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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:41 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... @Tiger: It's the same thing here.
@Dante: I know but does it jump out at you? I mean, there are some really deep or irresistibly amusing entries in there~ *flails* ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx ... J-jump out at me? *stares at the haiku* ... Uh, no? I'm confused, what do you mean by jump out at me? gonk @Taiga: Wait, who's undergoing surgery?
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:45 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Does it amaze you, Dante? Does it amaze you?
I need to rewrite it. arrow ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:47 pm
You'll have to forgive Dante, he's dumb...
My fiancé is having an appendectomy.
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:50 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Does it amaze you, Dante? Does it amaze you?
I need to rewrite it. arrow ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx Good luck Naomi.@Taiga: Appendectomy... hmm... I've heard that somewhere before.
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:53 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Is he? Am I that blind to the obvious?
Anyway, I hope that the surgery goes well. *sends her best through the interwebz*
@Dante: Thank you~ I like the first line though so I might keep that. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:55 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Is he? Am I that blind to the obvious?
Anyway, I hope that the surgery goes well. *sends her best through the interwebz*
@Dante: Thank you~ I like the first line though so I might keep that. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx That rhymes.
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:04 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Okay, I'm getting somewhere - I think. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:26 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... *counts* I have three potential replacements. Bah, I like all of them now and I don't want to replace my original entry just yet.
*flails again*
Edit: Find them here. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:28 pm
The water in my dormitory ran out. gonk
@Naomi: Is there a limit per participant?
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:34 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Of course, there is. It's one per user and don't go putting in another via a mule~
I like my first try but I just want it to be good enough. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:47 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Of course, there is. It's one per user and don't go putting in another via a mule~
I like my first try but I just want it to be good enough. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx Ah, but you get to edit it, right?
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:53 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Yup, that's the only reason that I'm even trying to salvage my chances of winning. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:57 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Yup, that's the only reason that I'm even trying to salvage my chances of winning. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx So what did you edit in your... uh... Gaiku?
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:02 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Apart from removing the 's', I didn't change/replace it. I'm trying to convince myself that it's all in the name of fun - and forget that 200k is the first prize. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:05 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Apart from removing the 's', I didn't change/replace it. I'm trying to convince myself that it's all in the name of fun - and forget that 200k is the first prize. ...for not even I own it. ...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx 200k!? eek
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