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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:14 pm
NonPlayerCharacter  Any suggestions for shading or anywhere that's lacking? Don't take this the wrong way. But it looks like he's stabing his jewel's. ^-^''
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:29 pm
Akemi Chikako NonPlayerCharacter  Any suggestions for shading or anywhere that's lacking? Don't take this the wrong way. But it looks like he's stabing his jewel's. ^-^''I didn't see that until you pointed it out. But now that I see it, it's true. The knife could be pointed a bit higher to avoid confusion.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:32 pm
Akemi Chikako NonPlayerCharacter  Any suggestions for shading or anywhere that's lacking? Don't take this the wrong way. But it looks like he's stabing his jewel's. ^-^''It does look like he wants to be a eunuch xd . Anyway, moveing the blade up a little should fix that.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 7:22 pm
Firething Akemi Chikako NonPlayerCharacter  Any suggestions for shading or anywhere that's lacking? Don't take this the wrong way. But it looks like he's stabing his jewel's. ^-^''It does look like he wants to be a eunuch xd . Anyway, moveing the blade up a little should fix that. I didn't realize this until it was pointed out, either o_O nothing very big from me, but you could make the shadows around his knees/legs could be a little darker. and thank you Oni for your kind words ^^
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 8:34 pm
Suprising no one else noticed it tell it was pointed out. xd
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 9:02 pm
Kero from ccs. I also made the hair edit. Any ideas on where to add shading?
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 11:49 pm
O-Tsuyu Hotaru Kero from ccs. I also made the hair edit. Any ideas on where to add shading?  Hello O-Tsuyu. You could add some shading to the inside of the ears, as well as do a little light outline around the outside of the hair to separate the back from the front hair. You could also outline the outfit (like what you did to the ears), since its really bright. That way, it helps to show the folds you already have there.
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 6:08 am
hehe, family jewels. I'll get to work on it. thank you alll for your input 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 6:10 am
Saga O-Tsuyu Hotaru Kero from ccs. I also made the hair edit. Any ideas on where to add shading?  Hello O-Tsuyu. You could add some shading to the inside of the ears, as well as do a little light outline around the outside of the hair to separate the back from the front hair. You could also outline the outfit (like what you did to the ears), since its really bright. That way, it helps to show the folds you already have there. Alright, i'll do that when I get the time.
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 4:29 pm
Ok, I have added the outlines around everything and the shading to the ears. Any other ideas to improve it?
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:19 am
The shirt seems a tad flat at the moment, a few creases/shadows wouldn't go amiss.
I also think you should try some deeper shadows, to help make the edit a little more round and realistic.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 4:30 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 4:48 am
cynbaby orchid fairyAt first I thought it was a human form of a chocobo. blaugh I like it but it seems faded. Add more defintion? But then again, I think that's your style.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 5:03 am
Demee cynbaby orchid fairyAt first I thought it was a human form of a chocobo. blaugh I like it but it seems faded. Add more defintion? But then again, I think that's your style. It proably could use more definition - and my style isn't the worlds best. Compared to most my style sucks.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 5:38 am
Vorty The shirt seems a tad flat at the moment, a few creases/shadows wouldn't go amiss. I also think you should try some deeper shadows, to help make the edit a little more round and realistic. Sorry, but don't really know what you mean by deeper shadows. sweatdrop
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