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 Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:48 pm
Tatsuman Seaphron That sucks. Too bad, I am working on my new chapter so I am decently entertained. To be posted when? Forsaken will now only update on week ends, I don't know when Akuyoko's story will update next, so I need something to read. ... Neither do I ninja
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:48 pm
Most likely tommarow afternoon. I won't finish it tonight.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:50 pm
Oh, okay then, Seaphers. Hell, I might just stick around for a while then. xD
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 10:50 pm
Seaphron Most likely tommarow afternoon. I won't finish it tonight. Well, good luck with it. You haven't let us down yet, so what ever you're doing, it works.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 4:46 am
Ok i have read back and i will say there is nothing wrong with you adding the romence. It makes it more real as with the comedy and stuff. Your writing style is very unique which is good , don't let other's insecurity cloud your judgement or style. Anyways loved the preview, now i am back from panto land ,where the fairys kept playing with the trolls, darth moll fought Prince Gavin. Someone slipped a love potion to prince fredrick, the captain and a troll who look at me and got a crush going. I even had a go with a double light saber, and fought darth moll myself, I will be able to concentrate on the cult more.God it sounds like i was drunk or something but i promise you it's all true whee
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 11:22 am
Good update. Well written and there's a good bit of suspense.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 4:11 pm
They just wanted to make fun of you. People do that just to feel better about themselves, no biggie, Seaphron.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 4:34 pm
Seaphron To those who care the second post has been updated.
Alright about a week ago I had a few people in my Technical Theatre class look over my shoulder while I was writing. I had no idea till I heard them laughing and talking s**t about the chapter I was writing (The Proposal). Is there something wrong with writing romance or are they just jack a**? lol romance is ghey let's just let our race becum extinct kthxbai.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:13 pm
Seaphron To those who care the second post has been updated.
Alright about a week ago I had a few people in my Technical Theatre class look over my shoulder while I was writing. I had no idea till I heard them laughing and talking s**t about the chapter I was writing (The Proposal). Is there something wrong with writing romance or are they just jack a**? The problem with romance is that it makes some people feel uncomfortable, this is because they are childish people who still giggle when someone says boobies etc. There is no problem with your writing, in my opinion, you do a good job. These people are trying to make you feel bad about your work, because they know they could never hope to come close to writing like you do, they are jealous and angry that they don't have the guts to be creative and daring. Just continue to do whatever makes you happy, and remember that there are plenty of jealous morons out there, but very few people like yourself.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:18 pm
I just noticed that there's a subscribers list. Is it to late to um... subscribe?
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:10 pm
Sorry for not updating everyone, i had gotten a last minute invite to the movies and ended up going with them.
@Godstone - Souds like you had fun, welcome back!
@Masa - Thank you.
@FS - Yeah you are right. Now that I think about it I was just paranoid for a minute there. Thanks that helped alot.
Thanks to everyone except Wayne answering the question shouldn't let things get to me. XD I have decided to do In the Next Life first, I got a bunch of new ideas for it.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:11 pm
I'm a Dedicated Reader >_> need I remind you who the first person to post in here was? xd
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:13 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] I'm a Dedicated Reader >_> need I remind you who the first person to post in here was? xd Seaphron? xp
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:14 pm
Masamune 5.0 Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] I'm a Dedicated Reader >_> need I remind you who the first person to post in here was? xd Seaphron? xp stafoo Starmie boy. O:<
=P
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:16 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Masamune 5.0 Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] I'm a Dedicated Reader >_> need I remind you who the first person to post in here was? xd Seaphron? xp stafoo Starmie boy. O:<
=P I am a magic talking shuriken. I am not a Starmie and I am definitely not a villian.
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