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 Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:24 am
The last chapter was brilliant, your writing has got better with each chapter. I am sad that this is the end but look forward to the new stories that i know you will write. If you want any help just pm me . 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:48 am
I havent even passed the 20th chapter. gonk
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:39 am
Hail the victorious dead! (LOTR ref) Great final chapter, and congrats on finishing the whole thing. I don't know what else I can say, other than well done.
I look foward to your future work, if you ever want to do something together as well, then just ask.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 3:53 pm
Dang, that was a great end to a great story. You are a really good writer and I look forward to reading whatever else you write.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:37 pm
LONG
But that was amazinggg.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:42 pm
El Oh El, I destroyed a whole lot of people right thar xd
Awesome work, kinda sad it's gone though.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:01 pm
******** A! That was so cool! I got to kick Gannondorf's a** and we won! Nice!
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:04 pm
Great ending. The epic length added to the epicness. Also, the battle itself was epic with every enemy and cultie coming together to fight. Also, I had thought that Meta Beast had died a long time ago. I didn't realise that he was still alive. xd
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:13 pm
Masamune 5.0 Great ending. The epic length added to the epicness. Also, the battle itself was epic with every enemy and cultie coming together to fight. Also, I had thought that Meta Beast had died a long time ago. I didn't realise that he was still alive. xd EPIC
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:22 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:29 pm
Wow indeed, Wayner.
Great ending, Seaphers. I'm sad to see this go.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:53 pm
Pff, what a short last chapter.
dang that was long
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:32 pm
Funky Monkey Bill Pff, what a short last chapter. dang that was longDrama Queen
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 7:33 pm
How did you make this? Did you genetically infuse it with pure, uncut PWNage and win?
2 words. ********. Priceless.
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 9:05 pm
WOW seaphron holy crap the end chapter is a great work and totally entertaining I am sad to see the story go but what a way to go out
(the Kirby and Yoshi teamwork was genius)
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