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whipback

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:32 am


(( Oh sorry ))

"That's the problem. We don't know where we are. The ship sunk and we ended up on this island. We are trying to build a shelter before the sun sets and then cook this fish that I caught." saying the I very strongly to show how proud lockman was of his catch.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 10:30 am


(( I'm going to be gone for the weekend so I wont be able to post anything. ))

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:39 pm


"Kadyen! You're awake, thank goodness! Oh, please take it easy!" Sakura added, watching the boy struggle to get up. "As for where we are, we're not sure. The ship sunk, and we all ended washed up at this mysterious place. Sooooooo, we're working on adapting to the situation."
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:47 pm


"Finally! We are done with the shelter! Now who is going to cook the fish because I am a terrible cook." said Professor Lockman.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:55 pm


"I'll give it a shot, I guess." Sakura responded, and sat Kayden inside the shelter, along with the fish. It was a nice change, even though not what they're used to. It felt much like a tent, and it blocked out the sun nicely. Using an upturned log as a table, she began to cut the fish (using teh spear from earlier) in a more ediable fashion. "Did you guys see anything taht could be used as flavorings or spices?" She asked while cutting hte fish.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:25 pm


Sir Fool
Name: Dr. William Helmsly
Gender: male
Age: 78
Race: American
Height: 5.7
Weight: 162lbs
Hair: gray, short cut
Eyes: green
Skin Color: pale white
Clothing: old white lab coat & lab pants, blue scub shirt & under pants, white nike sneakers, white ankle socks
Items: brief case of illegal paperwork, travial bag of illegal test chemicals, his notebook
Any Marks: non
Weird Features: his left eye has a sm cateract that makes it look like a cats eye.
Weapons: Drugs and chemicals (acids and poisons)
Abilities: non
Parents: ???
Bio: Dr. Helmsly was banned from the sciance community for practicing illegal experiments on human-animeal gene mixxing.
Appearance: the old mad man scientist you always see in animea cartoons,............. yeah, thats him.
Personality: kind of kranky and rude


twisted Well can i play then? twisted

((I'm not in the rp, but there are some serious flaws with this character. I mean flaws this time as a referance to the realistic things that are supposed to be in this thread.

1.) "American" isn't a race, it's a nationality.

2.) You can't get any paler than white, so what's up with "pale white"?

3.) Acid and poison are neither drug nor chemical.

Just giving some constructive criticism. smile ))

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Xeshi

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 5:03 pm


Mehe, whoever posted that was so wrong! But yes, on a more serious note, acids could be used by fifth graders for some sort of a science project.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 10:51 pm


Well im not really playing in this game anymore, but that was my character........... so;

1: All thats aloud to be played in this game is humans, so what did you exspect me to put in Race

2: "White" is a generalized name for american skin color, "pale white" would be more of the actual paper white color

3: Most non-herbal drugs are made of poisons (such as meth or LSD), also Acids (such as sulferic acid) are on the chemical charts and are consitered to be harmful CHEMICALS

so please, try not to critisize............... when people are just trying to have fun, its VERY rude.

thank you lol

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:10 pm


Sir Fool
Well im not really playing in this game anymore, but that was my character........... so;

1: All thats aloud to be played in this game is humans, so what did you exspect me to put in Race

2: "White" is a generalized name for american skin color, "pale white" would be more of the actual paper white color

3: Most non-herbal drugs are made of poisons (such as meth or LSD), also Acids (such as sulferic acid) are on the chemical charts and are consitered to be harmful CHEMICALS

so please, try not to critisize............... when people are just trying to have fun, its VERY rude.

thank you lol


1.) I'd expect you to put something else, or not even have it there, logically, that makes sense.

2.) No, actually, if you aren't racist, you know that "white", isn't the general name for American skin color.

3.) Yes, but sulferic acid only has the word in its name, in reality, acids are liquids that have an spf I think, not sure of what it's called, I forget, but anyway they have a whatever it's called of lower than seven. Most non herbal drugs are not infact made of poisons, whoever taught you that is wrong. I happen to have relatives that use(including myself) non herbal prescription drugs for our probelms. Such as my Provigile(I dunno if it's spelled right or not), which I use to counteract the sleepiness brought on by my Narcelepsy.

4.) It's constructive criticism, and is not rude. smile

5.) Thanks a lot for putting me on your ingore list, without giving me the chance to prove you wrong. It wasn't rude, but putting me on your ignore list for no reason was, so don't send me PMs calling me rude.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:20 pm


aaaahhhhh, he deleted his post.......... well i guess he saw that i was right and his critasizem was not welcome. lol

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:23 pm


Sir Fool
aaaahhhhh, he deleted his post.......... well i guess he saw that i was right and his critasizem was not welcome. lol

You were saying?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:38 pm


You ((and i)) are being very rude, nether you or i are even in this RP...........

Oh and BTW, i use to make meth and LSD............ i know exsactlly what poisons are in them.

i dont need a resion to put you on ignore, thats whats so good about ignoring someone.

now lets stop argueing.............. its just a character profile.

Sir Fool


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:02 am


((Do you guys seriousley think it was neccisary in the forst place to post something like that? I guess I'm basically asking; "Is it too hard to just PM the guy?" Not to mention I think you guys are being pretty silly. It's just a character profile, let him post how he wants to, understandable or not. And the person who posted it, ((I don't really know who is who here)) doesn't have to be such a jerk. You could have calmly stated 'Thank you for the critisism, but I like my profile the way it is.' So I think everybody needs to SHUT UP about other people's crap, and let THEM deal with it.))
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 5:12 am


(( Can we PLEASE get back to the RP?? ))

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