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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 9:48 am
Actually, I don't think the last chatper was too short at all. It was written as a journal entry and I'd say it was just the right size for a journal entry. Way to take it into the first person POV dude..... does anybody know what the second person POV is? I think 3rd person POV is standard narrorator form.... so whats second?
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 12:43 pm
Started chapter 13. You can probably tell what it's about just by reading the title. I have to go to work now though and am running late. I'll be sure to finish it up tonight when I get back.
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:47 pm
I'll have to read it tomorrow, I go to work at 6 get off at 11:30. but thats okay, this'll be my third time, and honestly, I'm starting to adjust. besides, I'm one of the only CC's who's over 18, so I'm one of the few who can close the store because under 18 can only work til like 10pm or something. that late hour shift is one thing I think can safe me, especially after Dave had an office meeting with me. apparently I've been too friendly, and also too loud. I really can't help it. I'm just a loud person by nature. I have to be very aware not to speak loudly. But I get so caught up in something I lose focus and my volume goes up. apparently that doesn't go too well in the work place, and Dave had to write me warning. So I'm working on controlling my voice more. If he'd seen me 5 years ago, he wouldn't be complaining. but the late night shifts give me a leg up on the competition.... IE: my job position. But whatever. the weather is nice today. I got alot done, all I have left to do is practice my speech a few times. no biggie.
But yeah, I'll have to read your new chapter tomorrow. but I'm looking forward to it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 11:04 pm
Finished up chapter 13 3nodding
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 7:01 am
The_Legendary_Lonewolf Finished up chapter 13 3nodding Man, that was great. I damn near fell outta my chair when you said the sourage closet. that was great. Its always fun to hear the story of the dragoons. can't wait to hear about Violets intro.
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 11:34 pm
Just got back from the Final Fantasy 11 fan festival and man was that fun! Definately gonna go to these convention things a lot more often. I made a lot of new friends there. Anyways, too much stuff happened to put into words, so I'll just say I had a lot of fun and leave it at that. 3nodding mrgreen
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The_Legendary_Lonewolf Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:08 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:12 pm
glad you had fun. I'm going to the Trans Siberian Orchestra concert tonight. Woo-whoo! those who are unfamiliar or just think its a boring Orchestra, you're wrong. the TSO is one of the coolest concerts out there. Part story, part music, 100% sweet. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1vHRwmFc-1o&feature=relatedonce the story part is over you'll see the awesomeness. give it three minutes and 6 seconds to kick it up.
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 11:06 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:40 am
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Lionheart701 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:12 am
Hey, never seen you here before. Welcome to the guild. I hope everybody had a good Thanksgiving and some good stuffing to go with it, if you get my drift.
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:16 am
Lionheart701 Hey, never seen you here before. Welcome to the guild. I hope everybody had a good Thanksgiving and some good stuffing to go with it, if you get my drift. I don't get your drift. neutral Well, I had to work yesterday, so that sucked, but we had an early thanksgiving, so I got to eat, so that was nice. btw, while you're here, you seriously need to post lionheart.
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Lionheart701 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:23 am
Ocarina dude Lionheart701 Hey, never seen you here before. Welcome to the guild. I hope everybody had a good Thanksgiving and some good stuffing to go with it, if you get my drift. I don't get your drift. neutral Well, I had to work yesterday, so that sucked, but we had an early thanksgiving, so I got to eat, so that was nice. btw, while you're here, you seriously need to post lionheart. Yeah. I'm going to get to that right now since I have some time to myself. That sucks to be working yesterday but at least your not working today right? And by stuffing, I meant stuffing yourself with lots and lots of food. xd
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:34 am
Lionheart701 Ocarina dude Lionheart701 Hey, never seen you here before. Welcome to the guild. I hope everybody had a good Thanksgiving and some good stuffing to go with it, if you get my drift. I don't get your drift. neutral Well, I had to work yesterday, so that sucked, but we had an early thanksgiving, so I got to eat, so that was nice. btw, while you're here, you seriously need to post lionheart. Yeah. I'm going to get to that right now since I have some time to myself. That sucks to be working yesterday but at least your not working today right? And by stuffing, I meant stuffing yourself with lots and lots of food. xd ..... I do that everyday!
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Ocarina dude Vice Captain
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Lionheart701 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:40 am
Ocarina dude Lionheart701 Ocarina dude Lionheart701 Hey, never seen you here before. Welcome to the guild. I hope everybody had a good Thanksgiving and some good stuffing to go with it, if you get my drift. I don't get your drift. neutral Well, I had to work yesterday, so that sucked, but we had an early thanksgiving, so I got to eat, so that was nice. btw, while you're here, you seriously need to post lionheart. Yeah. I'm going to get to that right now since I have some time to myself. That sucks to be working yesterday but at least your not working today right? And by stuffing, I meant stuffing yourself with lots and lots of food. xd ..... I do that everyday! But wasn't yesterday a more special day?
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