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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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 Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:17 pm
Masamune 5.0 I am a magic talking shuriken. I am not a Starmie and I am definitely not a villian. you're a Starmie, deal with it.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:12 pm
Chapter 44 Added!
Sorry if you all don't like the vows, not exactly my strong point
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:19 pm
Aw, it's all very romantic. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:20 pm
That was surprising.
I was like.. Oh no..
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:24 pm
It's another great update, well done:
Something I noticed:
" The lights were off and the air was heavy as he started planning. "
When I read this part, I first thought you were describing Koosei and FS's "honeymoon" xd . You know something like:
" The lights were off and the air was heavy as he started panting "
rofl pirate
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 6:39 pm
I was taken aback near the end. It was only at the sentence after it that I calmed down slightly. Good work.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:00 pm
It was very romantic, and the ending of the chapter was very good. Taking it from a serene romantic part with a lot of people, to a darker tone, with someone alone, planning for a war. Very nice.
I especially liked that I was the marrying man (I forget the name xd ), and I didn't know exactly how to do it. A nice touch, as well.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:19 pm
*Attempts to Start Roar* Who's ready for the final chapter!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:34 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Masamune 5.0 I am a magic talking shuriken. I am not a Starmie and I am definitely not a villian. you're a Starmie, deal with it. ForsakenSwordsman It's another great update, well done: Something I noticed: " The lights were off and the air was heavy as he started planning. " When I read this part, I first thought you were describing Koosei and FS's "honeymoon" xd . You know something like: " The lights were off and the air was heavy as he started panting " rofl pirate actually I noticed the same thing when I first read that. xd then I double checked and saw what he really meant. xd awesome chapter though, Seaphron. whee I've always loved wedding chapters, and yours is no exception. very well written, very romantic. heart everything a romantic-scene-addict could ask for. 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:02 pm
It really was good. But I'm tired of you breaking for the sake of the women!I DEMAND BLOODSHED.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 11:49 pm
Betman It really was good. But I'm tired of you breaking for the sake of the women!I DEMAND BLOODSHED.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 4:31 am
@Aku- Thanks.
@LF - XD Thanks
@FS - rofl I noticed that as well when I was rereading it.
@Masa - Thank you.
@Fish - Thanks, I cant think of the name either.
@Echo - Failed attempt my friend.
@Koosei - whee Thanks.
@Betman - Dont worry we are getting to that. Echo wasnt joking when he said who is ready for the final chapter.
@Tatsu - XD Yes, yes indeed.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:25 am
I loved the whole chapter, it was well written even the vows. Umm can we have some fighting now ? I need to get ideas , i have writers block and can't do the battle scene blaugh
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:25 am
Final Chapter Added! Well I guess it is time to say goodbye to Cult Team Go! It was a fun write and now here is the final instalment of it. I hope you all enjoyed it, I loved writing look forward to my next story soon (and I mean soon)
@Godstone - Thanks
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:29 am
Congrats! You worked hard and finished 45 chapters of Nintendo-y joy!
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