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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:08 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:08 pm
Shiratori-Jane Gaiku - what the word? I need space to express it This need to do Gaia  xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Yup, I'm going up for the contest. What do you think? ...for not even I own it.
...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:13 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... The term "Gaikus" is probably the plural for "Gaiku" and the latter is what one gets when merging the words "Gaia" and "Haiku" - or at least, that's what I got from the annoucement and the blog.
Edit: I took out the 's'. ...for not even I own it.
...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:15 pm
Ah, it's a pun... Haikus are hard to make, mostly 'cause of the restriction in the number of syllables to be used.
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:15 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:17 pm
No, it are lies.
I has been to a hospital as a kid and the only means of... uh... cooling in the rooms is an electrical fan.
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:20 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Yeah but with the way that the contest is going, it is hardly original and the best of that supposed category occurred on the first page in my opinion. Thank God that we can edit it if we so desire.
Is it just me or is that haiku extremely sub-par? stare ...for not even I own it.
...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:24 pm
Shiratori-Jane xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... Yeah but with the way that the contest is going, it is hardly original and the best of that supposed category occurred on the first page in my opinion. Thank God that we can edit it if we so desire.
Is it just me or is that haiku extremely sub-par? stare ...for not even I own it.
...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:25 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... To me, it's a bit too simple. ...for not even I own it.
...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:27 pm
Dante_Shadowolf No, it are lies.
I has been to a hospital as a kid and the only means of... uh... cooling in the rooms is an electrical fan. But here in America, nearly all rooms are kept at cold temperatures to make the reproduction of bacteria decline to thusly slow the spread of infection. ><
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:34 pm
Taigaa-tono Dante_Shadowolf No, it are lies.
I has been to a hospital as a kid and the only means of... uh... cooling in the rooms is an electrical fan. But here in America, nearly all rooms are kept at cold temperatures to make the reproduction of bacteria decline to thusly slow the spread of infection. ><
But of course there are some hospitals that have air-conditioned rooms, but you'll only ever see bourgeois' using them.@Naomi: With the limited amount of syllable, I think all haikus are simple.
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:37 pm
xxxI promise my heart to no one... xxxxxxxx私 は だれ に も 心 を 約束 する... @Tiger: It's the same thing here.
@Dante: I know but does it jump out at you? I mean, there are some really deep or irresistibly amusing entries in there~ *flails* ...for not even I own it.
...も ない 私 は それ を 所有 し て いiます 。xxx
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:39 pm
Dante_Shadowolf Taigaa-tono Dante_Shadowolf No, it are lies.
I has been to a hospital as a kid and the only means of... uh... cooling in the rooms is an electrical fan. But here in America, nearly all rooms are kept at cold temperatures to make the reproduction of bacteria decline to thusly slow the spread of infection. ><
But of course there are some hospitals that have air-conditioned rooms, but you'll only ever see bourgeois' using them.@Naomi: With the limited amount of syllable, I think all haikus are simple.That doesn't make my original statement false. ><
@Nacchi: I knew there were other places, but I couldn't be arsed to research and list them all. xd
Well, at least he gets out of surgery soon~
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