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For the range of your jutsu, does "In view" mean that you are within view of the target, or the target is within view of you, or both?

That RP sample is far too short. I realize that this is a fairly simple jutsu, but two sentences is unacceptable.

Rpc Name: Tensa Zangetsu
Name of Jutsu: Kurisutarurirīsu: Ookami getsuga, Crystal release: Wolf Fang
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu:
Jutsu's Element Crystal
Description:

The user makes a series seal placing chakra on to the floor using his/her feet. The 5 feet of earth directly in front of the user then crystallizes. The user then makes another seal as he/she places his/her chakra on to the floor once more, crafting a single wolf made of crystal, the wolf is the desired size of the user, as long as it is under five feet and it uses ALL of the crystal formed by the user at the begging of the jutsu. Only one wolf may be active at any given moment. The crystal wolf has a small mane running along the neck, the user can command the wolf to send the senbon-like hair on that mane to shoot out toward the enemy. (( I didn't add the claws/ fangs cause well... it's a wolf... if already has fangs/claws. ))

Rp Sample
A torrent of rain fell on the same field where Tensa had made his first kill, even though a long time had passed from that. He reached for his back pocket and put his anbu mask on with a sigh. He reached for his back pocket once more and took out a piece of clothing which, with his other hand he made a seal forming crystals on to the ground, crystallizing a few weeds that where in the edge of the area. He then made another seal as the crystal contracted together forming a three foot tall wolf from the base of the legs to the top of the head, he then gave the wolf the piece of clothing which he held on his mouth. “ Find that person for me please.” He told the wolf making its mission clear and direct; find that person even if it gets destroyed in the process. The wolf gave him a slight nod; it then raised its head and began sniffing the air, getting rid of all the unneeded smells. It then ran off signaling that it found the scent. Tensa understood the signal and ran off behind the jutsu.
~ Thirty Minutes Later ~
After the long trek through the forest the wolf looked back at its creator as it dropped the clothing piece meaning that they had reached the destination. Tense looked to the front as he saw a man with something strange on his back and a rack of scrolls placed as if they where machine gun bullets. “Akura…” Tensa growled as the wolf glared at the man. Akura took a step toward Tensa as the wolf darted at the man, it bit Akura in the forearm leaving a deep bite wound on his arm. “You filthy pest!” The Suna ninja growled between his breaths as he formed chakra strings with his good hand, he then attached the strings to the thing on his back, revealing a humanoid puppet, the puppet jumped of his back, cocking back it’s hand revealing a gun made of wood, the wolf quickly let go of Akura and ran back to Tensa, as the wolf went toward Tensa, akura made the puppet shoot whatever was in the barrel, releasing a large number of smashed makabishi pieces toward the wolf, making it shatter by the sheer number of the small weapons. Tensa growled at this and made another seal forming once more the crystal on the ground, the crystal then contracted forming another three foot tall wolf. “Kill him!” Tensa commanded as he remained in the same place while the wolf jumped toward the puppet, as the wolf jumped Akura took a scroll that was on the rack, he opened it and revealed another gun like weapon, this time a machine gun, with thirty senbon as its ammunition, he then made the puppet move it’s hand into the hip and toss five makabishi that where bind together by a paper bomb, but before it could be tossed Tensa used the remaining crystal from the first wolf to bind the puppet to the bomb. Meanwhile the new wolf shoot ten makabishi at Akura as it still ran toward him. “Very well…” He muttered as he opened another scroll summoning a lion puppet, he released the first puppet from his grip as it exploded thanks to the bomb.

The Makabishi that thrown by the wolf sliced through the newly summoned puppet but it wasn’t enough to destroy it. Akura made the lion puppet clash with the crystal wolf, but it wasn’t enough to destroy it and with its powerful jaws the crystal wolf snapped the lion’s neck, while this happened Akura ran for the reached the machine gun and began to shoot at the wolf destroying it, Tensa sighed at the destruction of his second puppet as he then resorted to use the Jutsu for a third time, he extended the crystal on to the floor once more and made it into another wolf, this time Akura began to shoot at Tensa with the senbon. “Defend” He commanded as the wolf’s crystal exterior grew thicker allowing it to fend off the incoming attack. Akura growled at this and ran off with a puff of smoke.




Approved Via Pm by Stormold as Hinote told me to do a few weeks ago!



Your Rank: Gennin/ As
Name of Jutsu: Kurisutarurirīsu: Raion no hōkō, Crystal Release: Lion's Roar
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: The user's palm.
Jutsu's Element: Crystal
Description:The user's fist makes three crystal shards which will begin to spin around the user's palm, he/she then applies his/her Raiton element chakra in the center of the three crystals, the chakra makes the shards spin even faster getting them electrically charged, once they are changed enough they will crash into each other releasing a lion like roar that is able to break D rank doton defensive jutsu. Once the shards meet they make a sharp edge charged with the user's chakra, the ser will then run toward his/her enemy, as he/she runs a sudden burst of raiton will shoot out of the shards, giving the user light burns in the arm, this burst gives the user a speed boost, the user then makes his/her way toward the enemy and impales, smashes, stabs or however they wish to harm their opponent. If the sparks his any earth it will become crystallized, ground, a jutsu or otherwise.
Rp Sample

Tensa sighed as the drops of rain hit his face ever so often, he looked to the side as he saw his target entering the area, and he quickly jumped back making a single seal, forcing three gray shards rise from the wet dirt. He then looked at his palm as the three crystal shards began to spin around his palm ever slowly causing sparks of electricity to form inside his hand, striking him more often than not. He quickly glanced at his enemy to make sure that he still had range on his side, because then his jutsu wouldn’t really work if he didn’t have a good running start. Effectively his enemy was far enough away for him to allow him to continue with the other parts of his technique. At that point the shards where going at a much more considerable speed, allowing the small sparks to lash out of the area, almost like a miniature chidori, he then placed his left hand on his right arm to allow a better flow of chakra on to the jutsu, as soon as he placed his hand the electrical charge of the jutsu was much greater than he could imagine. ‘So this is the power…’ He thought as he began to run toward his enemy with the charges of electricity smashing the ground, crystallizing where ever the bolts would hit. He quickly jumped and aimed his arm toward the enemy, suddenly the shards smashed together causing a sharp pain on Tansa’s arm, but as soon as the shards clamped together they released a loud noise that could only be matched to a lion’s roar, the blast of sound knocked the enemy down as Tensa came down on him smashing the sharp crystal on to his ribs, sending the shock of the jutsu into the enemies body.