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 Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:10 pm
@Sherriff - Thanks!
@Godstone - Thank you. But don't worry the sequel will come shortly.
@Rom - IMO that is where it picks up. (somewhere around there)
@FS - XD Thanks. Something together eh? That would be a lot of fun!
@Aku - Thanks.
@LF - I had several requests to make it long (18 typed pages) Glad you liked it.
@Draken - Hellz yeah! Thank you.
@Maul - I had no idea you read this (lately anyway) Glad you liked it wink
@Masamune - Glad you liked it. really you thought he was dead? I said at some point (one of the shorts I think) that he was alive cause Fish said the same thing.
@Wayne - I am guessing that is a good wow? Thanks!
@Betman - Thanks!
@FMB - XD I take that as a complement.
@Tatsu - It all started when I was drugged by a man in Tibet, three years ago. Thanks!
@Sauvie - Thank you. I thought it was rather clever as well whee
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:12 pm
Just a question, did you have all this in mind when you started Cult Team Go? Like, did you actually plan out a basic storyline of what was going to happen, or did you just wing it?
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:17 pm
Yeah I had the basics planned the whole time. I did cut out a bit and also add a bit into the story such as when I met Godstone, Drakens mother, i brought her to life. And in turn I had taken some extra chapters out. In all yes I did have it planned out.
HOLY s**t FISH YOU ARE MY HERO! ~just noticed Cult Sub Titile~
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:18 pm
Congratulations, Seaphron. You're cultie of the moment. n_n
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:21 pm
I feel loved again! 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 10:25 pm
I just realized that I havent read any of this since chapter... 27? 28?
..eh, Ill read it tommorow
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:33 pm
A nice final chapter, but there were some parts that I have to point out, since no one else will. xd For one, it just seemed to be trying to be too epic. Ganondorf pops up out of nowhere and fights with Maul and Michalie? I don't remember hearing anything about that coming. And then it just seemed like everyone was fighting everyone all at once, and it got a bit confusing (to me, at least). It was sad when you died, and it caught me off guard, which was good, although I still don't understand why you'd want to die when you have somebody that loves you. I thought more than once that you were going to appear from under the ground and kill Echo, though. xd I couldn't believe Trenn died in the end, that was a pretty big surprise, and when Meta Beast came in, I was also surprised. You're good at surprising, for the most part, but some of the parts seemed to be pretty obvious in what route they were going to take. I didn't understand how we became allied with Mario and Luigi, but it was cool to have them there, and I really for some reason liked the line about Kirby. All in all, it was a very good chapter, and I feel as though you've improved as a writer in this short amount of time. It's sad to see Cult Team Go... go, but I'm interested in your future works. A fitting final chapter, and a good, interesting story. I hope to see your future works in the Cult.
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 3:09 pm
Hero Maul Masamune 5.0 Great ending. The epic length added to the epicness. Also, the battle itself was epic with every enemy and cultie coming together to fight. Also, I had thought that Meta Beast had died a long time ago. I didn't realise that he was still alive. xd EPIC Yep. The only thing that would make it more epic was if there was music from Doom in the background like in my group's narrative filmmaking film.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:47 pm
@Dragn - I was wondering if you still read.
@Fish - Thanks for the feedback, best out of all of them. I told you what you wanted to know right?
@Masamune - ~goes to find a way to do so~
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:53 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:31 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:07 pm
whee that was pure awesome, Seaphron. not only are the battles good, you can definitely get the post-battle scenes very emtionally charged. heart heart very awesome.
Have you ever considered doing NaNoWriMo, Seaphron? You could create some good stuff if you tried that. It's really good for getting the creative juices going.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:39 am
Thanks Koosei glad you liked it!
NaNoWriMo is that where you write about a certain topic and submit it once a month? I have heard of it but I don't know much on it.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 7:37 am
Seaphron Thanks Koosei glad you liked it!
NaNoWriMo is that where you write about a certain topic and submit it once a month? I have heard of it but I don't know much on it. somewhat, but not really. it's in the month of November, and the goal is to write a 50 000 word novel by the end of the month. It has to be a brand new story idea though. But, it's really fun. GO HERE FOR MORE INFO xp don't worry. I plan on making a thread saying more once it comes nearer. wink
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:44 am
Thanks for the info Koosei i will have to look at in more in depth when I am not in class XD
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