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 Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:42 pm
Here is fine, but I'll warn you that you might be distracted by the Peanut Gallery should any of our other wonderful members decide to stick their nose in this. Lol.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:43 pm
STOCKFISCH As for character profiles, Buru Riki is now going into a total rewrite now that my planned mini-adventure is complete. It's time to see where my mind can take my most favorite character ever. I mean that too... this comes as a kinda special thanks to THIS community as-well. Because of this guild, and everyone within working as inspiration I was able to create a lasting character which I have used repeatedly in several stories AND D&D Campaigns. Granted every time he was slightly different, the general character design was the same. So... thank you for helping me create such a wonderful character. *waves hand* Details details
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:46 pm
To me in an RP details are everything. I love the stories my character are involved in so I tend to remember key elements that developed my character as a whole.
I'm thinking about having Buru be much older.
however...
in this guild, how much time has passed since Buru stopped being played actively?
Is it safe to assume at least like... 50 years or so?
EDIT:
My nose will be kept out of it. You ladies seem to have it handled.
3nodding
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:49 pm
Eh...not even that. I would actually say closer to 10-20, anywhere in there...but closer to 10.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:51 pm
<__<
Well 10 years in the HeucoMundo Forest can put a strain on a fella.
This will explain his white hair and slightly aged appearance.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:54 pm
But he's still gonna be eight feet tall. Haha. Oh my characters will get a kick out of that. Well, at least Kowabi and Aine. Both are small and smaller women.
Oh, just wanted to ask, but were you considering keeping any Vizard powers or not? I'm currently the leader of the group so I thought I'd ask.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:54 pm
There are peanuts now? emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:09 pm
Quote: (Not obtained yet) Shikai Name/Release Phrase: Bare your fangs Dokusei! Shikai Description: As soon as Mokoto finishes her release phrase her zanpakuto flashes a brilliant light, that can cause temporary blindness to any that are in the vicinity and are looking towards it (other than herself.) While the weapon flashes, the katana changes into a black leather whip. Inside the whip is a small but thick zanpakuto metal strip that helps keep the whip strong and less likely to break. The whip has a poison ivy vine décor around it that has extremely sharp thorns on the whip. These thorns have poison tips and poison is pumped to the tips from the handle that Mokoto holds. By simply feeding her reiatsu into the handle, poison is pumped into the thorn tips on the whip. Mokoto keeps her whip coiled up at her side when not in use. Shikai Powers: Mokoto gains poison manipulation in which she can control the poison that drips from her whip. She can turn the poison into any size walls (the bigger the wall the easier it is to shatter), small daggers, or simply keeping it in a liquid state.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:29 pm
From what I'm seeing, this is all plant and no poison...
Okay, when I hear poison I'm going to automatically think of something that effects the body and not a liquid substance that forms objects. If you haven't already put up your profile, I'll tell you now that you need to go into great details as to what this liquid can do. If she uses it to attack, how does she do so? What are the limitations of the liquid? Does it actually function as a type of poison? On the walls, really how large can the become in Shikai?
For Bankai...hmm, whips are a bit hard. Do you have anything about the character's power set that stands out? Like is she faster then she's physically powerful. Taking in those considerations helps in pushing towards an idea for just about any power development. But, if you'd like to keep it plant in nature, why not create a living plant that's a conglomeration of carnivorous plants in nature? It would be your weapon, stationary at first and spreading with spores or some other mechanism to move about.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:59 pm
Now I'm confused cat_gonk The only plant I've based the shikai on is the poison ivy vine. The poison comes in through the thorns on the whip and I was thinking maybe acidic poison, liquid poison is kind of like venom but I can understand where I need to be more detailed that's no problem. How does this sound?
The poison itself is acidic and can eat through almost anything if left on the substance long enough. Fabrics or ropes are eaten through relatively quickly where as metals and skin take a little longer (3-5 posts) to completely eat away. The poison can be washed off with water
The biggest the wall can become is eight feet high and ten feet long and keeping it in a liquid state on the ground causes the poison to act like a tar pit. So it would pretty much be a puddle of acidic poison.
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:34 pm
*peanut*
Is the poison water soluble? emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:44 pm
Yes I suppose so I mean it can be washed off so yeah it would make sense to say it was soluble in water, like salt cat_sweatdrop *hopes this makes sense*
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:56 pm
*peanut*
That means natsuki can have... DIPLOMATIC IMMUNITY!! from the poison aspect. emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 9:05 pm
cat_rofl So what else should I include? And I'm still not sure on bankai cat_crying
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:08 pm
I find it a little funny all the arrancar king applicants are female lol
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