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 Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 9:29 pm
NikkiUzumakiHyuga There you go!
Rp Sample:
A slender girl jumped out of the river a large fish in her hands. A deep frown was etched on her face while she trudged back to the camp. Her long blonde hair was matted down to her back, and she just knew that it would be a pain to get through later. Letting out a sigh the girl arrived in camp, just to see her teammates gone,and the elderly lady sleeping off to the side. Groaning she smashed her palm into her forehead, achieving a resounding smack sound. She had no idea that they would actually leave a defenseless old lady alone for any amount of time.
Grumbling to herself Nikki looked at the dying fire and picked up some of the last of the old and crackly wood throwing it into the fire. Picking up a longer stick she pierced the fist and held it over the fire. She didn't want to skin it yet, it seemed like to much work to do while she was still soaking wet. Shaking her head and sending water flying she only heard a few cracking branches before a large bird swooped down and cawed loudly waking the older women.
Growling Nikki jumped up and whipped out a kunai. Bounding over to stand protectively before the frightened older woman. Putting on a grim face of determination Nikki flicked her wrist automatically, sending the sharp projectile flying. And to her pleasure, dead into the side of the bird. As it spiraled to the ground Nikki sighed, and ran a hand through her hair. Well they had some more food to eat.
Watching as the old woman sat down on her bed mat Nikki smiled. She hated being left behind to watch the people when they had escort missions. But of course being the only female member on the team she was expected to cook. But all things considered she was the only one who could cook. Outside of Li being able to fry a fish with a fireball. But they could never eat said fish afterwards anyways.
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 9:31 pm
Blank101 Well Here it is- Rp Sample: Alex looked down at his hands the hands that were socked in blood not to long before. How could this of happend? was the only thing running through Alex's head at the time. After along while nelt down next to a river cleaning his hands of the blood, Alex finally stood and looked to the night sky with a smile coming to his mouth, this smile wasn't like a normal smile but that of releaf. (( if i spelt something wrong and or need to fix the sample in any way just say the word and i'll edit it))
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 10:09 am
ok, try number 2
RP sample
Veeyato was in a deep sleep untill the sun came through his window and on his face. He woke up and got ready for school. After finishing everything at home he went out for some breakfast. On his way he noticed some girls looking at him, he thought nothing of it. He went to his favorite ramen stand like he does every morning. The shop keeper was looking at him kind of wierd, still Veeyato thought nothing of it. After finishing a big bowl of chicken ramen soup he decided to start his way to school.
On his way in, some ninjas were standing outside the school building. He didnt look at them but they were staring pretty hard at him. After Veeyato got into the classroom he sat down and tipped his seat back to reflected on his morning. Veeyato thought "I've had a wierd morning, everyone has been looking at me". While he was thinking Veeyato's friend Ken came up and yelled "Vee!!!"
Veeyato fell right out of his chair and onto the floor. Veeyato felt embarassed, but all Ken said was "uhhhhh, Vee. look down.....", Veeyato was confused but he looked down anyway. Veeyato's face dropped, Veeyato said "Well this explains my morning.....". He stood up, zipped up his pants then sat back down and got ready for the rest of his day.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 3:06 pm
Okay try number 2
Rp Sample:
Alex looked down at his hands the hands that were covered in blood not too long before. How could this of happed? was the only thing running through Alex's head at the time. After a long while of sitting down next to a river cleaning his hands of the blood, Alex finally stood and looked to the night sky with a smile coming to his mouth, this smile wasn't like a normal smile but that of re-leaf .
(( My Microsoft isn't working so i had to change the words around))
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 9:04 pm
.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.). Eureka_7_girl13 Well, I'm Kotouru Kurinae,and I have no idea what village yet so here we go sweatdrop RP Example:As Kotouru Kurinae entered the ramen shop on the edge of the village she felt a faint breeze against her cheeks,it was mid August and the sakura trees were in full bloom,tomorrow was to be her first day as a "real"ninja. The day tomorrow was also the anniversary of her father's death and to be exact her mother's birthday as well.So many things happening on one day,she felt excited and overwhelmed by all of this, but she also felt saddened. It was only a year ago her father had died,she still remembers the day she found out, the memories flood over her as if everything happened yesterday. Kotouru looked into the sky and a tear fell from her eyes, hoping no one saw her, she quickly wiped it away and walked out of the ramen shop. Well, I'm Kotouru Kurinae,and I have no idea what village yet so here we go sweatdrop try number:2 RP Example:As Kotouru Kurinae entered the ramen shop on the edge of the village. She felt a faint breeze against her cheeks.It was mid August and the sakura trees were in full bloom.Tomorrow was to be her first day as a "real"ninja. The day tomorrow was also the anniversary of her father's death, and to be exact her mother's birthday as well.So many things happening on one day.She felt excited and overwhelmed by all of this, but she also felt saddened. It was only a year ago her father had died,she still remembers the day she found out.The memories flood over her as if everything happened yesterday. Kotouru looked into the sky and a tear fell from her eyes.Hoping no one saw her, she quickly wiped it away and walked out of the ramen shop.
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 7:07 pm
RP Sample
The rain had just began to fall not five minutes ago and Tadashi was already soaked. But the wet didnt slow him down at all. To keep the water out of his eyes he pulled his hood over his white hair and pulled up his face mask. He jumped from tree to tree until he reached the end of the forrest.
Now he faced a large city covered by a large cloud in the night sky. The rain soaked the city, causing all its residents to head indoors. Tadashi smirked. It was time...and this time...he wouldnt mess up.
He reached into his side pouch and pulled out three shuriken. He threw two of them into the city, he watched as they tore into a small building and thoked into the wall of the eating area. One man inside looked at the shuriken on the wall. "Its him..."
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 6:18 am
@Blank101: I don't get it... sorry... no go.. Could you do another one?
@Eureka: You didn't really change anything >< You just made everything full stops which sounds very abrupt >< But it's okay, I guess, pass.
@Markifers: Pass!!
Sorry for the wait!
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Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 10:45 pm
Sample
Daisuke dashed across the field and stopped abruptly as the wooden dummy bashed through the ground. The rookie ninja flinched at the moment as the dummy catapulted a pair of shuriken. "Oooof!" Daisuke's arm was pierced with the blades making a river of crimson water from his hand. "Gotcha..." Suddenly the shinobi's body exploded into smoke as a second Daisuke attached a letter bomb from behind the back of the future firewood. A loud boom shook the trees as the flames of the dummy were quickly stopped by a giant fan which he had swung. Only a drop of red stained the headband of the Crimson Ninja to match his hair and eyes.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 4:38 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 5:06 am
My RPC name is Homa Yun (Homa means Fire monster xd ) I'm srry but I have'nt picked a village yet but will get right on it.
Rp Sample:
Homa had been craving for something but did'nt know what it was. "What is it that I want? There is an emptiness inside of me that has been surpressed for so long."He thought to himself as he scratched his head. Homa stood up, ready to leave his abode for the day and maybe pick up a job that he wanted his entire life. "Today is the day that I join the academy." He said with a blank expression on his face. "I will kill anyone that gets in the way of my path, to stop me of becoming a ninja."
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:55 am
RP Sample:
She leapt into the darkness of the trees, the chilled wind blowing in her face. Step lightly, make little sound, she was taught. Too bad she usually forgot....
CRASH!
"Itai!" She whined. The small branch she had attempted to land on had no chance to support her as it crumbled under the pressure, sending Kawa into the bushes below.
She attempted to get out of the bushes, but only with the scrapes of the leaves that wanted to hold onto her. Kawa Ishida, the youngest of the Ishida family, and by far the clumsiest. It would be a miracle if she managed to become a Genin any time soon, but she refused to give up. She would become a ninja one day. She swore she’d make her father proud.
She gradually stood up under the pain and once again, leapt into the darkness above...
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 2:07 pm
.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.). RawrsFearMe Rp Sample!!!:Kiro walked through. I'm so freaking tired, maybe I should have slept longer... He walked into the Ramen Shop, "Maybe something interesting will happen..." He sat down, "I'll order... whatever, you choose." He didn't care what he ate all that much. He eat a lot anyways. He was just staying there to take up some time. "Nothing much has happened over the past few days..." complained Kiro. Day One, Boredom. Day 2, Boredom. Day 3, Boredom. He sighed, "Something will happen sooner or later, right?" _____________________________________________________________ If I did something wrong, I apoligize a whole bunch, and I'll fix it right away. ^^
Can you please make some corrections? I'll pass you after that.
If I didn't, could you bold what I did wrong?
I'm not good at sighting problems in my writing....
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:46 pm
Here goes...My character's name is Hemaku
RP SAMPLE
Hemaku was studying for his big exam. Although everyone else already knew everything, Hemaku decided to wait till the last minute to study. Hemaku was getting ready to finally become a Genin. The test was in two days. As he came across fatal areas his window shattered with a loud crash. two jounin from the sound village were standing in the street below looking up. Hemaku already knew these two posed a threat to him. One had kunai and the other had a shruiken, both looking up at Hemaku. Hemaku acted naturally and threw two kunai as fast and accurate as possible. But unfortunately, the jounin were much too fast to be hit with his lame attempts.
I spelled the best I could. Sorry if there are any misspelled
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 9:58 am
@Faeyas Ok, thats a nice one. Just at one point, it looked like your character was thinking about something at one point. Thought is displayed using Italics. (the part about step lightly). I don't have the authority to pass you but I think you should pass.
@Giabari >.> only Kinami will gripe about misspelling...I can't spell worth a crap either. Just use something like Microsoft Word or something if your a REALLY bad speller. Anyway, it seems decent although your sentences could use some work. Like the first one. It's a long drawn out sentence that would be better if it was broken up (probably at the point after the words "big exam".) This is really odd because your next couple of sentences are rather short. Other than that, seems ok. Hope you pass.
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 10:04 am
Ah! I see what you mean ^^; I can remember that!
Also, That's ok smile Thank you for looking!
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