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hurdy13

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:51 am


Hurdy was tracking foot prints he found on the ground as he manuvered threw the thick forest, he saw no where infront of him, and had to travel on the lowest branches to see, even walking on the ground once in a while. The prints were getting deeper, so some one must have been running recently,and would be ahead of him, he would catch him soon. But why would they be running away from Leaf? That was the most accepting place Hurdy could think of, they must have done something bad, or they are criminals. All the better, Hurdy himself was the same way.


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:16 am


leaves to hidden glass!!!

Red Xavier


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 12:09 pm


"Okay, the next technique I have in store for you to learn, Velar is called Genjutsu release, which shouldn't be too difficult to for the most part. This is a Ninjutsu technique where the idea is to focus all of your chakra and scream "release." This is something that a ninja can perform on themselves or on others, and it will effectively ward off most Genjutsu, unless extremely powerful or when used in conjunction with an advanced bloodline. But under most circumstances, it works. I'm not a Genjutsu user, but I can show you the proper way to focus your chakra and what to do afterwards." Sakura nodded slightly. Velar stood in place, his eyes on Sakura, as he awaited further instructions.

(1/4) Genjutsu Release

"Now what you what to do, is convert your stamina into chakra at this point, and just focus it through your entire body. Make sure to get a feel of how chakra feels when it is flowing through your body, that way if you ever have to use this technique, you will know when chakra is flowing throughout your entire body." Sakura said. Velar eyes closed, as he began to concentrate on summoning chakra all throughout of his body. The process was going rather well from what he could tell, and as he continued to send the chakra all throughout his body to make sure that there was a steady amount flowing, he opened his mouth to speak to Sakura" Okay, I'm ready for the next part of the technique." Velar said, in a low, but yet, slightly deep, type of voice.

(2/4) Genjutsu Release




"There really is nothing else to learn for the most part, Velar, all that you have to do is interlock both of your hands together at this point, and say, "Release." And depending on how strong the Genjutsu is, it may or may not release you from it. However, there is an alternative, if you can't use this technique. Like.. Lets say that you are all out of chakra. At that point, something as simple as causing pain in your body should work, but again, sometimes that may not even work, if the Genjutsu is strong enough." Sakura said. Velar’s eyes then opened up at that point. "Sounds very interesting for the most part." Velar said.

(3/4) Genjutsu Release


"So that's all there is to that whole technique? Nothing else to learn?" Velar questioned. "Nope. That's the whole technique." Sakura said. "That's another move I know then." Velar said, with a smile wrapped around his face.
"It would seem like it. However, the next technique should kick things up a little bit." Sakura said, with a slight smile.

(4/4) Genjutsu Release Completed!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 12:22 pm


"The last and strongest technique that I have to teach you Velar is called the Gaia Seal. This sealing jutsu is one that is placed upon the chest, and it gives a ninja increased power because of doing so. However, I could not tell you the full extent of its powers, as I have yet to actually test it out for myself. But I am sure that it will give you increased strength. First, what one has to do is gather chakra in their hand, which emits from the finger tips in the form of 5 purple flames, and from that point press your finger tips against your chest." Sakura said. Velar just looked on as Sakura talked.

(1/9)

"So the first thing that I have to do is gather chakra in my body, Correct? Then from that point, transfer that chakra into one of my hands to the point where it emits itself as a purple flame? Then the next thing that I do is touch my fingers to my chest?" Velar said to make sure he had everything down. "Yeah." Sakura said, lightly. "Sounds easy enough." Velar said, and from that point, he began to gather chakra around his body.

(2/9)




Velar’s eyes had closed while he was gathering chakra around his body for the Jutsu on hand. He had no doubt in his mind that he could complete the technique without failure. After a few moments, Velar could feel chakra flowing freely throughout his body, and he began to transfer and send all of that chakra into his right hand. Sakura just stood without words, watching as Velar attempted a jutsu, to which she had yet to test out on her own, and she hoped that nothing went wrong with it for that very reason.

(3/9)

As Velar's chakra had begun to flow down into his finger tips, his whole hand began to light on fire, and Sakura took note of that, before calling out to him, "Velar, refine your chakra, and make sure it only goes into your fingertips, because that is the place where it is supposed to be emitted!" Sakura said.

However, Velar's hand only got engulfed in the purple flames from that point, his face revealing nothing but pure anger at his weakness and his ability to not be able to properly control his chakra.

(4/9)




"Focus Velar Focus Refine and focus. I can do this." Velar said to himself, in his mind. And as he said those words to himself, all of the chakra within Velar's right hand began to flow into his fingertips, and emit themselves as purple flames. "I can do this; I can something such as this is nothing to me. Nothing." Velar continued to speak to himself with the walls of his mind. "Now, the next thing I have to do is just touch my fingers to my chest. That shouldn't even be a little bit of a challenge for me. I just wonder what will happen to me if I do." Velar murmured.

(5/9)

The purple flames of chakra emitting themselves from Velar's right hand seemed to be an endlessly flowing river, continuously outpouring, and Velar, whose eyes were now wide open, stared at the flames. Waiting just one moment before attempting the jutsu, it seemed that fate had chosen Velar to test out the Gaia Seal jutsu, and what was to become of him or his body was unknown, which in turn was the very thing that made Velar hesitant in the first place. "Okay Gaia Seal Here goes nothing!" Velar yelled.

(6/9)

Once Velar felt ready, he used his left hand to lift up his T-shirt. "Okay Here goes." Velar said to himself, as he began to move his right hand towards his chest. Upon touching his fingertips to his chest, Velar felt a sharp pain swallow his body up. His entire felt as though it was on fire, every portion of his body, throbbing in pain, his body, having no choice but to collapse onto the ground, while Velar rolled on the earth, the ice cold earth. "Why... Why is this happening? Someone please, Please, Help me, Help meeeee!!" Velar screamed out.

(7/9)

Instinctively, Sakura ran over to Velar, wondering what was wrong, as her hands touched his chest, and she tried to call out to him. "Velar! Velar! You have to wake up, Please, You have to hear my words, It's all right; I'm here. I can help you, just please wake up. I don't want you to die, not because of me, Please, Wake up!!" Sakura yelled, as she clutched Velar's body, which continued to wale and winch in pain. However, Velar continued to call out for help in his unrivaled pain seeming as though it would never subside. The pain just would not fade; instead it only intensified.

(8/9)

When Velar woke up, he found himself in the Konoha hospital, with a note on the left of Velar's bedside. "How did I get here?" Velar said to himself, confused about his where about. But just as that thought entered his mind, a knock that rattled against the door of the room he was in, forced Velar's head to focus on the door. And for a moment, he stared at it blankly, until he saw a girl with pink hair walk in, it was Sakura.

"Velar you’re awake! Are you okay?" Sakura said, with a tear slightly coming to her face. "Yeah, I'm fine. But... Just where am I? And how did I get here?" Velar said, as a grimacing look engulfed his face. "You’re in the Konoha Hospital. I brought you here after you finished the Gaia Seal, Something went wrong with it, and, I didn't know what else to do, so I brought you here. You were out for three days straight. I'm just glad you’re alright." Sakura said, with a small smile. "……" Velar looked laid his head down, upon hearing those words, a deep fit of rage now consuming the boy. "So, I failed." “Actually you didn’t you felt pain but it was done. I stopped by to give you these flowers, but I have to go now." Sakura said lightly, as she took out some of the older ones, which were currently in a flower vase, and put the new ones in. And one Sakura's way out, she threw the old flowers out, leaving Velar, without another word.

(9/9) Gaia Seal Completed!

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 12:52 pm


Hurdy stopped at a tree when he heard talking from the other side of it, two ninja arguing over something. "Im telling you, we need to get out of here, my god tells me so..." Hurdy didn't look yet, he would listen somemore. "Forget your god damned god, the hokage has a large bounty on her head, lets kill her and take it, plus we can nab any other demons while we're at it!" Hurdy looked more concerned now, they were talking about assasination of a kage. He would interupt this meeting nicely. Hurdy stepped out from around the corner and looked at the two men.


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:30 pm


"What the hell? Who are you! Do you want to die little boy.... We can kill you so easily you won't bieleve it." Hurdy smiled, he knew eventually they could kil him, but he could take one of them out no problem. "Well, I am Hurdy akasun, the missing ninja of Hidden Sand village." The two looked puzzled and then squinted thier eyes. "Oh, your the one Sasori taught earlier in Hidden Sand when he was there on tour, he told us about you. I guess your okay, but your going to have to leave now, We have stuff to do." Hurdy shook his head and refused to leave until he was taught a jutsu from one of the two.


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:40 pm


Hurdy watched as the regular looking man stood and came to him, and drew a wierd circle on the ground, stepping into it, he tried to bind HUrdy. "Well, since it doesn't work, I guess I could teach you this technique. You get the blood of the enemy, and eat it. Step into the circle and then they are yours. You can stab your self, and they will do the same, like the same jutsu as the Nara clan. You will truely be a master of power now, since you are wooden and a puppet, you won't get hurt like a human opponent would. This is acually the perfect jutsu for you if you think about it..."


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:33 pm


Naruto walked over to Velar as he smiled. "You really are pushing yourself to get ready for the exam aren't you?" he asked. Velar looked at him seriously and nodded. "Yes, I want to push myself and see how good I really am. Even if I don't make Jonin this time I don't want to feel as though I didn't try my best." replied Velar. Naruto nodded to her as she responded.

Summoning Technique 1/10

"Well, I figured that you might work up an appetite with all this training. So I brought you back some Ramen." said Naruto as he held up a bag. Velar smiled as she walked over to take the bag from him. "I could definitely use a break to eat something. Thank you." she said. Then she walked over and found a place to sit down next to an old tree stump.

Summoning Technique 2/10



Shadow lay down next to her. He was a bit hungry, but he wasn't a big Ramen eater. She pulled out the Ramen and set it out on the stump. Naruto must've hurried back from the Ramen shop. Amazingly, the Ramen was still very warm. As she began to eat Naruto sat down on the other side of the stump. "Have you learned any summons yet?" asked Naruto.

Summoning Technique 3/10

Velar nodded her head as she ate another spoonful of the Ramen. "Yes, I’ve learned a couple already." she responded as she looked up at Naruto. He seemed to light up and smile at her. "Great! How about I show you a trick that I know to make summoning even easier for you to perform." said Naruto as his eyes glowed with enthusiasm.

Summoning Technique 4/10

Velar shrugged in response. "Sounds good to me." she said as she went back to eat more of her Ramen. Naruto sat there fidgeting as Velar finished her food. He jumped to his feet as she finished. "Are you ready to begin the training?" he asked enthusiastically. Velar nodded and stood up slowly to face him. "Sure, where do we start?" asked Velar with a smile.

Summoning Technique 5/10

"You know that when you perform some kinds of summons the strength of your summon directly depends on how much chakra you used, right?" asked Naruto. Velar nodded in response. "You have also learned how much chakra it takes to perform certain summon by now, right?" asked Naruto. "Yes, I have learned that." replied Velar with a nod.

Summoning Technique 6/10


"Well, what I want to teach you is how to focus more chakra than that into your summon. If you can learn to do this you can make your particular summon even more powerful than usual. This way even a low level summon could be a bit more useful to you." explained Naruto. Velar thought about his explanation for a moment before nodding to him.

Summoning Technique 7/10

"Watch me." said Naruto as he bit his thumb drawing blood. Then he formed a set of hand seals before putting his hand to the ground. A large seal formed on the ground around his hand as it touches. Velar watched as a large puff of smoke formed next to Naruto. Then to her surprise when the smoke cleared there was a small orange frog with a blue vest sitting there.

Summoning Technique 8/10

"This is Gamakichi. I usually call on him to give me information or to get into places that I can't easily." explained Naruto. "Or when you mess up while trying to summon my father." said Gamakichi with a snicker. "Shut up!" yelled Naruto as he scowled at the frog. Then he turned back to Velar and his face softened. "By using more chakra than is necessary, but not so much that it is wasted I have made him stronger." explained Naruto.

Summoning Technique 9/10

In his case it could help keep him from disappearing immediately if he gets hit by something and it also helps to make him stronger. This works nicely because he can move faster and farther than usual. Velar looked at him and nodded. Then Gamakichi was gone in another puff of smoke. "You can probably apply this to your summons without actually trying it now. It would be better to move on to more training now." suggested Naruto.

Summoning Technique 10/10



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:36 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:11 pm


One day Velar was walking around the forest training, He was practicing his skills for the upcoming chunnin exams. He was trying to get even better at controlling his techniques. He was deep in the forest near an eagle’s nest he liked to look at the eagles take off. He wondered if he could get a flying jutsu, but if he did that would be for later, right now he needed to practice. He started by doing Kage Bushin no Jutsu. “Kage bushin no jutsu!”

Part 1/10 Onbu

5 clones appeared. “Alright! I didn’t even use that much chakra!” He decided to camp out here for no reason he did like the wilderness. This area was filled with rabbits and squirrels so NO more fish. He was sick of fish when he was training under Naruto that’s all he basically ever ate. He decided to head near this eagles nest and take a look at them. He had always liked birds which is why he got a Dragon summon they could fly.

Part 2/10 Onbu

He was going to get the eagle summon but the dragon was cooler. He walked away from the eagles next and thought he saw something drop from the tree. He looked back and saw nothing. “Must be my eyes playing tricks on me.” He said. He went back to training his skill trying to get better for the upcoming chunnin exams. He shot his snakes out of his hands and hit a tree right on the mark. “Alright!” He went to bed.


Part 3/10 Onbu


While he slept unknowing that there was an Onbu latched onto his back. He slept good that night and started training unknowing he went all through the day. Training hard working on improving his skills. He couldn’t wait to be a chunnin so that his made up jutsu would improve. He would try his best at the chunnin exam and hoped there was going to be lots of battles involved. He Started training again he WAS going to improve for the exams.

Part 4/10 Onbu


Once again he slept unknowing that there was an Onbu latched onto his back. He again slept good that night and started training still unknowing he went all through the day. Training hard working on improving his skills. He still couldn’t wait to be a chunnin so that his made up jutsu would improve. He would try his best at the chunnin exam and still hoping there was lots of battles involved. He Started training again he STILL WAS going to improve for the exams.

Part 5/10 Onbu

The next morning he felt heavier and wondered why. He kept training and then he heard an ON…BU!! From his back. He looked back but saw nothing. He then looked at his back and saw that there was a weird furry thing on it. “AHHH GET IT OFF GET IT OFF THERE IS A WERID THING ON MY BACK IT’S GOING TO EAT MY BRAINS AHHHH GET IT OFF GET IT OFF HELP ME!!!! AHHHHHH!!!” After about an hour of running around screaming. “AHHH GET IT OFF.”

Part 6/10 Onbu

Velar finally figured out it wasn’t going to eat him. He took a better look at it and realized how cute it was. He fed it a little food and it was even happier singing. “Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, On….bu!!!”
Onbu was a cute little thing and Velar Fed it constantly. He forgot about most of his training treating Onbu like a baby pet. It was really fun taking care of Onbu and Onbu would always go. “Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, On….bu!” Velar liked the little feller.

Part 7/10 Onbu


Velar kept training and taking care of Onbu trying to get better. He was going through food fast and had to hunt a lot more because Onbu ate a lot. A lot more that you would think that little guy ate. He continued still training and feeding Onbu wondering if the little guy was EVER going to get off his back. He wasn’t really growing either. Velar supposed maybe the more he trained the better Onbu got or something. Onbu was really good at sniffing out prey to catch for food. Often warning when a wild animal might attack.

Part 8/10 Onbu


Onbu was very helpful and Velar always liked it when Onbu got happy and started singing. “Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, Onbu.” And Onbu would always end with an “On…..BU!!!! Velar was growing attached to the little guy. It was hard to resist because he was so cute. Onbu was this furry little guy that was always happy and didn’t seem dangerous at all. Velar figured he would have to go back to training sometime soon other wise he would never get better.

Part 9/10 Onbu

After a few days in the forest with Onbu feeding him and training; Velar knew it was time to be heading back. He couldn’t really get Onbu off his back so he would have to train with him. It shouldn’t be that hard. Velar Wondered if when Onbu got bigger he would fight with him. It was an interesting thought. That would be really cool. Velar started heading back to town to train more all the way Onbu going. “Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, Onbu, Onbu.”

Part 10/10 Onbu COMPLETE!

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:32 pm


Velar, having learned Genjutsu release from Sakura, had a second technique he would like to learn in mind. To learn this technique he would have to find TenTen. Velar stopped by the Ramen shop hoping to hear some information about where he could find his next teacher. Two men were already at the counter eating large bowls of Ramen. Velar slid some money across the counter and the cook brought him back a medium sized bowl of ramen. Velar tasted the beef flavored broth just as he heard one of the men, dressed in a green unitard speak up, "Well TenTen has recently taken to training in the old clearing on the other side of the mountain" said the man boisterously to his lunch partner. Velar took several big gulps of the broth until he could feel its warmth in his stomach. Stepping back outside of the stand he knew which mountain the man in green had mentioned. To the north was a small mountain with the faces of previous leaders of Hidden Leaf. Velar had never been on the other side because all he knew existed over there was more forest.

1/9 Rising Dragon

Velar began walking down the street. He noticed as the sun set fewer and fewer people were running around outside. Velar quickly found himself approaching the westernmost side of the carving. As he neared the mountain, at the foot of which was located the Hokage's house, he noticed several leaf ninja following him from rooftop to rooftop. Apparently even in this time of peace Konoha was taking particular care not to repeat the assassinations of the past. Velar walked calmly in an arc around the mountain bypassing the Hokage's dwelling. Once he reached the northernmost exit his followers were no longer concerned with him and returned to their posts.

2/9 rising Dragon

Velar walked through the autumnal foliage. Many of the trees were tinted with orange and yellow. Leaves had begun to gather all across the forest as small wisps of wind pushed them into meaningless pilgrimages across the forest floor. Velar continued walking until he reached a small clearing of the trees. The light of sunset emphasized the gold and red of the dying leaves. In the middle of the field he saw the girl. She knelt down in the grass that had grown. Velar could only make out her outline by the fact the sun was behind her. She looked very petite and was obviously rolling something up. Velar stepped from the bushes to get a closer look and to make him self known. He purposely carried his arms farther out to the side than natural to show he meant no harm on the woman. She looked up and quickly finished rolling up what Velar recognized as an extremely long scroll and tucked it away.

3/9 Rising Dragon

Velar was first to initiate contact, "Are you Ten-Ten?" he asked "If you know me then I guess it is only right that I know you." She replied with a small smile. "Excuse me" Velar responded "Don't feel threatened. I have done guard time for the Hokage and I recognize you from the file we have on you. You are a Mizu from Hidden Mist. Your country has approved a training card for you. You are free to ask any trainer who will take you." She responded purposely giving him more information than even he knew "Will you" Velar shot back as he took in the information that even the elders of his village had not given him.

4/9 rising Dragon

"I have one technique that you will find useful. My Rising Twin Dragons will make use of the small weaponry you are accustomed to." TenTen pulled out two extra scrolls. She placed them on the ground and knelt down into the grass with Velar. "First" she began "you must seal all the weapons you want to use into these scrolls. Velar emptied his pockets of everything he had. He had a small pile of shuriken, and even smaller stash of kunai, and three large piles of needles of various lengths and circumferences. TenTen unfurled the scroll and looked expectantly at Velar. Velar began placing his weapons in a neat roll along the first scroll. Once he had lined up all his weapons He knelt at the end opposite TenTen. Over all he was about thirty feet from her. She called to him to explain the next part of the sealing process, "This paper already has a sealing spell on it. Focus your chakra into the paper so it may absorb the weaponry."

5/9 Rising Dragon

Velar pulled his palms together to make the sign of the dragon. He felt his chakra. He imagined a great dam. The Dragon sign pulled the chakra to his arms where it throbbed in the veins. Once Velar began feeling the light tingling in his legs from lack of the special energy he dropped his palms hard onto either side of the scroll. Two red lines shot down the paper. One by one the weapons puffed into smoke leaving only kanji representations of what was sealed in each particular spot. The paper conducted his chakra perfectly. As the red line extended down either side the weapons were absorbed. Quickly though he felt he had over exerted himself. He could see two kunai at the farthest end of the scroll. With an added push he bit into his lip focusing his gaze on them. The first one disappeared but still the final one remained. Velar didn't need to push any more chakra into the paper and he realized this. He simply needed to focus. He stared longingly at the final kunai; his hands were beginning to cramp up as they lay on the paper with his chakra slowly flowing out. After a moment of extreme focus the final kunai popped into the paper and Velar felt some of his chakra rush back out of the paper and into his arms. He sat back and took a breath.

6/9 Rising Dragon

"Doing it all at once wasn't necessary but I guess I can't call you undedicated." TenTen called laughingly. She had already unfurled a second scroll and sealed many weapons into it for Velar. Velar and TenTen each rolled up one of the scrolls. She smiled at his as she brought both of them to him. "Let’s see how you think they should be used" she asked as she stepped back to give him ample room. Velar has heard of the technique before and knew loosely the principles by which it worked but he thought it was dangerous to put him in a vortex of blades without any prior experience of a technique like this. Velar didn't even have the benefit of having seen this technique used before. One part of the equation was spin. He would have to throw the scrolls to keep them high enough and at such a spin that he could use the weapons. If he threw the scrolls to his or too low he limited his weapon options by not being able to easily reach some of the symbols. If he added to much spin he would miss some of the weapons as they passed by, if he didn't add enough his effectiveness would drop because he wouldn't get new weapons as fast as he could throw them. The part that was mostly concerning Velar’s mind was the speed required in his hands. He could easily hit many of the weapon symbols but if he didn't move his hands fast enough he could easily fumble the weapons or cut himself.

7/9 rising Dragon

Velar held a scroll in each hand. He held his hands out to his sides and crouched slightly. With a flick of his ankles he was airborne and could feel the part of the scroll that he held onto become smaller and smaller as it unraveled beneath him. Velar found himself completing several spins on the way up. Just before he hit the apex of his leap he began calling forth the weapons. Velar saw a kunai symbol in his lower left eye. His hand brushed the symbol and the cold steel came out sideways putting a small gash in his palm. He flung it at the ground where it landed at TenTen's feet with a quiet "wip" noise from the grass. Velar could feel himself descending already. He quickly mastered the hand motion this technique took. He would touch a symbol and pull back slightly until he knew instinctively how each weapon reacted upon appearing from he scroll. He quickened pace raining down needles and kunai with he occasional shuriken until he landed on the ground with the scrolls lazily making their final descent as they wafted down the few final feet to the earth. The last rays of sunlight stretched out over the trees and a gust of wind lazily pushed a collection of leaves into the clearing. Velar looked at the small whirlwind momentarily before turning back to TenTen. He could see she was nodding and recognized this as training. That small nod told him to perform the Rising Twin Dragon's Technique and pin all the leaves encroaching on the open space of the field to the ground. Velar didn't even bother to retwist the scrolls. He jumped into the air once more. This time he focused a bit of his chakra as string like appendages reaching for each symbol on the scrolls. The expenditure of a little extra energy allowed him to know what was quickly coming up to where his arms could reach. Velar unleashed a blizzard of steel from in the confines of the double helix of seal paper. He could see the leaves as they fought to fly to their dying freedom but were assaulted by many well placed steel points. Shuriken would cut in a small winding pattern taking two or three leaves with them as each was thrown. The kunai and the needles flew in perfectly straight lines almost always hitting one leaf but rarely tagging two that ventured to line themselves up.

8/9 rising Dragon

TenTen looked up at the student who had mastered the technique she pioneered so long ago. It had taken her a week to perfect each individual aspect. This Mizu chunnin had sealed all his weapons in one go and after a half hour of training almost perfected the technique as far as it could be perfected in a non-combat situation. Velar quickly found himself down to his last few instruments of the leaf catching exercise. Two needles and a shuriken. He looked out to see two leaves blow past his helix. He turned and launched his weapons. The needles passed threw the same leaf but without something behind them to stick to their small circumferences easily passed through. The Shuriken easily found its mark and curved into a violent crash were it buried itself in the root of a tree. Velar landed on the ground panicking. He had failed his training unless he could find another weapon in the scrolls. He hands passed over many symbols as the snaking paper came gently back to the earth. Each one revealed nothing to Velar. He watched as the final leaf blew away with his chances of completing his training. His right hand however finally grasped something solid. A small sickle had appeared from the scroll TenTen had filled with weapons for him. It was the last of his weapons. Both scrolls laid sleeping on the ground and Velar's feet were already firmly planted in earth but he still had one blade sparking with desire to kill the leaf as it escaped his vision. The wind carried it farther and higher. Velar took careful aim and unleashed the sickle. The curved blade made the weapon spiral like a boomerang. Velar held his breath as he watched the glint of metal get smaller and smaller. After a moment he sucked in air and pumped his fist as the sickle spiraled back, just like a boomerang, with a leaf impaled on its end. TenTen walked over clapping. She helped him reseal his weaponry and invited him to the Ramen shack for dinner.

9/9 Rising Dragon
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:34 pm


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(( Your posts are all one or two lines short Chidori. Fix them please. ))


sorry i did that at 2 am lol must be why i wrote she, i was at the point i was almost hillusnating (lol cant spell it)

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:37 pm


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I Dark Lotus I
(( Your posts are all one or two lines short Chidori. Fix them please. ))


sorry i did that at 2 am lol must be why i wrote she, i was at the point i was almost hillusnating (lol cant spell it)
((.... You can't have Onbu. Nyu already has it. Sorry, but your going to have to choose a different summon.))
PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:42 pm


bonedragon17
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I Dark Lotus I
(( Your posts are all one or two lines short Chidori. Fix them please. ))


sorry i did that at 2 am lol must be why i wrote she, i was at the point i was almost hillusnating (lol cant spell it)
((.... You can't have Onbu. Nyu already has it. Sorry, but your going to have to choose a different summon.))
((yeah unfortunately you will have to make it a different summon))

Komenusai


Nyu_Panda_King

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:54 pm


((He can have Onbu I have kirby now.))
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