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 Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 2:45 am
Shadowgirl_Ida Mystic Isle The old stories and myths of dragons, elves, and mystical creatures are often thought of as just that; myths... or are they something more?In an isolated place far from other realms lies a land full of all the mystical creatures that are suppose d to be legend. It's an island by Antarctica, but it's not cold or snow y. It has really seasons ; summer, spring, fall and winter. The island is the gigantic, but it's not on any maps, because normal humans can't see it. It's mostly mountains, rolling hills, forest everywhere you look. There are two huge lakes made by glaciers hundreds of thousands years ago, named Grace and Pride. The highest mountain there is is Kilar, located in the west. Villages and towns of many races can be found everywhere. Tribes of different demons move about also. There's only one big town by Grace named , Fume Waters. Every race can be found here living in harmony amongst each other. Unicorns and elves are found/live mostly on the eastside of the island. I hope this helps... I'm not sure how else to suggest things, sorry... sweatdrop I'm not meaning to be harsh or anything. Just a couple of spelling/grammer mistakes, and the first sentence was a little awkward to read. These are just suggestions, It's probably best if you use your own words. You might also want to change some of the sentences to merge a couple together, and not have so many "it"s in there; they kind of break up the flow a bit. I love the idea, what's the thread named? You've got a really good start here.
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 3:02 am
Aisling Fallenfeather I am currently in Portland, Oregon, and man was the flight BORING! Well, accually, there were two flights, Tucson to Vegas, than Vegas to Portland, but still! Yawn.... I took a nap earlier... without that nap, I would have had only 4 hours of sleep for almost two days. An incredible feat for me, might I add. How is everyone? Stupid places with the same names. I've been to Portalnd... but not that one... gonk
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 7:31 am
Guess where I'm gonna be going in 4 DAYS!!! mrgreen
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 7:39 am
Pandali Guess where I'm gonna be going in 4 DAYS!!! mrgreen On holiday? question
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 7:58 am
angryfisheatenbycat Pandali Guess where I'm gonna be going in 4 DAYS!!! mrgreen On holiday? question Yep! I'm going to Germany!!!! Unfortunately, it will probably be hard to find a computer, so I'll be gone from gaia for about two weeks. cry
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 9:50 am
Pandali angryfisheatenbycat Pandali Guess where I'm gonna be going in 4 DAYS!!! mrgreen On holiday? question Yep! I'm going to Germany!!!! Unfortunately, it will probably be hard to find a computer, so I'll be gone from gaia for about two weeks. cry Cool! Enjoy yourself! 3nodding be a nice break/reward from all those exams, ey? biggrin
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 9:58 am
angryfisheatenbycat Pandali angryfisheatenbycat Pandali Guess where I'm gonna be going in 4 DAYS!!! mrgreen On holiday? question Yep! I'm going to Germany!!!! Unfortunately, it will probably be hard to find a computer, so I'll be gone from gaia for about two weeks. cry Cool! Enjoy yourself! 3nodding be a nice break/reward from all those exams, ey? biggrin Yup! Still have two more to go though neutral
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 10:07 am
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Eloquent Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 10:36 am
Fizz: If you want to. wink
Inuyasha is unoriginal and cliché. Consider me non-interested in boring dubbed crap xp
Mou: -Is hawt XOOO <3 - Humps - Nice avatar
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 11:20 am
Talking of avatars Xeroxer... you have pants over boxers... confused I didn't know that was possible sweatdrop And Mou always looks good! ^^
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 3:07 pm
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 6:57 pm
Xeroxer Fizz: If you want to. wink Inuyasha is unoriginal and cliché. Consider me non-interested in boring dubbed crap xp Mou: -Is hawt XOOO <3 - Humps - Nice avatar
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Posted: Thu May 26, 2005 7:58 pm
angryfisheatenbycat Shadowgirl_Ida Mystic Isle The old stories and myths of dragons, elves, and mystical creatures are often thought of as just that; myths... or are they something more?In an isolated place far from other realms lies a land full of all the mystical creatures that are suppose d to be legend. It's an island by Antarctica, but it's not cold or snow y. It has really seasons ; summer, spring, fall and winter. The island is the gigantic, but it's not on any maps, because normal humans can't see it. It's mostly mountains, rolling hills, forest everywhere you look. There are two huge lakes made by glaciers hundreds of thousands years ago, named Grace and Pride. The highest mountain there is is Kilar, located in the west. Villages and towns of many races can be found everywhere. Tribes of different demons move about also. There's only one big town by Grace named , Fume Waters. Every race can be found here living in harmony amongst each other. Unicorns and elves are found/live mostly on the eastside of the island. I hope this helps... I'm not sure how else to suggest things, sorry... sweatdrop I'm not meaning to be harsh or anything. Just a couple of spelling/grammer mistakes, and the first sentence was a little awkward to read. These are just suggestions, It's probably best if you use your own words. You might also want to change some of the sentences to merge a couple together, and not have so many "it"s in there; they kind of break up the flow a bit. I love the idea, what's the thread named? You've got a really good start here. Thank you for your suggestions. When I'm finish with school and examz I'm going to focus on the thread.
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Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 4:33 am
*stares in shock, then falls over* Xeroxer's avatar is co-ordinated! surprised eek xp And sparkley!
WHERE IS TANII?!! gonk I wish people didn't do this... join something and then dissapear. Hmph. No matter what though, I'm posting by the end of today. Nyeh.
Ida: No problem. smile
Oh dear... *steers clear of fizz and her new powers*
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Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 7:17 am
*dies* Xeroxer, i wanna be your fangirl!!!!
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