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 Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 12:00 pm
My characters name is Kai Maikeru
RP sample: (I hope this will suffice)(edited)
"What whole did you crawl out of, rat!?" someone jeered from behind Kai.
"Did you do this?" He asked, still kneeling with his back to the invader.
"What of it? This village had it coming!" Another attacker chimed in.
"You’re dead." Kai commented as if it were a fact.
"What!? How dare you scum!" The attacker swung his broad sword intending to split his victim in half.
"Bastards!" rang Kai's enraged yell.
Pivoting to his feet while reaching out and grabbing his assaulters arm, twisting it up with a loud, audible pop. Turning on his left foot he let his right foot connect with his attacker's throat making the man spiral lifeless to the ground. Out of the corner of his eye, Kai saw the second mans sword cutting through the air at him. With speed greater then his opponent Kai dodged and landed a powerful punch to the torso, snapping the mans ribs like twigs.
"What are you?" inquired the attacker, out of breathe and gagging.
Kai handed a round-house kick to the mans neck, breaking it and watching the corpse fall to the ground.
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:59 pm
Lord Vincent Marquis "Hmm thats a very interesting talent, so do you have to speed up the molecules in your body or anything so that they can become how can I put it malleable enough to pass through objects?" Realizing he had gotten ahead of himself and hadn't even opened the door to his new room he put the key in the lock "Well here we go". He slowly opened the door and gazed in upon on the room, his eyes were instantly drawn to the window. He ran over to it and looked outside at the wonderful view of the school gardens. "This is wonderful, I think I'm going to like it here" He uttered softly. The then threw his bags on the bed and almost ran past the girl who had saved him. "Thank you so much!" he ran up to hug her but stopped in his tracks remembering his manners and somewhat shy. He then stated " Sorry for the rush but if your still interested in my powers come down to the gardens" and with that said he rushed down the stairs.
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:08 pm
xAdvent_Childx My characters name is Kai Maikeru RP sample: (I hope this will suffice) "What whole did you crawl out of, rat!?" someone jeered from behind Kai. "Did you do this?" He asked, still kneeling with his back to the invader. "What of it? This village had it coming!" Another attacker chimed in. "Your dead." Kai commented as if it were a fact. "what!? How dare you scum!" The attacker swumg his broad sword intending to split his victim in half. "Bastards!" rang Kai's enraged yell. Pivoting to his feet while reaching out and grabbing his assualters arm, twisting it up with a loud, audible pop. Turning on his left foot he let his right foot connect with his attacker's throat making the man spiral lifeless to the ground.
Can you please add some more detail and fix the minor errors you have in your post?Please and thank you?
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Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 4:05 pm
Itazuki stared at the huge fortress a few yards ahead of him. He looked up at the scalding sun.
Sweat was dripping down his face in rivers; he had been walking for days.
Now he had finally arrived at his destination, and he could avenge his family.
Letting his carefully placed shields down, he attemtped to sense any nearby auras.
If he was going to make it safely inside the heavily guarded castle,
he would have to be aware of the slightest presence.
”Here goes nothing.” He murmured as he stealthily made his way to the east wall.
He got over the wall easily enough, but the real challenge would be getting to the high tower undetected.
Deathly silent he crept through the first floor, rounding the corner, he came upon a tremendous stone staircase.He sensed someone nearby, creeping up the staircase he tried to survey her enemy. There was a gargantuan demon just around the corner. Raising his sword he prepared for battle, mustering up all his courage he stepped out of his hiding spot. “Prepare to die foul beast.” He barked as she ran at the monstrosity before her.
((Um to things before I begin my rp experience here what is a run-on and anything I could work on with my rp?))
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Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 1:37 am
My Character is Rowan Nightbane of Sunagakure, so here goes:
Rowan awoke to find himself underneath a tree, badly injured around the knuckles, as well as the insteps of his feet, due to all of the punches and kicks he had delivered to the training log during training. His wounds were bandaged, but still ached.
He reached into his pocket and withdrew two ibuprofen, popping them into his mouth and swallowing them, after which he shakily stood and looked over to the sensei who was observing him.
'That must be the person who bandaged me...' he thought as he walked over to the log and began throwing punches and kicks at it again, making dents, yet still wincing from the pain.
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 9:10 pm
Uliquiorra Itazuki stared at the huge fortress a few yards ahead of him. He looked up at the scalding sun. Sweat was dripping down his face in rivers; he had been walking for days. Now he had finally arrived at his destination, and he could avenge his family. Letting his carefully placed shields down, he attemtped to sense any nearby auras. If he was going to make it safely inside the heavily guarded castle, he would have to be aware of the slightest presence. ”Here goes nothing.” He murmured as he stealthily made his way to the east wall. He got over the wall easily enough, but the real challenge would be getting to the high tower undetected. Deathly silent he crept through the first floor, rounding the corner, he came upon a tremendous stone staircase.He sensed someone nearby, creeping up the staircase he tried to survey her enemy. There was a gargantuan demon just around the corner. Raising his sword he prepared for battle, mustering up all his courage he stepped out of his hiding spot. “Prepare to die foul beast.” He barked as she ran at the monstrosity before her. ((Um to things before I begin my rp experience here what is a run-on and anything I could work on with my rp?))
To answer your question, a run-on is a sentence that ought to be separated into two different ones. An example would be:
The dog ran around madly he was terrified of the new place he was brought to.
This phrase out to be The dog ran around madly. He was terrified.... Does that help?
Please re-edit this post once and try to fix the gender questioning, at the very least.
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Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 9:12 pm
JB the FF9 fanatic My Character is Rowan Nightbane of Sunagakure, so here goes: Rowan awoke to find himself underneath a tree, badly injured around the knuckles, as well as the insteps of his feet, due to all of the punches and kicks he had delivered to the training log during training. His wounds were bandaged, but still ached. He reached into his pocket and withdrew two ibuprofen, popping them into his mouth and swallowing them, after which he shakily stood and looked over to the sensei who was observing him. 'That must be the person who bandaged me...' he thought as he walked over to the log and began throwing punches and kicks at it again, making dents, yet still wincing from the pain.
Other than some wont for detail, it's perfectly fine. Pass.
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 8:22 am
Ok, I guess I'll post an example of my RPing. Hope this is good.
The wind gusted into the bar as the front doors were swung open by rhiko, who had just gotten back from a rather stressfull day of training. His stumbled gait, protested any further movment. He quickly sat down at the bar with a great sigh of relief. His body ached, and his head throbed. He wasted no time to place it sweaty forehead on the cold bar surface.
The cold soothed in headache, and he smiled a big grin. The bar keeper sat back, just watching. Then turned away and payed attention to his work. Rhiko didn't mind he was being ignored, he was thankful to say the least, he didn't want to talk, or be talked to. His training involved advanced genjutsu, and how to counter such. His headache originated from this.
(finish later...)
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 9:11 am
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:05 am
The learning of Henge no Justu
It was morning, Soji just arrived to the academy, as every day before.He entered his classroom and sat down at the firs row to the window.Bored while waiting for Iruka sensei, he kinda retired into him self thinking about what will they study today."It better not be some boring ninja theorys related to maths or something like that", he thought."I'm ready for real action now"
Right after that Iruka sensei walked into the classroom and attracked Sojis attention
"Good morning children, i'm sorry for beeing late, had something very important to do", he looks at his todays schedule.
"Ready for some action today?We'll be doing Henge no Jutsu today", he said
Soji changed his mood instantly when hearing that word(Henge no Jutsu)."All right!Finally some great activity", he thought
"Let me show u how it's done,first i'll slow my speed in preforming hand signs", he starts preforming the signs.After preforming the hand signs, suddenly there was a boom with smoke.Few seconds after, the 3rd hokage was standing in front of the class.
"see?it's not that hard", he said, transforming back to his original shape.
"Here i'll show it to you again", he said
Soji focused on senseis hand signs once again and started repeating them very slowly few times in a row until he figured out how to preform them quicker."I think i got it", soji thought
After transforming again he Iruka asked:"are there any volounteres?"
The second that sensei asked that question, soji raised his hand:"Can i do it Iruka sensei?", soji asked
"Of course, please come here Soji and show the class one more time"
Soji came to the sensei, turned to his classmates and preformed the hand signs quick and correct.Suddenly there was that boom with smoke again, and soji transformed into Iruka sensei, exact copy of him, in every detail.
Iruka sensei was amazed:"Excelent Soji, excelent job"
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:33 am
Hi there! My Character is Kross Sui! I'll do my best!
This is something I just thought up as a prologue of my RPC.
Becoming A Prism of the Rain - Kross
Kross was spinning uncontrolably in mid-air with his limbs awkwardly flying in random directions. He could not even muster up enough strength to regain control of his body, and so rocks flew astray from the expected line of fire. He fell to the ground, with a soft THUD, and mud splattering all over the place. Once again, he failed at the attempt of performing a new jutsu, which he calls "Shuri-Kunai Phantasm". It was dreadfully pouring out in the fields - the weather didnt seem to agree with him at all. Kross blamed the rain, often shouting out loud about how stupid it was to blind him in the middle of finishing "THE PERFECT JUTSU EVER MADE EVER!!"
Nobody ever thought Kross was loosing it. What he was doing was childsplay, as it really seemed so in reality. But Kross' grandfather knew that something greater than merely completing the technique, was the true deal of the boy for doing this.
Despite the fact that he was too young and too unexperienced to try flips in mid-air with a few rocks, he seemed to possess an intense, undying fire inside him. The 8 year old boy looked like he was gaining something even more after the repetative, but senseless falling. Something was pushing him farther and farther from his "supposed-to-be" limits, as a child. His grandfather let out a sigh, and posed calmly as if he wanted to say something of immense gravity to his grandson.
"The small fire will eventually evolve into an uncontrollable flame and soon, turn into rage," said his grandfather, as he immediately got Kross' attention. "Rage does not only burn whoever, or whatever foe it may come across. It will surely burn the fire starter as well."
Kross' stopped in the middle of another attempt of doing the Jutsu. He smiled at his grandfather and said, "Don't worry, grandpa. The rain always puts out the fire, right? I think that's why there's so much rain, because some of the fires in our village are still alive," a short silent ensemble passed by, and then Kross said, "10 years from now, grandpa! If the fire still isn't put out in our village," he stopped and bowed his head down.
After hearing what the boy just said, Kross' grandfather felt silly, and slightly uneasy.
"And what do you expect to do after 10 years, Kross?" Asked the old man in a slightly sarcastic kind of way.
"I will become..." He paused and turned his back on the old man, "A Prism of the Rain, grandpa! Just like my father was! And I promise, I will be the one to put out that Fire!" The rain turned into a drizzle. Kross looked up at the sky where the sun was, at this point, slowly showing itself. The old man was surprised by the boy's answer. He failed to notice that there were water droplets sliding down Kross' cheeks. What seemed to be rain droplets, in the eyes of others, were actually his tears in the eyes of the blue sky. The tears of a solid promise...
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:00 pm
Hello, My character's name is Akio Taiko, here goes:
Akio walked into the classroom, his spikey, brown hair bouncing with the rythm of his steps. He thought he was early, but to his amazement all of the seats were taken, by ONE single person! He almost fainted, when one of them spoke.
" Oh, I'm sorry ", he said. " I didn't think anyone would be here this early." As the strange man finished his sentence, all of the other ones disappeared. " Ohhh, I understand, Clone Jutsu.", Akio said intelligently. " Yes, very good. By the way, I'm Mr. Ayoma. Welcome to The Ninja Academy! ", As Mr. Ayoma said this, Akio knew that this was going to be the best year ever. He then took his seat, and waited for class to start.
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:25 pm
Im sorry, have i passed? I wasnt very sure if i did or not. Thanks!
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:50 pm
.(.Kitsune_Masakazu.). Uliquiorra Itazuki stared at the huge fortress a few yards ahead of him. He looked up at the scalding sun. Sweat was dripping down his face in rivers; he had been walking for days. Now he had finally arrived at his destination, and he could avenge his family. Letting his carefully placed shields down, he attemtped to sense any nearby auras. If he was going to make it safely inside the heavily guarded castle, he would have to be aware of the slightest presence. ”Here goes nothing.” He murmured as he stealthily made his way to the east wall. He got over the wall easily enough, but the real challenge would be getting to the high tower undetected. Deathly silent he crept through the first floor, rounding the corner, he came upon a tremendous stone staircase.He sensed someone nearby, creeping up the staircase he tried to survey her enemy. There was a gargantuan demon just around the corner. Raising his sword he prepared for battle, mustering up all his courage he stepped out of his hiding spot. “Prepare to die foul beast.” He barked as she ran at the monstrosity before her. ((Um to things before I begin my rp experience here what is a run-on and anything I could work on with my rp?))
To answer your question, a run-on is a sentence that ought to be separated into two different ones. An example would be:
The dog ran around madly he was terrified of the new place he was brought to.
This phrase out to be The dog ran around madly. He was terrified.... Does that help?
Please re-edit this post once and try to fix the gender questioning, at the very least.I was thinking about girls at the moment so please forgive me for my mistake is this acceptable:Itazuki stared at the huge fortress a few yards ahead of him. He looked up at the scalding sun. Sweat was dripping down his face in rivers; he had been walking for days. Now he had finally arrived at his destination, and he could avenge his family. Letting his carefully placed shields down, he attempted to sense any nearby auras. If he was going to make it safely inside the heavily guarded castle, he would have to be aware of the slightest presence. ”Here goes nothing.” He murmured as he stealthily made his way to the east wall. He got over the wall easily enough, but the real challenge would be getting to the high tower undetected. Deathly silent he crept through the first floor, rounding the corner, he came upon a tremendous stone staircase.He sensed someone nearby, creeping up the staircase he tried to survey his enemy. There was a gargantuan demon just around the corner. Raising his sword he prepared for battle, mustering up all his courage he stepped out of his hiding spot. “Prepare to die foul beast.” He barked as he ran at the monstrosity before him. ((Um to things before I begin my rp experience here what is a run-on and anything I could work on with my rp?))
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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 4:55 pm
So we can RP any subject, any time, any place? Oh, such possibilities...
They held up the sky, the buildings that flowed over the skyline like mountains in the countryside. The varying sizes were dizzying, as far as the eye could see, for miles and miles around there were just man-made structures. It was like any other city across the world; the streets were dirty, the air smelled of burning trash. From atop any building, the thick fog had not yet reached the cool wind, a wind that spread the scent of penthouse gardens that drank from the draining sunlight, several feet from the mass of shadows that draped the bottom-dwellers in darkness, none of them aware of the light that still remained in the amber sky.
It was dusk, the clouds billowing out from the horizon, the light of the sun piercing through them, a spectrum of colors glowing like a rainbow stretched across the atmosphere. It started from the horizon, a deep red, not quite like blood. It was a lighter red, clear and transparent like a jewel; a ruby shattered over the edges of the still-blinding light. On the other end of the sky, a dark violet, completely vacant of the brillaince that made the rest of the sky glow. It was almost a black tar, compressed clouds making it appear like a bubbling stew. Ever so often, the clouds would open up and a star would be seen, but just as it twinkled, the darkness swallowed it again. The sun would not give up its place among the buildings that fought to pull it down, the light choosing only a select few rooftops to take part in the last remnants of day.
A sprinkle could be felt. The clouds cooled the city from the long hot day with a delicate shower. Not truly enough to justify the umbrellas that occasionally popped out of the cars and buses that strolled by. The sun, even now, was warm, and it was the only thing the shadows could not hide, but the rain was a welcome comfort.
A single eye loomed over the fading features of the tattered roads. From that distance, the boy could truly see everything. It was uncertain how he had managed to climb to such an altitude, the highest and most unattainable position that could be attained within the village. The building was old; too old to support the day-to-day functions that once drew people to it. Now the building was condemned and abandoned, yet this young child looked as if he belonged there, amongst the dust and decaying wood.
The eye closed with the setting of the sun. The smile on his face signalled the beginning of the night, his body finally moving from its gargoylish position.
"Let's begin."
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