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So which contests are you guys still going to try?
Random Number Generator, duh!
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The Art one--I want 1 mil!
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The writing one. Looks easy enough.
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Screenshot one. I get gold regardless!
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The comic one. Yay stick figures!
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Several of the above. o:
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Warrax1

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:57 am


Tasn Zheng
Honestly, I don't think Kuro's piece would be nearly as traumatizing as what Arc keeps thinking of.


I can only hope so. >.> I'm able to deal with mild to moderate trauma quite easily...its the severe trauma that Arc keeps hinting at that I worry about.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:03 am


Tasn and Warrax Forever. . . o.o

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:13 am


Oh yeah, since it feels like imagination is running through my veins right now, I can write a "very" detailed story on how you and Tasn's relationship should be if you allow me to. o.o

May I? o.o
PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:17 am


Hidden Arc
Oh yeah, since it feels like imagination is running through my veins right now, I can write a "very" detailed story on how you and Tasn's relationship should be if you allow me to. o.o

May I? o.o


>.> Absolutely not.

Warrax1

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:19 am


Warrax1
Hidden Arc
Oh yeah, since it feels like imagination is running through my veins right now, I can write a "very" detailed story on how you and Tasn's relationship should be if you allow me to. o.o

May I? o.o


>.> Absolutely not.

Alright.

I guess it'd be against the Tos anyway. <.<

x3
PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:59 am


o.O I really don't want to even know about it if it is against ToS.

Tasn Zheng

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Fluridly

PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 4:51 pm


Lololol, M!'s entry is awesome. xDD
/was drinking something and almost spat it out on my sis' keyboard while viewing. >,>
Congrats peoples~ >u>

EDIT: Thanks, Tasn~ <3
PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:27 pm


Well my artwork is going to be against ToS, too. xD;; And.. Idk, it may be as traumatizing as Arc says. It depends on how your take on it is. xD

Kuromaus

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Friendly Warlord

PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:21 pm


*hugs Kuro* o.o
PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:28 pm


Congrats to everyone!

And a late reply to critique: I have to agree about it needing more, and that's a problem I've been having lately. It's the same reason why Kit's and Maren's tale never goes anywhere: The center of the cake is baked, and then I try to fill in the edges with raw batter and bake the whole thing again. It does not make for a pretty cake or story. The dinner scene was the center in this case.


Jennivieve


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Erynne

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:10 pm


Should have submitted a doodle to get something. lol
PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:48 pm


Jennivieve
Congrats to everyone!

And a late reply to critique: I have to agree about it needing more, and that's a problem I've been having lately. It's the same reason why Kit's and Maren's tale never goes anywhere: The center of the cake is baked, and then I try to fill in the edges with raw batter and bake the whole thing again. It does not make for a pretty cake or story. The dinner scene was the center in this case.


Well my advice for short stories and stories as a whole is to not throw everything you know into one piece. Rather, use bits and pieces that are relevant or would make a tight story.

The main issue with the one you submitted was the length and descriptions of events or actions that weren't completely necessary. Had you just stuck to one scene and fleshed it out by putting in inner monologues or descriptions of feelings and looks, you could've made quite a good story. In the case of the dinner scene...I'll give you an example of what I mean sometime this weekend when I have the luxury of time to write.


@ Erynne: Probably. XD Thanks for participating anyway!

@Kuro: For some reason, I am less sensitive to art than writing, so I doubt it could be as traumatizing as anything Arc could write up.

Tasn Zheng

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Friendly Warlord

PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:30 pm


May I name your future birth child to Warrax, Tasn? o.o

I suggest the name Nigh-endae. o.o
PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:46 pm


xD That's true! I'll work on it when I find a day that I /don't/ sleep all day. Literally. x-x

Kuromaus

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:23 am


Arc...I don't even want to know how we could ever have children, given the contract and other *cough* anatomic difficulties.
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