Kojima Shiro
Oh know Kojima has drank beer and he is only 16. D: He is a bad guy!
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... Anyway, drink responsibly.
I assume you meant 'no', a term of negation that is in this case coupled with 'oh' to indicate admonishment or disparity, as opposed to 'know', a state of being verb in reference to being aware of something. I also assume you meant to place a comma or exclamation mark after the word 'no', as 'Oh no' is an interjection. I will further assume that you meant 'drunk' rather than 'drank' because 'drunk' is the past perfect tense version of the word 'drink' which the context of your sentence establishes. In addition, I note that the proper word to precede 'drunk' is the word 'had', unless you are currently drinking beer, as the qualifier 'in the past' is implied, though it is strongly suggested such a qualifier is included to aid in comprehension of the sentence. It is again suggested that the qualifier 'now' be added to indicate a difference in the time period between the first half of the sentence, an indeterminate time in the past, and the second half, the present. I continue by assuming you meant to spell out the word sixteen because, though common usage would tell you otherwise, the literary rule is that numbers should be spelled out unless they are serial, meaning many numbers in a series separated by commas. I will then assume that in your first set of ellipses, you meant to have three periods, as it is otherwise a misplaced pair of periods and makes no contextual sense. Finally, I will assume that you did not intend for there to be ellipses starting the sentence 'Anyway, drink responsibly,' since ellipses should never be used to start a sentence, and that you did not intend to have a space afterward if you meant to use them in the narrative style where they are potentially accepted against common literary ruling. I will ignore that you have referred to yourself in the third person for no reason because clearly you are attempting to be sarcastic and failing because you are unaware of the proper method of writing a sentence.
The correct wording should appear as such:
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Oh no! Kojima had drunk beer in the past and he is only sixteen now. D: He is a bad guy!
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Anyway, drink responsibly.
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