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 Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:36 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:51 pm
:O I must have myself a look, then!
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:18 pm
o.o; er... so, did Xander's age have to be changed? I couldn't remember what age I set him at.
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:47 pm
Xander's Age is fine! biggrin
I'm liking this sexual tension between Xander and Adam, though! I'm actually tempted to press on to that.
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:56 pm
:3 okie dokie~
xD; I do too~ xP all was going good until Rikka came in. She's so wonderfully blunt, I love it<3
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:59 pm
Certainly an interesting read. Its great and I felt bad that Xander took Rikka's and Gwen's answer the wrong way. This is too good xd
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:26 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:30 pm
I thought it was TOTALLY interesting on how he did take it the wrong way, but I'd like to run with that! It's an obstacle that I'd like to see how Adam deals!
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:44 am
I agree its a wonderful conflict and so subtly done to start. A small misunderstnding keeping lovers apart. Very well played Koji biggrin
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:30 pm
Just wait until Alison's character comes in. Mass drama<3
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:51 pm
@Pen: why thank you~ xP I thought it would prove to be entertaining.
@Styk: XD; lol! Can't wait. What's better than drama in a story?
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 1:52 pm
NOTHING! lol
I'd like to see a love triangle go on. lol
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:26 pm
Love Triangle?
Drama?
Oh this I gotta see. XD
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:37 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:48 pm
AWESOME! It looks great! I can defintely see her personality shine through!
Wonderful use of perspective as well xd
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