away? it wasnt fair.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:42 am
"Yeah, I pretty good, why?" Riane asked.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:45 am
"because... you want to beat the cpt at something right?" she asked.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:58 am
"Yeah, I still don't see where you're going with this," Riane said.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:02 am
the cpt. got up out of his bed. he needed to relese some anger. so he headed over to the empty bunk room where the gaurd set up a mini fireing range. he pulled out his 45. he started to shoot. everyone was directly in the head.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:06 am
"because what you are going to do, is spend time with the cpt. by playing chess... and everytime you beat him, we get treated better, because you are going to bet." she thought it was a brillient plan.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:13 am
"OK, I think I can do that," Riane said. "But how will I get up there, I mean when I was looking up at him, he had that look in his eye like he wanted me dead," she whispered.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:17 am
"yeah he did... i know why now, but he still doesn't have a good reason... man, darn head... i must be bleading a lot..." she felt her forehead and felt the sticky blood go down her face.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:20 am
Riane ripped off a strip of cloth from her shirt and wrapped it around Aubry's head to stop the blood from oozing all over. "There, that should keep it clean for a while and stop the bleeding," Riane said.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:31 am
"thanx..." she winced when she tied it. "where was i... oh yeah, well, all i did was walk up, and asked for a game... now you might have to challenge him instead... when was the last time you played chess?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:33 am
I got out of the cell and found the girl I saved elier,"My name is Brychon" I said in a low voice.then I walked away,I turned a few seconds later,and yelled you don't owe my anything.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:36 am
"I'm Riane," she said. She turned back to Aubry. "I last played chess.....let's see, I was put in prison for the first time..it was 6 months ago. So, not to long. A half a year," she said.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:13 pm
I went back to my cell to relax,it was a quiet day,no movement,nothing."I got to get outa here but it will take weeks of planning." I said to myself.But how?
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:37 pm
cpt hailfire got his act otgeather. relly fast. once he was done in the fireing range, he went to the command deck. and he knew why the girl got to him eailer. he let her get to him.
he watched down below, at all of the prizoners activity. tomarrow is the war games. the cpt thought to himself.
the war games, happend once a year. the inmates were givin a orange tag by the gaurds, each one, then they would fight, and you would try to collect all of the tags. the person who had all of the tags at the end, got to spend an entire day, in a gaurd room, givin proper food, and good clothing, a bath, a couple rounds of chess with the cpt., and a pat on the back by the gaurds.
lucian could, if he wanted to, win, because everyody owed him, but he didnt. he gave his tag to somebody, making them owe him more. and he would collect other tags, and give them out, making people owe him alot more.
he was smart.
The gaurds would place bets, and, the funny thing was, the dog runs were every 30 minutes tomarrow. the war game, happend once a year, and more prizoners died, on this game day, then in the whole year alone.
this was the gaurds favrite day. but not the inmates. it would be only one, very lucky inmates day.
The cpt got out his box of orange tags, ready for tomarrows exitement.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 2:45 pm
"Wait, if I wanted to really get to play chess with him, as in bets, wouldn't I have to win tomorrow?" Riane asked Aubry. She thought she was right. It would make her life easier to just win and not have to ask him. Plus, all the other inmates wouldn't be able to take her if they tried. She knew it was true, at least, the men couldn't take her on, except maybe Lucien, because she owed him so much. He was the one who stopped her from being raped a couple hundred times. She didn't know if she could win if Lucien got all of the tags. But she was a girl, her and Aubry could do with nice, clean clothes and a shower.
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