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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:15 pm
Full Name: Angelica Makata Nicknames: Angel of the clouds Age: 16 Birthdate: May, 8th Gender: Female Ethnicity: Italian
Nindo: "Power is nothing without brains."
Personality: Sweet loving girl who is not easily tempered or sad.
Behavior:Quiet with people around and stuck in books all the time except in battle where she is the stragety girl.
Backstory: Angel was born into a strange family who loved nature more then anything at times. Her mother tended beautiful gardens and grew herbs most of the time or helped around the village when Angelica was very young. Her father was a great ninja who was in the Sub-branch and so is she but hasen't awaken her Baukygan yet. She was always interested in learning to become a ninja at a young age so she decided to start at the academy and passed a year earlier into genin of cloud! Her mother is a sweet, kind person who always called her the "Angel of the clouds" when she would do something good. Her father just called her cuppy-cake for her blond frosty type of hair and pale skin to camoflauge as a cupcake even with her white eyes as sprinkles! Her little brother tried eating her when he was 2 now she is 16 and he is 14.
Village: Cloud Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: (If applicable, please supply a link) Clan/Bloodline: Hyuuga clan[approved] Curse Mark: (If applicable, please supply a link)
Weapon of Choice: Bow and Arrows
Ninja Class:Weapon class
Strengths: --> Speed : --> Agility : --> Cunning:
Weaknesses: --> Low Attack Power [without weapon] : --> Weak bodied - Frailty: --> Close-combat:
Shinobi Skills: (Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark) • Can channel elemental chakra into their weapons to make them stronger. • Can see the lining of one's chakra and how strong they are. • grants the user 360 degree vision while bloodline is active
Chakra Element(s): Primary --> Fuuton
Chakra Color: Silver
Total Chakra Points: 25 ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental → Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) → Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) → Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) → Kai - Dispell → Wind - Fuuton Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Genjutsu Rank E - (Basic) → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Bloodline Abilities → → → ________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:
Primary Style: --> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles) ________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed: 6
Custom Weapon 1: Blessing of Nature
Weapon Type:Bow and Arrow Weapon Range: long range up to 50 yards Weapon Location:back
Weapon Description: This is the Blessing of Nature, which is a medium sized bow with 10 arrows that can be infused with the user's chakra for faster and deadler shots or element for deadlier shots. The bow was made in the deeped forest of rock country out of Metal scraps from a metal smith. It is able to be heated to extreme and hurtful[to current user] temperatures. Since the weapon can only be infused with element and chakra or be normal the current user MUST be medical class! All others will only have a normal bow. It was found by Sona Makata after her father had made it and left it in the attic of thier house for years to come.
Special Properties: Can be infused with chakra or element to become mroe deadlier but costs more chakra points.
Techniques
Maneuvers/u]
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles) ________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: | Arm | knot tied | blue Flack Jacket Style | Color: | none Kunai Holster Location | Color: | side | white for camoflauge Projectile Holster Location | Color: | next to kunai same color Scroll Holster Location | Color: | none
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 4 Makibishi: 10 Kunai: 5 Shuriken:5 Senbon: 10 Flash Bombs:4 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5.0 Weight: 94 pounds Body Build: frail but lean Eye Color: white Hair Color: blond Family: mother and father and baby brother Theme song: If everyone cared by Nickelback ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 D Rank: 0
Posting Format: [align=left][color=MediumOrchid][size=18][b][i]A[/i][/b][/size][/color][color=black][b][u]ngelica[/u][/b][/color] [color=MediumOrchid][size=18][b][i]H[/i][/b][/size][/color][color=black][b][u]yuuga[/u][/b][/color][/align] [u][size=11][color=MediumOrchid]Cloud|Weapon specialist|Hyuuga clan|Blessing of Nature[/color][/size][/u][imgright]http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e302/Maraga/elf-girl-with-sword-1.png[/imgright]
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:30 pm
You have been waiting for days due to the fact thats its not right...
Add you clan abilitys to your Shinobie skills
-Edit- You also need a link for your Weapon if it has been approved, if it hasnt then you can take the weapon off and add it with a link later
And I would recomend that you choose a diffrent third weakness a weapon class , and a taijutsu class being week at close combat is going to make you a easy target. this is only my advice you dont have to do this it is you RPC
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:50 pm
knew i forgot something xP
the weapon i'mm waiting for deil to approve he said to change the 10 to 50 yards so i did everything else on it was good xP
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:38 pm
Add grants the user 360 degree vision while bloodline is active, and once your Weapon is officaly approved add the link.
Other than that this profile is fine, you are good to go for RPing as long as you do those two things
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:09 pm
Ok. I updated my Shinobi Skills to add the two main things from Nara Clan that are described, that apply to my RPC.
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:26 pm
Ok your good to go man Gl with your RPing
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:37 pm
Full Name: Neo Valtieri Nicknames: The Black Demon Age: 15 Birthdate: June 8th Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese/European
Nindo: "An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, and evil for evil...."
Personality: Well-mannered and friendly enough, but distant at the same time. Neo is thoughtful, calm, and kind of hard working. "Kind of" because he'll really only do what he needs to do, no more and no less. Disciplined and intelligent, Neo is the type to think through things, but keep his thoughts to himself. His personality kind of resembles Vincente's in a way, minus the hot-headed part of course. His most distinguishing trait is probably his sense of justice. If anyone were to hurt him or someone he cherishes, the perpetrator had better watch out.
Behavior: Alone- Quiet and likes to think a lot. He is pretty thoughtful, unlike his younger brother Vincente, and likes to contemplate about, well, stuff. With Others- Neo often puts on a cheerful, kind face when in the company of others, especially his family. It isn't an act, he really does cherish them, but he often feels distant from them, probably because he feels as if no one can truly understand him and, in return, he cannot truly understand anyone other than himself. His distance applies with everyone, not just his family. Regarding in-family matters, he is the responsible older brother that just so happens to always side with the younger sister rather than the younger brother. Like Kageko, he is also known to pull tricks on Vincente, which could probably explain why the poor kid decided to become an assassin. In Combat- It is in combat that Neo earned himself the nickname "The Black Demon". Cunning, but strong, he is absolutely ruthless in his fighting tactics and will do anything to win, to become stronger. At times, when he is completely immersed in the fighting, he will be oblivious to everything but the fight and will ignore even the pleas of those closest to him. He enjoys the blood and gore of the battle almost as much as the adrenaline rush and excitement it brings him. Out of Combat- While out of combat, Neo tends to spend his time alone and in training. Of course, he'll act polite and friendly to whoever greets him, but he'd really rather be all by his lonesome little self, thinking about stuff. He's not cold. In fact, he's more comparable to a fire. A fire is warm and friendly, but doesn't allow anyone to get near it. Not unless that person wanted to feel pain.
Backstory: Neo was born into wealth, like his little brother Vincente. As kid's they often fought together, but Vincente couldn't fight with Neo forever, he became a haunted form and his fighting style was too mcuh for even his brother. Neo, even in the academy, was a fighter that could take on anyone. This lead to him rapidly turning into a genin. Like his brother and sister, he is destined to learn the spirit summons. He looked at life as if it were something easily toyed with in other's hands, but never his family, as his compassion for them runs deep, even deeper than the blood they shared. He even considered Kage blood, just because she was a Valtieri.
Village: Otogakure Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: (If applicable, please supply a link) Clan/Bloodline: (If applicable, please supply a link) Curse Mark: (If applicable, please supply a link)
Weapon of Choice: Katana
Ninja Class: Samurai
Strengths: --> Primary: Cunning --> Second: Strength --> Tertiary: Agility
Weaknesses: --> Primary: Poor Chakra Control --> Second: Low Variability of Attack --> Custom: seing a girl get hurt makes him mad and sloppy in a fight.
Shinobi Skills: (Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark) • Physically stronger than those of the same rank APART from Taijutsu class (may be at the same strength as medical class) • As Warriors of Discipline and Intelligence, Samurai learn all techniques 1 post sooner then others. • They CAN learn medical jutsus, BUT only up to 2 ranks below themselves (starting at Chuunin)
Chakra Element(s): Primary --> Fire
Chakra Color: Red
Total Chakra Points: 25 ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental → Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) → Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) → Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) → Kai - Dispell → Fire - Katon Rank E - (Basic) → → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Genjutsu Rank E - (Basic) → → →
Rank D - (Genin) → → →
Rank C - (Chuunin) → → →
Rank B - (Special Jounin) → → →
Rank A - (Jounin) → → →
Rank S - (Sannin/Kage) → → → Bloodline Abilities → → → ________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu/Weapon Styles Allowed:
Primary Style: --> Current level of Mastery:
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles) ________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed: 2
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Location:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Techniques
Maneuvers/u]
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles) ________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Tied to the right arm | Normal headband | Black with red plating | Flack Jacket Style | Color: A long overcoat that is usually open to reveal his well-toned muscles. | Black with blood-red flames on the shoulders and the bottom the of coat. | Kunai Holster Location | Color: A normal kunai holster on the upper right leg, facing outwards. This holster holds nine kunais. He also keeps one extra kunai hidden up his right sleeve and three more strapped in a holster behind his back, hidden by his coat. | Black with red clasps/buttons | Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left hip. Several projectiles are also hidden in the pockets of his long pants. His left sleeve also houses a senbon holster that holds five extra senbons. |Black with red clasps/buttons | Scroll Holster Location | Color: A holster capable of holding two small scrolls, side by side and vertical, is located to the right of the projector holster on the hip; it opens down. Her belt, which her projectile holster is strapped to, also has a scroll holster on the right side, horizontal, that is built into the belt; it opens to the right. | Black with red clasps/buttons |
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5 Makibishi: 10 Kunai: 13 Shuriken: 25 Senbon: 20 Flash Bombs: 5 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5'7 Weight: 172lbs Body Build: Athletic Eye Color: Red Hair Color: Black Family: The Valtieri Family, including the foster sister Kageko Theme song: Emergance of the Haunted ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 D Rank: 0
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:47 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:54 pm
not my fault he is hot T-T -pokes your brother- xd
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:57 pm
@Neo: So I glanced through your profile and everything seems okay. I'll just be needing you to add in a custom weakness before I can give you the final okay.
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:12 pm
Mint, is this how Crystal's going to act when she sees him xd ?
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:16 pm
The Ooc isnt needed please move long to the chatroom thread or PMs
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:36 pm
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