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 Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:35 pm
Your story sounds ... interesting, Pietro. It'll either be brilliant or it ... won't.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:43 pm
The only thing I'm really worrying about is getting the pacing right and keeping the monologuing to a minimum. Basically finding ways to advance the themes and "voice" of the narrative without blatantly spelling it out.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:51 pm
Pietro Django Maximoff The only thing I'm really worrying about is getting the pacing right and keeping the monologuing to a minimum. Basically finding ways to advance the themes and "voice" of the narrative without blatantly spelling it out.
ooo, now that's one hell of a challenge.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:53 pm
Rex Mason
ooo, now that's one hell of a challenge.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:57 pm
Pietro Django Maximoff Rex Mason
ooo, now that's one hell of a challenge.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:08 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:09 pm
Is truthiness a real word!? Yes, Jack. Others are up
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:17 pm
what's new silly-putty man?
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:18 pm
Jackk Napier what's new silly-putty man?
Nothing, just more insomnia.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:28 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:31 pm
((Hmm, thick contour, expressive while simplistic, artistic creativity on choice dimensions of expression ... Zeeky like.))
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:47 pm
Yep, she pretty much rocks out loud.
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:52 am
Lucifer Morningstar Rex Mason
Really, is it that lanky skeleton Mic? Yeah Guns and Roses is good but I usually perfer the original.
((Hey, that's my book your chuckling about. )) stare
((yeah, ok. Just knowing some of the history makes the whole thing laughable)).
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 8:04 am
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