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 Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 2:12 pm
Birdsong
[Birdsong stood, shocked. Her bright green eyes wide with disbelief]
"Dewburst, you can't let Doveflight just kill Willowstar!"
[She couldn't get over the fact that her leader was basically dying right in front of her eyes]
"Willowstar, please don't die. We'll run Doveflight out, but you can't die!"
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 2:44 pm
How will I die... Featherfoot''Willowstar!''She cried.[She ran over to the gray leader]''Oh Willowstar!Don't die please! We need you, to lead us, guide us, and help us!''[She panicked]Being eaten up by a lie fighting to protect my family?
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 2:47 pm
Birdsong
[Birdsong glanced over at the white she-cat, who seemed to be in as much of a panic as Birdsong was. She decided to trust her]
"Featherfoot, I need your help. We've got to find the Medicine Cat. Willowstar can't die! You understand?"
[Her heart racing, she shifted from paw to paw, willing Willowstar to hold on just a little longer]
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:00 pm
I lied..Featherfoot''Where is Berryblaze, Birdsong?''
[Panicking more now.Her heart was about to jump out of her chest.Just then, everything went dark.]
*Have I joined starclan already? No I mustn't have, I still hear Birdsong pacing back and forth.I must of fainted.*She thought. But I've done it to keep you safe.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:04 pm
Birdsong
[She leapt back in surprise. Featherfoot had fainted. Shaking her head, she let out a yowl]
"Berryblaze!! Berryblaze!! Willowstar's dying!! Hurry! Come quick!"
[Praying Berryblaze would hear her, she nudged Featherfoot]
"C'mon Featherfoot! Not you too!"
[She looked around, needing some cat, any cat, to help her]
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:17 pm
I lied....Featherfoot [She just lay there, with closed eyes, listening to everything around her.] But I've done it to keep you safe.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 4:06 pm
 Dewburst
[Dewburst's eyes were as emotionless as his voice as he responded to the little group of cats.]
"I'm sorry Willowstar, I agree with Birdsong. You can't do this." he mewed emotion returning to his face.
[He turned his face away, not wanting to let his clanmates see the pained expression on his face.
His claws fully extended into Doveflight's fur.
He could almost feel the beating of her heart.
Then he let out a low growl full of anguish.]
"Willowstar, for the sake of your pride... I.. will step down." he mewed locking eyes with her.
[With a deep sigh, he bent down to give Doveflight a few last words.]
"You threaten my leader, you threaten me. You are not my clanmate any longer, you are an enemy to my eyes. If I see you on Breezeclan territory.. Oh, you better hope I don't." he snarled into her ear.
[Turning his head away in disgust he stepped aside to watch.
If Willowstar said so, he'd jump in at any time to protect her.
His blue eyes chips of blue fire, he sat down, anger licking at his mind.]
  
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 5:08 pm
 [Berryblaze pelted out of his den with lightning speed, every hair in his smooth brown pelt standing on end. He had an array of herbs crammed into his jaws, as he'd heard everything that'd happened with Doveflight, Willowstar and Featherfoot. He glared darkly at Doveflight as he passed her on his way to the qeen and his leader. He placed an herb at Birdsong's paws.]
"Give this to Featherfoot once she rouses enough to respond. If she can't chew, do it for her, then let her eat the pulp. I'm sorry to make you do this, Birdsong, but I must tend to Willowstar." [The tabby tom dipped his head to the calico she-cat before pelting over to Willowstar. Oh, how ghastly thin and frail she looked; her age was finally catching up to her, Berryblaze thought with dismay as he set down coltsfoot, thyme, juniper berries and poppy seeds next to Willowstar. He began rapidely chewing up the juniper berries into a pulp, followed by the coltsfoot, and spitting them onto a leaf in front of him. He tried to mew soothing words to Willowstar between his chewing, his greenish brown eyes glittering with fear and pain. He couldn't stand seeing his leader like this.] "Stay with me, Willowstar. Doveflight is leaving, everything will be alright now...Pace your breathing, relax. I've got every herb that you could possibly need. Everything's going to be okay...Please, Willowstar. Don't give up on yourself like this. Don't give up on your Clan. BreezeClan needs you, Willowstar..."
(( Whoa snap. o Ao I wonder how Dicekit's gonna react...Cloverpaw's gonna be SHOCKED, lulz. ))
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 6:49 pm
Sanity has been my seams... _________________________________________________________ Doveflight___________________________[Doveflight hissed, pushing Dewburst away from her.] "Some clan you got here." [She mewed with a snort. she turned towards the rest of the cats.] "If you mouse-brained pieces of dung actually think that someone like me can beat Willowstar, you're madder than I!" [She smirked, turning back to the leader.] "Picking a fight, as frail as you are. That may be the most foolish choice i've ever seen, but you've got your honor. I like that, it gives a cat a good way to be remembered." [Her claws pried at the earth , as she raised her paw, letting out a snarl.] "Too bad i don't like you." ...Now they're gone. So I break.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 7:00 pm
Even after my mirror's been shattered... Dicekit+++++++++++++++++++++++++ [Dicekit's ears pricked at loud noise outside.] "Spadekit, i'm going to go check it out...stay here." [She padded out, into the camp clearing. She stared in awe. Her crazed mother stood, bristling, a sick smile on her face, matching her bloodshot eyes in a frightening manner that ran a shiver through Dicekit. A small twig snapped beneath her paw, and Doveflight instantly whipper her head around.] "What the- Oh, its you, Dicekit!" [Doveflight put one paw close to Willowstar's, and Dicekit tensed.] "Come watch mommy show you how you can become leader! That's what you want, right?! Come and learn, sweetie!" [The queen fell into a fit of cackles. Dicekit placed one paw in front of the other, padding slowly towards her mother.] "No. You've made life a dark forest for yourself and the whole clan..." [Dicekit felt herself strong, and confident. She raised her head and let out a snarl.] "I refuse to become a leader in such a horrible way!" [Doveflight's smile faded a little.] "Keep staring, daughter. You'll see plenty of this as a leader. Just one little thread from the end." [Dicekit's eyes widened, her pupils going to slits.] "Doveflight, stop!" [The queen shook her head, and lunged at Willowstar, her bloodshot eyes narrowed.]
...I still see the reflection.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 8:50 pm
ooc: ya know, I was thinking I was going to let Oak and Soft go on a grand adventure through clan territory while the other cats were out journeying, but with the journey only lasting a week, there really isn't enough time. So... I'll just write what they were planning.
See, Soft watches everything, so he knows what's happening. He knows a LOT of cats are infected (the majority who went to the gathering), and he mentioned it to Oak. Oak overreacts. She remembered the Soft was almost killed by a sick cat, and so she vowed to protect him. In her mind, as long as there are sick cats in the clan, her brother is in danger.
So she was going to take him out of the camp and try to take care of both of them for a while, but, being a kit, she wouldn't have succeeded and they'd have come back.
POLL: Should I time-skip and say they did leave for a while? Or just bag it?
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 11:03 pm
[Berryblaze gasped and jumped to his paws as Doveflight took a step forward his leader. His pelt fluffed out and claws unsheathed, the medicine cat hissed at the snow-white queen. When Dicekit appeared, Berryblaze was utterly horrified at how her mother spoke to her, and of what she spoke. How could any mother tell a kit about leading a Clan by killing its leader? It was sick-minded to even consider such a thing.]
"You twisted, fox-hearted piece of crowfood..." [The medicine cat whispered as he stared wide-eyed at the queen as she fell into a fit of cackles. He arched his back in defense and hissed, the fur along his spine spiking out. His claws dug into the earth as he nervously eyed Willowstar, Dicekit and Doveflight. He motioned with his tail and eyes for Birdsong to take Featherfoot and the others away as quickly as possible. Just then, he heard Dicekit yell out. As he whipped his head around, the tom caught sight of a snow-white pelt lunging for Willowstar. He parted his jaws in a desperate, pleading yowl.] "No!!"
[Instinct took over. His eyes, narrowed into slits, glistened with fury as he lunged snarling towards Doveflight, intercepting her leap for Willowstar. He crashed into her fluffy white body in an awkward manner, hissing as his breath escaped him as he collided with her. Having little battle training, the tom hissed and clawed at the queen, his moves sluggish from underuse. In the back of his mind, his conscious yowled at him for doing something so foolish. He cringed inwardly as he tried to claw Doveflight again.]
StarClan help me! Help Willowstar! Help BreezeClan!!
(( @Comet: Wanna kill Berryblaze? XD
I was thinking about it for a while already. Icepaw should be able to take over by now, right? It's been...several moons. I mean, she was there since before I joined the guild, so...It should be alright. > <
Besides, if you don't kill him, he'll do his best--which still sucks--in trying to delay Doveflight's murder of Willowstar. :3
If you do, make sure it's slow and painful, lol. I don't want a quick, abrupt death for him... o Ao;; ))
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 11:44 pm
 D u s k p a w“Never give up on something that you can't go a day without thinking about.”___________________________[Watching from a crowd of Clan cats gathering around Willowstar, couldn't help but stare at the scene, dumbfounded by the shere bloodlust in Doveflight's tone. She glanced at Dicekit, admiring her bravery, even against her own mother, as the queen cackled, and even go to the lengths of calling her out like that. Duskpaw cringed as the queen spoke grimly to her kit before turning back to Willowstar. As the white queen lunged for her aging leader, Duskpaw got ready to leap for the queen as well. She bunched her muscles and gave a running start, but skid to a startled halt as she saw Berryblaze intercept the queen mid-flight.]
“Berryblaze, no!”
[Duskpaw yowled, her olive-gold eyes glittering with rage and fear. She knew that, as a medicine cat, Berryblaze recieved no training as a warrior. The tom was about as skilled a fighter as the fresh-kill pile was alive. She lashed her tail and flexed her claws, snagging the ground beneath her paws and tearing it up.The brownish-gold she-cat apprentice could only watch in horror as a cat she regarded as one of the kindest and wisest of the Clans fought for his life, their Clan leader, and BreezeClan itself.]
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(( @Shorisha: That's a tough one to answer...Errm, perhaps you could just post that they're padding back to camp, and Oakkit is thinking about everything Softkit had told her while they were away. So, yeah, timeskip...Idk if that'll help. o Ao;;
@Comet & Timber: Can Comet, perhaps, take over Spadekit once again? It seems like Kaito (Spadekit's owner) is scarcely on, and the story between Cloverpaw, Dicekit and Doveflight seems to be developing quite rapidely while Spadekit is in a comatose-ish sleep most of the time. > A>;
Sorry, I just really would like to see the story keep unfolding, but Spadekit is required for that to happen. = A=; ))
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:29 am
Sanity has been my seams..._________________________________________________________ Doveflight___________________________ [Doveflight let out a loud snarl as she was knocked over by the medicine cat.She whirled up, and snatched Berryblaze, tossing the medicine cat to another side of the clearing.] "Don't you DARE interrupt me, you prissy flower-grabber!" [She hissed, and lunged, pinning him down. "All who oppose this rise pay with their LIVES!" [Doveflight snarled, smiling wickedly.] ...Now they're gone. So i break.
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 5:40 am
Even after my mirror's been shattered...Dicekit+++++++++++++++++++++++++ [Dicekit let out a cry of surprise. She begged her frozen limbs to move, but nothing came through. Suddenly, out of the corner of her eye, she saw Spadekit.] "Spadekit, no! Please, get back to the nursery where it's safe!" [The mottled kit stared at Dicekit, then at Doveflight. Two claw marks from Doveflight's earlier attack rested above her nose. The kit bristled, and snarled.] "No. She....must.......go." [Spadekit slowly said, and before Dicekit could even lift a paw to stop her, Spadekit lunged at Doveflight, grabbing a hold of the queen's shoulder with her teeth and claws.] "Spadekit!" [Dicekit finally was free to move again, and rushed, taking a hold of Doveflight's back leg and trying to do much damage as she could. Doveflight turned and snorted, kicking off Dicekit, flinging the kit into a nearby tree base with a loud SMACK! The queen's bloodshot eyes then rested upon Spadekit.] "You again! This time you're REALLY asking for it." [The queen shot her arm out, flinging Spadekit off. Spadekit attempted to get back up again, but Doveflight quickly snatched her up and tossed her at Dicekit.] "Now you two STAY. Watch mommy do her work." [The queen turned, prodding one paw at Berryblaze's chest.] "Now, where were we? Oh yes..." [Doveflight's paw rose in the air slowly, and she swung it at Berryblaze.]
(@rain- Wow, you and the rest of the forum sure like Doveflight's method of "justice". You guys are like, hiring me to kill your cats. This is actually quite funny. |D)
...I still see the reflection.
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