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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 3:50 pm
*Ocarina frowned*
case whike hair. gonk
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 8:47 am
ninja heart
(lol random)
I need to start being more active. D:
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:41 am
*lets go of Shadowkite's head*
that can be said for alot of us, but what are ya gonna do? school, work, personal lifes...
oh and awesome chapter lonewolf. I always laugh when I hear that baglebottom guy's name
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 4:53 pm
I think I'm going to start taking this Lonewolf's Dragoons book a lot more seriously. I would like to have it published one of these days. smile Imagine how cool it would be to go to a bookstore and see a paperback copy of Lonewolf's Dragoons. I can almost picture how the book cover would look: Dark purple paperback with a picture of Lonewolf standing tall with Violet standing on his shoulders and a picture of a wolf right above him, and various pictures beneath him from different parts of the story like Mortamus holding Lonewolf's throat over a cliff, a picture of the guild building, along with a picture of Hajimate looking off to the side, a picture of Locke grinning, etc.
I actually had a dream about that, to tell you the truth. Perhaps it was a vision..? Who knows. All I know is the cover looked badass. So yeah, I could use feedback from all of you guys to help me better the story. 3nodding
Also, I need a backround story from the following people pmed to me:
Ocarina
Lionheart
Shadowkite
Pana
Erim
Just pm me a small backround story of your character, telling me where they are from, if they have any family members, if not what happened to their family, where they learned their abilities, what is their social status? As in, are they a prince/princess? an orphan? etc. I just need a small backround story so I can find a way to incorporate these characters into the Lonewolf's Dragoons book. Most of it will be made up obviously, just make sure it makes sense. The backround stories I need the most are:
Pana, Lion, Erim and Shadowkite. I know absolutely nothing about these characters' backrounds. All I know is that shadowkite can shapeshift and is a sort of druid, and Pana is a demon princess
P.S. The backround stories must be from the old RP. Like when you first joined the guild.
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 6:47 pm
The_Legendary_Lonewolf I think I'm going to start taking this Lonewolf's Dragoons book a lot more seriously. I would like to have it published one of these days. smile Imagine how cool it would be to go to a bookstore and see a paperback copy of Lonewolf's Dragoons. I can almost picture how the book cover would look: Dark purple paperback with a picture of Lonewolf standing tall with Violet standing on his shoulders and a picture of a wolf right above him, and various pictures beneath him from different parts of the story like Mortamus holding Lonewolf's throat over a cliff, a picture of the guild building, along with a picture of Hajimate looking off to the side, a picture of Locke grinning, etc. I actually had a dream about that, to tell you the truth. Perhaps it was a vision..? Who knows. All I know is the cover looked badass. So yeah, I could use feedback from all of you guys to help me better the story. 3nodding Also, I need a backround story from the following people pmed to me: Ocarina Lionheart Shadowkite Pana Erim Just pm me a small backround story of your character, telling me where they are from, if they have any family members, if not what happened to their family, where they learned their abilities, what is their social status? As in, are they a prince/princess? an orphan? etc. I just need a small backround story so I can find a way to incorporate these characters into the Lonewolf's Dragoons book. Most of it will be made up obviously, just make sure it makes sense. The backround stories I need the most are: Pana, Lion, Erim and Shadowkite. I know absolutely nothing about these characters' backrounds. All I know is that shadowkite can shapeshift and is a sort of druid, and Pana is a demon princess P.S. The backround stories must be from the old RP. Like when you first joined the guild.Lonewolf's Dragoons the book. Holy friggin' crap, I'd love to see that!  I hope to see someday. just remember to give us autographed copies. wink
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:58 pm
I posted up a pic in the Art Gallery thread. Let me know what you guys think smile
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:16 am
Regardering publishing the book, make sure you are careful, expecailly with copyright. I think CLAMP might go after you for Violet's "similarity" to Chobits. But I still support the idea and look forward to reading all of it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 8:41 am
Chapter 18... review: OMG! How totally awesome. So many emotions to feel. Sadness, anger, humor, happiness, fear, and relief. Simply amazing. The fight scene was especially entertaning, but maybe thats because I was listening to The Chosen Ones at the same time. Regardless, a highly enteraining chapter full of details, emotions, suspence, and action that leaves you wondering,"What next?". I'm not gonna give anything away, but it is definately a chapter you should sit down and read with time, because it is long, but easy to get into and make you lose track of time. My chapter ratings: Action:5/5 Details:4.5/5 Humor:3/5 Drama:5/5 Captivity (ability to hold my intrest while reading): 5/5 OVERALL SCORE: 4.5/5
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 4:42 pm
Ocarina dude Chapter 18... review: OMG! How totally awesome. So many emotions to feel. Sadness, anger, humor, happiness, fear, and relief. Simply amazing. The fight scene was especially entertaning, but maybe thats because I was listening to The Chosen Ones at the same time. Regardless, a highly enteraining chapter full of details, emotions, suspence, and action that leaves you wondering,"What next?". I'm not gonna give anything away, but it is definately a chapter you should sit down and read with time, because it is long, but easy to get into and make you lose track of time. My chapter ratings: Action:5/5 Details:4.5/5 Humor:3/5 Drama:5/5 Captivity (ability to hold my intrest while reading): 5/5 OVERALL SCORE: 4.5/5 Wow, lol I'm very flattered. Thanks! mrgreen Stay tuned for the next chapter.
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 4:59 pm
The_Legendary_Lonewolf Ocarina dude Chapter 18... review: OMG! How totally awesome. So many emotions to feel. Sadness, anger, humor, happiness, fear, and relief. Simply amazing. The fight scene was especially entertaning, but maybe thats because I was listening to The Chosen Ones at the same time. Regardless, a highly enteraining chapter full of details, emotions, suspence, and action that leaves you wondering,"What next?". I'm not gonna give anything away, but it is definately a chapter you should sit down and read with time, because it is long, but easy to get into and make you lose track of time. My chapter ratings: Action:5/5 Details:4.5/5 Humor:3/5 Drama:5/5 Captivity (ability to hold my intrest while reading): 5/5 OVERALL SCORE: 4.5/5 Wow, lol I'm very flattered. Thanks! mrgreen Stay tuned for the next chapter. You're welcome, I only wrote what I thought.
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 4:59 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:20 pm
Kite! *gets glomped* mrgreen
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:28 pm
The_Legendary_Lonewolf Kite! *gets glomped* mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:31 pm
I'm doing good, I just added two new pics I drew into the art gallery. So what do you think of my book-in-the-making so far?
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:38 pm
There should be warning labels on the part someone might get sniffly over stare *ahem* But man Lone, you can write pretty darn good. *likes finally learning more about how the original members met*
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