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Reboot sounds fine to me. Would I be subject to using only Chenglei if I dropped Laxus, or could I have a different character in the place of Laxus?

Yay, Laxus is a conundrum! And for reference, Laxus' post is going to be him laughing that Kensei got hit. I still feel if Hinote one lined his post that it would still be a more relevant post than mine...

Chenglei doesn't have much of a place to post. Most he could do is single missions until he got enough to learn from Yasashii. Since you guys are playing around in the Oasis outside of town which Chenglei can't get to currently. sweatdrop As much as I'd love to threaten Greg's NPC with castration once more, I think that ship has sailed a small amount.

I don't think Laxus had any tactical value except to be the human punching bag. Which I'd like to say, I called before the mission even happened. xD

I'm sad that I can't find a decent evil clown, because I'm not certain if I want to actually use my Iuzuka and just have it be demolished by logic, or if I want my Laxus replacement to be a short circuited Lightning tossing genjutsu using jester. Maybe throw in a bit of a summoning, though it's summon would probably just be a deck of exploding cards with skulls on it. Or maybe an Ink user that has a deck of cards instead of a scroll with pictures on it for the ink artistry animation technique...

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Scratch that, I've found one, though it requires my character remain in a suit constantly.

I think you guys should skip me. Since Kensei is in a lot of pain and angry to talk.

I'm going to... I'm going to just go hit my head for a bit and then return to the computer to edit my post.

And it has been edited. Shikaku is (probably) free to reopen his eyes and take the lead out of the shopping center and to the Raikage's office.

Gear junkie?

Clones do breath. Even if they don't need air (Which I'm not sure whether to say they do or not, but they probably do.), they would still go through the physical motions of breathing, which would result in whatever bothers the user bothering them too. Only difference is that since they were made that way it wouldn't automatically destroy them, since their body believes it's supposed to be like that.

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Not too bad in the main portions. Unless they're shinobi though, they don't need a shinobi info section, and don't get types either. Instead, add a stat list to the bottom of their main description listing their regular stats. Since neither can apparently use chakra, their chakra related stats would all be low as possible or nonexistent. Any they actually use, are up to you. NPCs don't have to follow the stat requirements of RPCs, and can be varied as is appropriate to their roles. If possible, scrunch them up some, since their "Profile"s would go in the same thread as their shop.

Now, you just need to do the building itself. Make sure to remember to include where in the shop each NPC is and what their roles are.

Something to keep in mind for future NPCs. These should be kept basic and easy to use, such that anyone can just wander in and take one over if needed without the difference being overly obvious.

Ah, and while I remember... Why is the smith a disease to those he likes?

Ah, I see what you mean now. Yeah, a mechanic type is fine. A lot of the stuff I'm using with Shikaku now is things I wanted to make long ago for a techie of my own, but I never got around to it. I've been wanting to come up with an "Engineer" profession with benefits for that sort of thing, but haven't had it solidify in my mind yet as to how it should work. If you have any ideas on that, please share, because I'd love to add that aspect to the guild.

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If you're giving him a living quarters, go ahead and make it a multiple story building, yeah. Though the way we're setting it up (Maybe) he'd be in the business district, and there's another residential district entirely, so it might be better not to. If you do make it two story though, just make sure not to put the forge on the upper floor. =p

Not sure whether either would be hard to run or not yet, just something to keep in mind. Try to avoid too many unusual special traits too, like the whole pseudo-konaga bit you gave the girl. Like I said before, these are typical civilians, nobody overly special, though the smith being highly skilled in his trade is fine.

It took me awhile to figure out what you meant by Palsy when I read it originally. I don't think the word actually means anything but the health defect. Your usage is either slang, not a word, or spelled some other way I expect. I dunno, it just confused me a bit and stood out as odd, which isn't a good thing to do in a description since it hinders the flow of reading.